"The story is an author who used to write comic plots, transformed into a light writer, although he started to write light and had some achievements, but later failed, and was taken in by his peers, and finally helped his companions win the first place at the comic festival, and understood the direction of his writing?"

In the spacious and bright living room, Ying Lili, who was sitting on the sofa, held the manuscript in her hand, looked at Kasumigaoka Shiyu with disdain and asked, "Are you sure this is not a true portrayal of your heart?" ”

Kasumigaoka Shiyu stroked her long hair, stood in front of Ying Lili, and said indifferently: "Only Sawamura will think that your brain circuit is a portrayal of my heart, the plot of the anime is different from reality, do you look the same as Ellie, are you really the Ellie who is pampered by her father all day long?" ”

"You!"

Ying Li Li angrily slapped the table and stood up, and snorted dissatisfiedly: "I thought you Xia Shizi would write what kind of plot, but I didn't expect such a simple plot?" How can such a plot be compared to the short story of Sei Senjumura? ”

"It's better than someone who can't even write, right?" Kasumigaoka Shiyu retorted unhappily.

"I also have some research on original plots, and I can write plots like yours!" Ying Lili also put up her waist unhappily.

This time, Mu Fan didn't refute Ying Lili, but put down the manuscript and said seriously: "Indeed, only such a plot seems to be a little difficult to win the Qianshou Village Zheng. ”

If there are plots that can be made into short comics, Mu Fan has a lot of memories in his memory, such as "Your Name" and "The Shape of Sound" in his previous life are very good plots, but this time he did not choose to write these plots. ”

Because, the flow of copying books will not necessarily always be the first, only being strong is king.

It is true that once in that world, perhaps the scripts of Makoto Shinkai and Hayao Miyazaki were almost impeccable, and people couldn't help but want to tears when they watched it, and they were deeply touched, but it can't be said that they are very good, and no one can surpass him in such a parallel world.

Not to mention others, the bald Wu Ke of the B1 production team they once knew might have written a good script.

Just like Mu Fan's copy of "Accelerating the World" and "Blessings for a Beautiful World", although the sales are good, there are still some difficulties in surpassing the Qianshou Village Zheng.

Perhaps, it is not impossible for Sei Senjumura to write a short story in such a world that will become a script that surpasses Makoto Shinkai.

But Kasumigaoka Shiyu really came to this point with her talent alone, if anything, the senior sister has just entered the university, and her writing is very strong and potential.

Therefore, Mu Fan planned that he would not participate in the revision of the comic script, and the entire plot would be taken care of by the senior sister alone.

After speaking, Mu Fan smiled again and added, "I guess the comic plot of the senior sister is not the only one, right?" ”

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's eyes lit up, and he came to Mu Fan, his narrow beautiful eyes narrowed, his hair hung down on his shoulders, stared at Mu Fan's eyes, and chuckled: "Sure enough, he is worthy of being a junior brother, you can see this, that's right, this is just an outline, the real plot needs to be written through the filling of the outline, and the simplicity of the short story lies in the fact that there is no need for so many branch plot filling, as long as the main line is integrated, and it can be moved and remembered with profound writing and sentences." ”

The gentle and elegant voice shocked Mu Fan's spirit, and when he raised his head, he just saw the face of the senior sister coming over, Mu Fan found that the senior sister's face was very delicate, and the greasy face did not contain a trace of impurities, fresh and refined, and beautiful.

Because the senior sister lowered her head and looked at her sitting on the chair, a few strands of soft hair happened to fall on the tip of Mu Fan's nose, and the fragrance of the girl mixed between the hair came, which made Mu Fan's heartbeat can't help but accelerate, and he lowered his head with a slightly red face, but he happened to see the two peaks and peaks of the senior sister who were about to come out with their tight clothes, even if they were covered by the underwear, they could still see the snow-white color of the corner of the perfect silhouette from a bird's-eye perspective.

Seeing that Mu Fan didn't speak for a long time, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu blinked his eyes in surprise and lowered his head, only then did he realize what Mu Fan had just seen, and his pretty face turned crimson, and he said angrily: "Senior brother, ..... lustful"

Hearing this, Mu Fan coughed embarrassedly, to be reasonable, what happened just now was completely force majeure, but no matter what, he also read it, no matter how he explained, he couldn't change this fact, he could only smile apologetically, and diverted the topic: "Senior sister, we only have four days left, let's talk about the new plot!" If the short comic wins first place, there is a chance that it will be made into a movie. ”

Yingli Lili, who was originally a little displeased when she saw Xiazhiqiu Shiyu approaching Mu Fan, immediately complied with the urging: "That's it, let's take out the plot and tell us quickly." ”

Seeing that Mu Fan was unwilling to continue on the topic just now, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu could only take out another stack of printed manuscripts from the cabinet and put them on the table: "This is the whole plot about short light comics. ”

Due to the tight time, Mu Fan and Ying Lili read carefully.

In Mu Fan's opinion, the whole plot is much more exciting than the big outline, after all, the outline only outlines the plot, and the same outline will be written in two completely different styles and charms in the hands of the great god author and the ordinary author, this is the gap between the authors.

Kasumigaoka Shiha writes about the text author [Rain Ichinose] who submitted to the manga festival with a man and a woman who grew up with [Mu Fan] and "Pear", and finally failed in the final of the manga festival and ended in second place.

Because of the failure, the online comic readers, who had been expecting the trio, saw that the unanimous discussion on the Internet was that the text was wrong, and left them despite the retention of Mufan and Riko.

Half a month later,Ichinose Rain contributed to the denukeki library and became the author of the denukeki library.,Although the first book has some results.,But because the expectations on the Internet are too high.,She can't figure out how to write the second book.。

Helpless, she meets her former companion again, hoping that she can return to the studio to rewrite the comics, and tells her that she has always believed in her texts and has never resented her for her last failure.

But Ichinose Yu has no plans to go back, and plans to prove her talent and prove her strength with light.

After the end of the first book, she has been looking for a way to write the second book, she looks at the comments on the Internet, sorts out the mistakes of the previous book, and writes the second book according to the way the reader thinks, the way others expect, but in the end it fails, and even all the readers who love her change from love to disgust, and even the editor no longer pays attention to her.

Rain Ichinose's heart fell from the highest expectation point in an instant after being destroyed by the readers, and it became the biggest disappointment.

At this moment, she remembered a few years ago, the failure of the companion comic festival, and the sarcasm on the Internet, she was disheartened and felt that she had betrayed her by only knowing how to write, and hid in the room for a few days and decided to jump into the river to end her useless life, but it happened that at this moment her companion was going to look for her, and when she saw this scene, she desperately jumped into the deep river to rescue her.

What follows is quite an inspirational plot.,In the comfort of the companion's enlightenment and persuasion.,And a lot of side balls and happy a few small stories.,Ichinose Rain decided to help his companions fulfill their wishes.,Began to carefully write a short text.,Because the manga festival is about to start.,Ichinose Rain didn't sleep for three days of text.,Finally finished writing before the manga festival.,The three of them worked together for three days to finally complete the short comic.。

And they also defeated the team that defeated them last time and won the first place, and finally won the best text Ichinose Rain said in an interview that she wanted to win the first place in the manga festival, and only now do she understand the importance of her partners, and with the company of her partners, she has succeeded, because she is no longer alone, and the whole story has changed from the original depression to an inspirational story of mutual encouragement between peers.

Moreover, when interviewing the male companion, the male companion said that the reason why he helped Ichinose Rain was because his relatives and friends who wanted to become a manga artist when he was a child did not support him, and only the same school Ichinose Rain has always given him encouragement, which made him come to this point, and he also wants to complete Ichinose Rain's ideal at this time.

Hearing this, Ichinose Rain was moved to tears, and finally plucked up the courage to confess to her male companion who had been helping her in an interview.

The male companion also stretched out his hand to her: "I have been in love with you since I was a child...."

In the end, the two came together because of love, and with the color of love that people yearn for, the story ends....

"Wait!"

After reading the whole plot, suddenly a dissatisfied cry came, Mu Fan and Kasumigaoka Shiyu turned around, only to see Ying Lili "snap" the text on the table, gritted his teeth and stared at Kasumigaoka Shiyu, and said unhappily: "Isn't it a bit too much for you, the three people in the studio, why can Ichinose Yu, who has been doing things all the time, get love, the [Pear] who has been helping Mu Fan and Ichinose Yu all the time in obscurity, doesn't even have a few lines!" ”