Chapter 461: The Essence of the Novel Transforms
Glancing at Yingli Pear, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu said disapprerovingly: "Her character is an obscure dedication, doing more things and talking less, and more lines can't reflect her spirit of selfless dedication." ”
"Even so, she likes [Mu Fan], why does it end up with her heartfelt blessing and Mu Fan is over?"
Ying Lili pointed to the above character and described: "Also, what kind of appearance is this, the bangs in the double ponytail are too long to cover the eyes and face, can you tell me what kind of fresh and refined face this is?" Even if there are few lines in the scene, the face is not exposed? You're too shameless, aren't you? ”
Kasumigaoka Shiyu hugged his arms and said indifferently: "In the plot, not showing your face can increase the mystery. Some supporting actresses meet the light dead. ”
Ying Ri said disdainfully: "Then why don't you design such a hairstyle for Ichinose Yu?" Let her be mysterious! ”
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Listening to the quarrel between the two women, Mu Fan put down the text, although this story seems simple, it is full of many special meanings in it.
And with the delicate writing of Kasumigaoka Shiyu, occasionally adding some slightly beautiful sentences, it looks very poetic and has the realistic color of the previous life KyoAni.
Especially at the beginning, the psychological description of the explosion of mentality regardless of [Mu Fan] to persuade Ichinose Rain, and later Ichinose Rain did not listen to Mu Fan's invitation, the kind of psychological attitude that desperately wants to prove his light talent and believes that writing in the direction expected by readers will definitely succeed.
In the end, when she suffered a blow, there was a change of attitude that the greater the expectation and the greater the disappointment, and in the end, Mu Fan, who jumped down desperately to save Ichinose Rain, said that he would go down with her even more tearfully.
Because Mu Fan has always remembered the help of Ichinose Rain when he was a child, he helped Ichinose Rain, and the selfless pear for love, has been silently loving Mu Fan, and in the end, he understood the love between Ichinose Rain and Mu Fan, and still did not say anything to silently bless their psychology.
Transformed the book from the original depression into a passionate friendship story and love story.
If it is shown with Ying Lili and his understanding of comics, and storyboards, it is enough to make people inadvertently teary-eyed.
"Senior sister, I feel that I should at least show a face to Pear, because your book describes passers-by with a face, but Pearson doesn't even have a face, as a female supporting actress, it seems to be really a bit mysterious." Mu Fan also agreed.
Ying Lili immediately agreed, glaring at Kasumigaoka Shiyu: "That's it, how do I feel that you are targeting this supporting actress, and the supporting actress has no human rights!" ”
"Okay, then let's turn her into a blue-haired single ponytail."
Hearing Mu Fan say so, and the comic festival is about to start, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu can only agree, anyway, modifying a person's appearance does not have much impact on the plot of the book, after the three of them have studied the character design, Mu Fan and Ying Lili began to draw comics.
Since Kasumigaoka Shiyu doesn't have any talent for comics, he can only watch the paintings of the two of them on the side, occasionally serving tea and pouring water next to him to maintain the mental state of Mu Fan and Ying Lili.
Seeing the hard-working Kasumigaoka Shiyu, this time it can make Yingli Pear happy, and he took this opportunity to keep opening his mouth to call his senior sister.
"Please help me get a drink."
"I'm hungry, I remember there's a supermarket near your house, go buy some chips."
"Can you not stand by Mu Fan's side and stare at him, it will disturb him to draw."
Kasumigaoka Shiyu, who had just come back from carrying a bag of snacks outside, heard Yinglili's call again, but was a little annoyed, stuffed a french fries into her mouth, and said coldly: "I advise you to spend your time playing me with comics, otherwise I won't be able to spare you if I can't catch up with the manga festival." ”
Looking at the pretty face of Kasumigaoka Shiyu gritting her teeth, Ying Lili recalled that there were less than four days left, and she understood the urgency of time in her heart, so she could only start concentrating on painting again.
For a whole day, Mu Fan and Ying Li Li were at Kasumigaoka Shiyu's house, but it took a lot of time to study the plot and character design, if you rush the draft, it may be too late tonight, Mu Fan can only call Lily and ask her to take care of the yarn fog, and decided to live with Ying Lili in Kasumigaoka Shiyu's house tonight.
Mu Fan and Ying Lili, Xiagaoka Shiyu Light Author and Painter all belong to the profession of staying up late for a long time, and it is nothing to stay up late once in a while.
In the evening, Mu Fan made some simple dishes, and after the three of them finished eating, they began to continue to code.
It was just ten o'clock when Mu Fan and Ying Lili felt that the whole room seemed to be much quieter than during the day.
"Strange, what about Senior Sister?"
The continuous silence made Mu Fan a little strange, and after thinking about this reason, he suddenly remembered the senior sister who had been serving him and Ying Lili, and it seemed that the senior sister hadn't appeared with them for a long time.
Mu Fan turned around in surprise, and just turned his head to see the senior sister who was asleep on the table, and suddenly couldn't laugh or cry.
It turned out that the senior sister was too tired to fall asleep.
Mu Fan didn't bother the senior sister, but took off his coat and walked over and draped it on the senior sister's body, normal people need to cover the quilt when they sleep at night, just like lying on the table If you don't put something on it to sleep, it's easy to catch a cold, wake up the senior sister, she probably won't be able to sleep, and there will be no problem with putting a dress on her.
Seeing Mu Fan leaving, Ying Lili turned around and saw that Mu Fan had dressed Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, Ying Lili was a little envious in her heart, and said, "Mu Fan, you are still as gentle as in the past." ”
Mu Fan smiled faintly: "Senior sister has been hit for the past seven days, resulting in not sleeping well, and I have been thinking about the plot of the short story for the past few days, it may be because we live here that she can sleep with peace of mind, let her sleep with peace of mind." ”
In fact, Mu Fan had long seen that the senior sister was a little tired, after all, her dark circles were getting heavier and heavier, especially the naturally beautiful senior sister, once there was a little flaw on her face, she could see it at a glance.
It can be said that the senior sister can fall asleep like this, Mu Fan is much more relieved.
Hearing Mu Fan's words, Ying Lili was stunned for a moment, and muttered to herself in her heart: "Although she has been hit, I am a little envious of her at this moment....."
Because this sentence was said by Ying Lili in his heart, Mu Fan didn't hear it, the two of them are now sitting at the same table, Mu Fan is on the left, and Ying Lili is painting on the right.
Mu Fan and Ying Li Li have been painting until 1 o'clock in the morning, because drawing comics is a laborious and brain-consuming physical work, even if they stay up all night today, they still don't have the strength to draw tomorrow, Mu Fan and Ying Li Li can only decide to rest at the same time at this time, sleep until tomorrow morning and continue to work.
They made a bunk on the ground and fell asleep next to each other without paying much attention, and the next day Mu Fan woke up and moved his body, but he felt that his body seemed to be restrained by something, and when he opened his eyes, he happened to see the quiet pretty face facing him.
At this time, Ying Lili untied her double ponytail when she went to bed last night, her long blond hair was scattered and then her shoulders, and with her soft and quiet sleeping state, she looked like a sleeping beauty, extremely sweet and pretty.
I really didn't expect that the English pear also had such a soft time.
Mu Fan couldn't help but smile, and when he moved his body, he realized that when he slept last night, Ying Lili dishonestly kicked the quilt away, and at this time, he was like an octopus, hugging his body tightly.
Faced with such a quiet and lovely sleeping position at this time, Mu Fan really couldn't bear to disturb her, so he could only decide to wait for her to usher in her, lying here and watching her quietly.
But Mu Fan's struggle just now had made Ying Lili's mind much clearer, and when she opened her eyes, she just saw Mu Fan's angular face, and felt that her arms and hands were holding Mu Fan, and her face immediately turned red.
"You're awake, Eiri-ri."
Seeing Ying Lili, a blush climbed on her fair face, and Mu Fan couldn't help but show a smile on his face.
"Yes."
Ying Lili nodded shyly, and then quickly withdrew her hand, but there were some deer in her heart, when she slept at home, there was a big bear on her big bed that could be held, but she didn't expect to sleep here and habitually use Mu Fan as a pillow.
And it happened to be seen by Mu Fan!
What a shame!
But in fact, Ying Lili thought too much, Mu Fan couldn't detect Ying Lili's inner thoughts, stood up, and said: "I accidentally bumped into you just now and disturbed your rest, it's still early, you can sleep again, I'll go make some breakfast, and we'll continue to work after you and your senior sister finish eating." ”
Seeing Mu Fan, who offered to make breakfast and leave after speaking, Ying Lili's heart warmed and smiled sweetly.
Mu Fan, he is really a gentle boy!