When Shahzad left, he took a lot of this world with him at the same time.

This world has accumulated for thousands of years, and people have summarized some valuable theories through step-by-step research and practice, as well as speculation, as well as various scientific and technological construction and design methods that transcend the world of the magic flute.

Shahzad recorded all the knowledge that she saw that could make the Rem Empire develop rapidly and prosper and become powerful in her mind and brought it back to the world of the Magic Flute, not only that, but she also went out last night and took advantage of the dead of night to steal some important information from some important military bases, which contained some powerful weapons production methods.

With these things, it will no longer be a pipe dream to make the Rem Empire the number one power in the world.

Whether it is the mighty Huang Empire or the prosperous Seven Seas Alliance, there will be nothing to fear.

Lin Yiran only knew that Shahzadeh had taken a lot of knowledge and theories from this world, but she didn't know that she dared to play with fire so much, and she was not afraid of being attacked, so she broke into a military base at night and stole important intelligence information.

Of course, even if he knew, he would never be able to stop it.

Even if Shahzad is only a doppelganger of the body, this world does not have the source of power of the magic flute world like rufu, and Shahzad's power is not one in ten, and he can easily hang Lin Yiran, who can't borrow the ability of the system, to fight.

Lin Yiran roughly calculated, and there was about half a distance between him and Shahzad.

Although it is only half a car short, you must know that the power of only six cars of Kensai is enough to be the captain of the Grim Reaper world, and its fist wind power can destroy all the surrounding buildings in an instant, and the wind power can spread throughout the entire Kuza Town City in the Grim Reaper world.

It can be seen that the gap between the half car is actually really big.

If you look at it in terms of the life gene index, the doppelganger of Shahzad alone is far more than ten points.

Between each other, it's really not on the same level.

When it was night, Qiu Wan'er sent a message to Lin Yiran.

"Look at how it goes, if you're not satisfied, I'm changing it."

According to the outline given by Lin Yiran, Qiu Wan'er has almost depicted the story.

"Okay."

replied to the other party, and Lin Yiran began to check the manuscript written by Qiu Wan'er.

Although he doesn't have the natural ability to write stories himself, it is easy to judge whether others write well or badly.

Perhaps this is the so-called fan of the authorities, and the bystanders are clear.

Qiu Wan'er's writing talent is really amazing, the writing is smooth, the description is delicate, the emotions are very natural, not jerky, not stiff, and the simple portrayal is very touching and deeply rooted in the hearts of the people, which makes Lin Yiran amazed.

Does this need to be changed?

No, there is no need to change it at all.

Lin Yiran couldn't find any flaws at all, just looking at these words, it was full of pictures, Lin Yiran could even clearly imagine those picture scenes, and even moved by it in the end, almost couldn't help crying.

Lin Yiran felt that if Qiu Wan'er could get resources to vigorously promote it, with her delicate writing and emotional indoctrination, she might be able to become a new generation of gods, and at that time, she might not have such a difficult time.

"After reading it, I am really very satisfied, I have to say that your level of writing stories is really good, you are not too old to portray such delicate emotions, it is amazing, I think you can try this path of writing, you are still young, there is a lot of room for development."

Lin Yiran replied to Qiu Wan'er.

Although this road is very boring and lonely, if Qiu Wan'er can endure and persevere, with her talent level, she will definitely come to the bittersweet one day in the future.

It's important to stick to this path, but talent is just as important.

Otherwise, it would be in vain no matter how to persevere, and Qiu Wan'er Tian had already won above the starting line.

"Don't think about it for now, let's talk about it later."

Qiu Wan'er replied to Lin Yiran.

She has already received a draft, and she will be ready to start work in two days, but she has no energy to do other things, although it is not her own work to help others write it, but at least it is safe and can support her current life, and it is too risky to fight for an unpredictable road by herself.

Although she has also thought about what well-known author she can become, experience the feeling of being loved by readers, and receive gifts from fans whenever she celebrates the New Year, the so-called dreams and wishes can only be carried out under the condition of being able to have conditions and capital.

Now she can only rely on the influence of some well-known figures to simply earn some living expenses.

"That's fine."

Lin Yiran replied again, closing the dialogue window with Qiu Wan'er, he couldn't influence Qiu Wan'er's opinion, what Qiu Wan'er wanted to do was her own business, and Lin Yiran couldn't care too much.

He then opened the Dianniang Literature website and uploaded the manuscript that Qiu Wan'er gave him.

This time, he didn't choose a short story, but directly chose the urban life type to upload.

Qiu Wan'er once told him that Dian Niang's short works are a little different from the regular ones, and they are basically suitable for the kind of works published in magazines.

Such as various fairy tales, children's books, etc., and the plot style of this work is not suitable for short stories.

And although the outline of the total plot given by Lin Yiran is not too long, if it is placed in the city, you can also add follow-up plots at any time and turn it into a long story.

After the encounter between Miyasui Sanye and Tachibana Taki, there is still a large degree of developability.

There are also two people's childhood.,And the shrine that Miyasui Sanye visited.,These can be brought up.。

After uploading the work once, Lin Yiran began to wait quietly for review.

Dianniang Literature Network, as one of the largest literary platforms, has a large number of works in the library every day.

And one of the most popular channels, the urban subdivision, also has hundreds of new books appearing every day.

As one of the reviewers of the Urban Channel, Lin Luo has to review a large number of new books every day.

The various works are uneven, and because of the large number, Lin Luo is really not in the mood to read every book.

Some of the writing is so bad that he really can't read it at all, it's just disgusting, and some of the plots are too mentally retarded, like paper in the toilet, which makes him want to vomit.

Although there are excellent works every day, there are also extreme works that make people want to say to the author, please don't upload them.

If you carefully browse these works one by one, Lin Luo feels that it is not a person, but a brave warrior, a god......

Neuropathy.

Lin Luo only glanced at these new works in the library, and if there were no particularly obvious violations, such as writing too explicitly, reflecting reality, plagiarism or something, it would generally be passed directly.

"Your name."

Lin landed in the stacks and saw a newly submitted work.

He felt that the author of such a title was simply stupid and cute, and this name had its own aura of persuasion.

Looking at the title to understand Nengrong, I should just want to know what the other party's name is, and what good things can be written.

Looking at this name, Lin Luo was not in the mood to see it, but in order to review the work, he still clicked in and watched.

Then, he was out of control and deeply intrigued.

( = Old Song)