The delicate text depiction is very picturesque, and I was attracted by the forest as soon as I saw it.

Originally, Lin Luo's review of the new book was basically a simple and cursory glance, but for this new book, he actually began to watch it carefully word by word.

He likes the control of the style very much, and it feels very warm and comfortable.

If you can have a comfortable writing, even if the narrative ability is not good, it will not make people feel like garbage at a glance, directly in the upper right corner.

Of course, if you have both, then you already have the potential to become a great god, as long as you work a little harder, you will eventually soar, it's just a matter of time.

Lin Luo found that this your name belongs to an excellent work that has both, and the more he looked back, the more he felt that the plot design was very smooth and ingenious, and the multiple branches were connected by a thread, which did not look cluttered at all.

The most important thing is that the characters are portrayed very vividly, not rigid, and the emotions are revealed naturally, which shows the author's intentions.

Generally speaking, the first chapter review of Dianniang only needs two or three thousand words, and a simple beginning is enough, but your name in this one is enough to upload more than 10,000 words.

When Lin Luo watched it, he was already completely attracted by the story, and he was in a state of self-forgetfulness, but he didn't realize that the number of words uploaded in this work was several times more than the ordinary standard.

He kept reading it like this, and reviewed more than 10,000 words, and he didn't feel any boredom at all.

Lin Luo's mood was constantly bullied, and he was moved by the plot, and even couldn't help but shed tears when he saw the pen engraved on each other's hands, and then forgot each other.

Crying.

He actually cried.

He couldn't believe that he would be moved by one film and be abused to tears.

He was afraid of being seen by the colleagues around him, so he hurriedly wiped the tears from the corners of his eyes.

"Will Sanye and Taki still think of each other?,How can I save the town of Isho who is destined to be impacted by the comet.。

Lin Luo was full of expectations for the later plot, so much so that now that it was time to finish eating, he didn't pay any attention to it.

"Lin Luo, it's time to eat."

Someone saw Lin Luo still sitting in front of the computer in a daze, indifferent, and came over to call him.

Lin Luo reacted at this time, he rubbed his face with both hands, and said, "I won't go out to eat, you can help me bring back a braised pork rice,"

"Lin Luo, how do I feel that you have changed."

The man looked at Lin Luo and said very strangely: "Suddenly I became very responsible and serious about my work." ”

"It's not that I'm serious, it's that the story is really good."

"What kind of book is so slippery, it attracts you as soon as it is uploaded."

"It's not a good title, it's called your name, but it's not important, the important thing is that the content is excellent, it's really good, and it makes you want to read it."

"Since you can say that, then after you have reviewed it, I have to take a good look, don't say anything, I'll go to dinner."

"Don't forget to bring me some braised pork rice."

After Lin Luo finished speaking, he continued to watch the work, this time no one disturbed, he finished reading the rest of the work in one go.

Seeing the last place, when the two met, his heart suddenly became much more comfortable.

Although he is single, he eats this dog food willingly

Wish, I often heard people say in the past, I wish that lovers will eventually become brothers and sisters, but this pair, it is obvious that Lin Luo does not want such a curse.

"I didn't expect that I would be willing to eat dog food."

Lin Luo sighed lightly and chose to pass this work.

It wasn't until this time that he found out that the author's name was Miyasui Sanye.,Isn't that the name of the heroine in the work.,And then he connected to this delicate writing.,Made a kind of speculation.。

Could it be that the author is a sister paper?

"If it's a beautiful author, it's amazing.,This work feels like it has the potential to become a god.,But now it seems that the number of words is too small.,It's developing too fast.,I don't know how the author should arrange it in the future.,More than 10,000 words, the two have already met.,It's long since the body exchange has been stopped.,There's a sense of déjà vu of the finale.,But since the shrine has been mentioned.,It's also said that those people in the Sanye family have experienced the exchange of bodies.,So it seems that there are still a lot of places to excavate.。

Anyway, Lin Luo is still looking forward to the follow-up development of this work.

Your name This work is not the first work that Lin Luo has been deeply attracted to, word by word review, he believes that it will definitely not be the last, he hopes that there will be more and more such works, so that online literature will become more and more beautiful, and there is no need to open it often, just like seeing toilet paper, there is a very disgusting feeling.

……

After uploading the work, Lin Yiran felt that the waiting process for review was too painful and long, and he had nothing to do, so he chose to open the game Eternal World.

"Luohua intends to go online.,It's just like we're going to the next copy.,Do you want to go."

As soon as Lin Yiran logged into the game, he found that a few days ago, a friend named Amber Heart, who had been in the mine together, sent him a message.

"Let's go."

Lin Yiran agreed to the other party.

When he accepted Amber Heart's invitation to team up, he discovered that there were two other teammates who had also gone to the mine together in the past, and two others he hadn't met.

Now these people have all been promoted to more than twenty levels, and only he himself is still hovering at sixteen levels.

Warrior, millennium: "Why put a sixteenth-level person in, what is the captain thinking." "Questioning emoji.

Someone is dissatisfied, and asks Amber Heart.

Mad demon, battlefield goblin: "What's wrong with level sixteen, the sister is in charge of the auxiliary buff, you still expect the girl to fight, are you a man." "Funny expression.

Dark mage, black-hearted pear: "That's it, how good is the girl's profession to assist, and you can also listen to the voice of the soft girl, isn't it great, by the way, sister, turn on the voice." ”

Lin Yiran subconsciously turned on the voice, he completely ignored that he was now Gongshui Sanye's body, which was too different from the original voice, and because of Gongshui Sanye's vocal cord problem, his current voice had a very strong accent, which could be easily heard, this is not authentic standard Mandarin.

Sure enough, as soon as Lin Yiran spoke, someone heard that the voice seemed to be a little wrong, which was a little different from what he heard when he went down to the mine for the first time.

Mad demon, battlefield goblin: "Is this girl's number a change of person, the voice feels different from before, the sugar content seems to be more, and the accent is quite serious, how can there be a feeling of neon people speaking Chinese." ”

"I didn't change people, it's still me, it's just that there have been some problems with my vocal cords recently, so that it has caused this appearance."

Hearing the mad demon speak, Lin Yiran reacted at this time, he was now using a three-leaf body, and he began to make up nonsense.

( = Old Song)