About something. (On the second volume of the Collapse of Writing.) )

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Writing this chapter, I mainly saw a book review of the two-headed snake eagle (and then I put it in the opinion building mainly to find it.) Pen & Fun & Pavilion www.biquge.info)

Pure newcomers, this has always been on the lips, but although they have been calling themselves pure newcomers now, if they haven't changed, they can only be called the streets over time.

I have carefully considered the outline of this book for half a year, and I am still revising it, but my pen is not strong, I can't write what I want to write, I can't write the atmosphere I want to write, and I can't reflect the climax I want to write.

These are the questions of this book.

To be honest, the second volume is really hard to write. The first few chapters were fine, but after that, I wanted to write a terrifying atmosphere, and it turned out to be ...... The plot that has been painstakingly prepared. It's completely written.

And there have been a lot of things going on recently, and I have to go abroad again in June. It makes me nervous.

But that didn't stop me.

In this book, what I want to do is to tell the story as much as I can, and finish it. Then, in the process of speaking, accumulate experience.

The writing is not good, and this book is my practice. This book is my endeavor.

But now it seems that opening the second volume so early is still a bit of a hurry after all.

After all, there are some things that have not yet been set perfectly.

I'm still troubled by the fact that I can't come up with an interesting ship.

In my novels, the plot is still built for the characters. Unlike Liuyuxi, he designed the characters for the plot. And I designed the plot for the characters.

And this, too, led to a result.

When I wanted to add a very distinctive character, I had to revise the entire outline.

It's nothing, but the trouble is that I'm a little out of control now.

So adding a character now, for me, is very difficult, and it's almost collapsed. Now it's just relying on the outline to stick to it. Use the outline to tell yourself what story I want to tell.

But I've written so much, do you think I'm thinking of a eunuch?

Naive

If you have an outline, you still need a eunuch......

Damnation.

I know I'm not writing well. Already pounced.

But I'm not going to give up.

This book will definitely be written.

Certain!

Maybe in the future, when I write other books, others will say that my book is black history

Who cares about him.

What is written, the world is written.

It's all because of our dreams, isn't it?

But will there be a high-definition remake in the future............ Well, who knows. It's not without precedent anyway.

But now the point is, I want some more detailed opinions, opinions on the characters, opinions on the plot. What I can change, I have changed, I can't understand, I'm sorry, I can't change it.

So please give us some more detailed comments.

I really, really wanted to write this book well