After posting that single chapter last night, it was Friday. Pen & Fun & Pavilion www.biquge.info stayed up all night. A dozen pieces of scratch paper were used. Finally came to a conclusion.

This book, the second volume, had to be restarted.

After all, I couldn't fully control and write the chapters I wanted to feel.

Leave it to harm others and yourself.

Now the problem is clear.

1. The atmosphere is not well written, and there is no feeling that I want. Affected, recently over-stated.

2. Logical problems. There are some things that are not in line with the outline. It's pretty damn

3. Loss of character. In the first volume, it was said that I was going to go out of the island, but now I have a more appropriate fantasy. The presence of the island wind becomes very embarrassing. Not only from a combat point of view, but also from a human point of view. Island Wind has become a dispensable person.

I've found a problem, but I can't fix it in a small way.

Let's overhaul it. Do these 70,000 words completely over again. I've been doing the wrong thing for a whole month. Tolerant of problems for a whole month.

But I couldn't take it anymore.

Some people may think that what is written now can only be regarded as improvised, so it is better to make do with it. Anyway, after giving it an orgasm, you might still be able to find the feeling?

But is it really possible?

Can I really make do and find a good feeling?

I don't think so. I don't think I can do it.

The excuse "I'm a newcomer" may still protect me now, but how long can I be a newcomer? If I keep writing like this......

Because I'm a newcomer, I have no experience. So some things still can't be avoided. For example, the second volume of the complete collapse.

Because I'm new, I need to improve, I need to improve. I need to be able to write the stories that I want to write, that I want you to see.

If a story is not very satisfying even to the author himself, then how can the reader be satisfied (that Otono Kisaka agent said otherwise)

So now it's my decision.

This book, recently updated, I used it to fill in the pit of monster hunting. After all, there are still some things that need to be coherent to have a feeling. It's easy to explain.

Volume II, with the following changes.

Chapters 1 - 4 with slight changes (I still think these chapters are pretty good)

The rest of the chapters are rewritten.

Plot - Overhaul.

Character deletion: Island Wind.

That's it.

Have any suggestions and comments. Waiting for you at any time, every message has a reply (but it would be better if it could be posted in the opinion building............ ）、

However, this is a notice of overhaul, not a eunuch notice, don't make a mistake!!!!!

There will be an update in the evening, so don't forget to read the first volume!!!!!! Updated in Volume 1!!!!!