() The author is not a veteran, let alone a god, and I just try to write a reasonable and good-looking novel, and if there are mistakes, I will accept them with an open mind and improve them seriously - as long as I don't find faults.

In addition, I will try to answer some questions.

Book friend Sanqing Shenguang's question: "But at the age of ten, he created the A-level ninjutsu of Spiral Pill?" When accepting the Kado task, he used the instantaneous technique directly in front of the three generations of Kakashi and others, and a shinobi crossed his own guidance and agreed to take the task, and this task was still Kakashi to take it, the author is not pretending to be too forced, is it considered that no one in his eyes is disrespectful, and the Hokage has not yet spoken to you, a shinobi who is still in the investigation period dares to overstep the line, what is this, Naruto is the son of the fourth generation, at this time, a few people know, and it is also said that Naruto has a wide network, and Naruto's nonsense can always be forgiven by the three generations, It's just that the three generations feel sorry for Naruto, as for what connections, Naruto's treatment in the village is a statement, and the most important point, the Shikamaru you wrote is just a traverser dressed in the name of Shikamaru, and has completely lost the characteristics and charm of Shikamaru! ”

To sum up, there are four problems.

The first is "The protagonist created the A-rank ninjutsu of Spiral Pill at the age of ten (actually twelve), which I think is unlikely." ”

Answer: This question, in fact, has been said in the book, I will explain it more seriously, the original book gives the spiral pill a very detailed learning method, from relying on the water vapor balloon to master the elements of gathering chakra in the palm of the hand and multiple rotations, and then using a ball like a leather ball to improve the power of the previous step, and finally using an ordinary balloon to stabilize the dìng compression chakra.

Of course, in the process, you still need to do it yourself, but in the case that the original book of these links has been explained, the rest is to need continuous practice, in fact, it takes hard work rather than intelligence, if I know all the ingredients and steps of Coca-Cola, even if I do it every day, I have to understand the proportion problem! ^_^

The second question: When he took over the mission of the country of Daznabo, Shikamaru seemed to act in a way that was disrespectful and pretended to be too much.

For example, someone hires a nanny for his family, and he is not satisfied with the nanny after meeting, and asks the intermediary company to change people, and the intermediary company can explain and say good things for the nanny, but when he names an idle nanny, can the intermediary company directly refuse this? (The buyer does not have unreasonable requirements~)

"You've got to use him!" It is impossible for Konoha to do this, after all, he is not a monopoly organization, and there are many small ninja villages and the same five ninja villages to choose from, and Konoha's advantage is reputation - the strength and status of the five great ninja villages have brought credibility.

Dazna has already named the tenth class to protect, it can be said that this task has actually been decided, both the Hokage and Asma know this, although Shikamaru's behavior is a little eager, but he also looked at Asma's attitude, and only after getting the acquiescence did he speak, even if Asma said that he stopped Shikamaru at that time, Shikamaru could also attribute his use of the teleportation technique to stop Naruto to prevent Naruto from clashing with the client, which is also a very normal move, not "pretending to be too much". But in general, Shikamaru is a little eager to target the country of waves, but it is not out of line.

The third question: Naruto's connections, the experience of loneliness in childhood.

Answer: The tragic experience I have already answered in the first few chapters, when the four generations of Hokage fell, many people because they don't know the masked man's existence, blame the appearance of the nine-tailed demon fox, blame the four generations of Hokage for not guarding his human pillar wife, although it is difficult to blame the four generations who have been sacrificed, but anger at people is actually the shortcomings of many people, Naruto's childhood loneliness experience, related to this, but that's all, Nara Shikahisa and other people who are familiar with the four generations of Hokage, although it is unlikely to resent this child, But to truly forgive the four generations of the director zhì Nine-Tails who went berserk and sacrificed many comrades-in-arms, there is still a mustard in my heart, in fact, the most important thing is that the human pillar force is really dangerous, if I know that a child around my home has a nuclear bomb sealed in his body, I will move to the ...... of other provinces, let alone let my family communicate with him ...... with confidence.

But there are two sides to everything, from the time Naruto became a shinobi to steal the Book of Seals, but instead of being punished, he was given a forehead guard (can you think of an ordinary person stealing a state secret text jiàn - even if this text jiàn was forged to attract another traitor - and ended up with no punishment at all!). ）。 After that, he was accepted as a disciple by Jiraiya, and his strength improved by leaps and bounds, but in fact, it was not related to the identity of the four generations of Hokage and Human Pillar Force? As for his own BT chakra, I won't talk about ......, but the reason why I don't like the second part of the Hokage is because Naruto's hard work and persistence (insisting on ninja, not a good friend) can't feel it.

One last question: The protagonist's xìng character and style, "Is a hardworking, no trouble in his mouth, a positive and deep Shikamaru still the Shikamaru we love?" "I think that the protagonist has lost the characteristics of Shikamaru in the original book.

Actually, I'm a little too lazy to answer this question, but another book friend "Dajue" also asked a similar question, so I'll answer it. Shikamaru's xìng is indeed lazy, but this is not to say that he is like a waste of firewood, in fact, he is indeed a type of person who can be relied on at critical moments, his heart and mouth are different, in fact, he is quite apt to say that he is also the key, which is also the key to his ability to become a shinobi in the first place, and in the second part, his xìng personality has changed a lot, becoming more responsible, not deliberately liking to pretend to be X, pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, but a conflict between his own wishes and rational responsibilities.

But these are actually not enough, after reading the original work, I naturally understand how terrible the future enemy is, not to mention the far, I love Luo in the middle ninja exam, if you follow the original work xìng Ge Shikamaru, there is no such hard practice and hone of the protagonists now, unless you open the golden finger, there is no room to fight back, if there is a deviation from the original work, you bump into them during the middle ninja exam, it's a dead word!

Isn't it positive to do things, is it possible that when I see my Airo, a negative, and mouthful of "trouble is dead", Shikamaru can suddenly erupt, use the shadow crack, all kinds of advanced ninjutsu, and defeat the other party - in contrast, the protagonist who is active is twelve years old to make a spiral pill is a little more possible.

In fact, fandom works,Isn't it in the original structure.,See different novelties? If I write Shikamaru according to the original book, without changing, without colliding and changing with the original plot, it will be no different from watching the text version of the Hokage.

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The above is the answer to the question of "Sanqing Shenguang" of book friends, I don't know if you are satisfied now? Hehe, everyone is welcome to post a long review in the book review area, I will distribute jīng Hua, and if the content is very good, I will also post it to the work.