When I first saw your book review of "Big Tomcat", to be honest, I was a little upset, but after a careful look at the content, I found that it turned out to be an old reader, but I was still a little uncomfortable with your accusation, to be honest.

About sincerity,I'm afraid you and I have different views.,At that time, when I started writing at a certain point,Because I had just been demobilized,Suddenly liberated from the pressure.,I thought of writing a book.,It's just because of the book shortage at the time.,On a whim.,Except for Asma's assessment of the protagonist's team with cigarettes.,Later,In fact, I wrote with a boring and coping attitude.,At that time, I was playing very hapi.,Writing books doesn't make money.,It's really difficult to write sincerely.。

I'm sure you still remember the "............" segments that appeared at every turn at that time, in fact, I thought about learning the method of "-plot segments-" to make up the ...... of the word count.

At that time, I thought of Zongheng, firstly, because the page at a certain point was becoming more and more disgusting, and secondly, because I flipped through the first version of Kinoshita at that time, and the result was only one feeling - a strong complaint!

At that time, many readers commented, saying that the first edition of Kinoshita completely collapsed in the later period, but because of the mentality at the time, I didn't care much, until the mentality changed, and found that this writing, even I couldn't read it myself......, and the collection was still strong, so that I didn't want to give up this book, and I was already working at the time, and suddenly found that when I was writing a book, reading readers' book reviews, and thinking about code words, although it was also very hard, but it made me feel a lot more at ease.

In fact, if you have written a serial novel, you should have an experience that compared to skipping paragraphs, conceiving the environment, figuring out the context and psychological activities, and the idea of fighting, which is more difficult and troublesome.

And to be honest, the revised version of the country of waves, although it is still not as good as the skills of many mature authors, but the author is personally very satisfied, because it is really written with heart, the first version of the country of waves, the establishment of Shikamaru Bridge, did not write at all the influence and shock of the protagonist on the country of waves, Dazna and Inari, as well as the changes that may occur in the country of waves in the future and the foreshadowing of the protagonist's involvement, if it is a comic, with the help of visuals, the actions and expressions of the protagonist and others, combined with the context, can naturally achieve the atmosphere lightly, But the novel is not good, it is not foreshadowing, it is as straightforward as writing an essay for elementary school students, and it is dry and uninteresting to read.

The only thing that said that the revised version made me unhappy,It's the content of the last two chapters of the written test.,Because some of the provisions of the middle ninja exam need to be turned over the original book.,There may be some sense of déjà vu.,But if you want to skip it with an ellipsis,The author is reluctant.,Because if you don't want to come to the plain narrative.,Often skip paragraphs.,You need to constantly conceive of environmental characters, etc.,It's easy to think stuck.,Can't write.,The author's pen is not enough.,It's easy to jump out of the same situation as the first version - everyone still remembers that in the first edition at that time,Shikamaru was promoted to the upper ninja., I wanted to write about the upper ninja assessment process, but because I was too lazy to conceive, the chapter that I skipped directly...... including the strength of Shikamaru in the later stage, is actually the result of often playing skip segments......

In fact, if you really want to play plain narration, play skip paragraphs, the author can also do it, but this is meaningless, I once said, this book is not on the shelves - it may seem a little ashamed, after all, there are indicators on the shelves, but Suo xìng book friends are more powerful, collections, clicks and red tickets are growing slowly but firmly this (black tickets are also rising, hey!) But I don't want to cut corners because of this, come to an outline flow or something, and end the book quickly, I still want to try to write this book well, write it carefully, write carefully, don't deal with it, and don't be impetuous, in my mind, this book should be written at least a million words, secretly spoiler, my outline has been set until the fifth ninja war......

So, to say that I am slow to update, admit it, after all, I have a job and I have to eat, but to say that my revised version is coping and perfunctory, this is firmly denied.

Or rather, Tomcat, before I'm ready to finish writing this book in a million words, you must accuse me! Just use what I said, this promise! ^_^

(PS: Today's night shift, go to bed immediately, you don't have to wait for the second shift...... broken thoughts, I hope you don't forget to clock in when you get off work this time...... ）