At present, it has been preliminarily revised.

But the authorities are obsessed with bystanders, not to mention that the author is a novice who is new to novel creation. It's easy to have a "mystery that feels good" at a glance.,At the very end, only two chapters were changed.,Delete a bunch of long and redundant rewrites and so on.。

Therefore, in order for readers to see better content, and at the same time, to make it easier for authors to realize their own shortcomings, I hope that everyone can actively put forward their own opinions.

For example, if you find the language of the book stiff, say which chapters you find this problematic and which chapters are less problematic. This makes it easier to identify the problem by comparing the authors.

Questions that can be asked include, but are not limited to, the above.

Thank you.