Soon it was the day of filming.

Ye Feng said goodbye to his parents, Cheng Nan, and daughter at home.

"Goodbye, Dad."

Xiao Ye Qi said cutely.

"Son, come back early."

Ye Ma also waved her hand.

"Take care of my parents and daughter."

Ye Feng walked up to Cheng Nan and kissed him.

made Cheng Nan blush.

"Shame, shame."

Xiao Yeqi covered his eyes.

This time filming.

It is also the first time in Ye Feng's life to film.

Most of the plot will be in the film and television city, but it will also go to various places in the magic capital, and it may not be able to go home yet, so Ye Feng went directly to the film and television city with a big suitcase.

If you can go home, you can go home, and if you can't go back, you can live there.

Flash.

As soon as Ye Feng arrived, Wang Dahai came out enthusiastically to greet him: "Ye Feng, you can be regarded as here." ”

"The sea, it's too polite, let's hurry up and film."

Now Ye Feng is also familiar with this Wang Dahai.

"By the way, the script is for me, I'll memorize the lines and get used to the role." Ye Feng said with a smile.

"OK, you're still dedicated." Wang Dahai praised.

Even regardless of the identity of the investor.

He also likes Ye Feng's dedicated attitude very much, which is obviously a world of difference from those eighteenth lines who started to play big names before they became popular.

immediately smiled at Ye Feng and said, "Don't worry, I have already prepared your script for you." ”

With that, the two went to the filming site of the crew together.

Unexpectedly, as soon as I arrived at the scene, I saw a scene that made people really unhappy.

Xiao Wang in the screenwriting team quarreled with Director Xu because he wanted to add lines to the second male and increase the scene.

For a TV series, the script is naturally not perfectly written by one person, and some are brainstorming.

"Director Xu, I don't think the second male is suitable here, for example, in terms of his personality, I think it is reasonable to add some of the male protagonist's roles to him, after all, with the character of the male protagonist, he can't do this, right?" Xiao Wang's screenwriter said.

"The male protagonist is the male protagonist, the second male protagonist is the second male protagonist, the script has been decided, and it can't be modified temporarily."

Director Xu is a person who strives for excellence, and the script is already suitable, so he naturally doesn't like someone to change the script anymore, so he immediately reprimanded him.

Wang Dahai saw this, and he was also helpless: "Alas, just now they were making trouble over some problems, and when you were before, they quarreled." ”

"Because the time was too rushed, Director Xu finished filming some unimportant roles first, and this screenwriter Xiao Wang also saw some problems, so he wanted to change it, but he couldn't convince Director Xu, but Director Xu also saw that screenwriter Xiao Wang's proposal was not good."

"It's okay, I'll take a look, maybe I can help." Ye Feng smiled and said.

It wasn't so long ago that the skills of a senior screenwriter were prescribed.

Now that there is an opportunity to practice, naturally it cannot be wasted.

"Come on, now they're all angry, you're not a professional, what if you quarrel with them when the time comes? I don't want to see you and the director quarrel with the director. ”

Wang Dahai grabbed Ye Feng and said helplessly.

"Don't worry, I've been doing some research on screenwriting lately, and I'm going to convince him."

Ye Feng glanced at Wang Dahai, smiled, and immediately walked towards that Xu Linli.

Xu Linli was originally arguing with the screenwriter, but as soon as he saw Ye Feng coming over, his emotions immediately eased.

After all, the world is big, and it's not as big as the boss's money.

smiled and said: "Ye Feng, you are here, I am going to be angry with these rabbit cubs, change the script every day, how perfect is my script, where do I need to change it?" ”

"Can I read the script?" Ye Feng asked.

"Of course, you can be polite to me."

As he spoke, Xu Linli immediately asked the staff to take the complete script to Ye Feng.

Ye Feng took the script, and after reading it, he found several big problems.

For example, the male protagonist obviously loved the female protagonist at the beginning, but the logic of this place is obviously wrong.

obviously loved, and in the end, he didn't have any explanation, so he said he didn't love it.

And these two should be the type of couple who are happy and bitter, each of them is burdened with some pain that ordinary people can't understand, and they should love and kill each other.

But the result is reconciled with no logic at all, these loopholes are the most basic, once they are discovered by the audience, this TV series will definitely be a bad movie at that time.

Seeing this, Ye Feng frowned, a little disappointed.

This script generally looks like a good script, but once the emotional line of the male and female protagonists is explained, it is not clear, and there are too many scenes of the second male, and there are too many female leads.

This is a business war film about the male protagonist, emotional dramas and some useless plots can be appropriately eliminated.

Director Xu was originally very satisfied with his script, and felt that Ye Feng would like it too.

But when he saw Ye Feng's tightly knit brows, he suddenly felt a little empty in his heart.

Secretly, could it be that there is something really wrong with his script? It's impossible, his control of this script is quite strict, and no one is allowed to get involved, not even Wang Dahai, and the roles of the second male are also appropriately added by him.

After such an analysis, Director Xu became much more confident.

glanced at Ye Feng and said with a smile: "Ye Feng, how is it?" I'm not bad at it. ”

Ye Feng turned his head, looked at Director Xu, and sighed.

The face is not very good.

Rhetorical asked: "Director Xu, do you want me to tell the truth, or is it a lie?" ”

"What do you mean by that?" The smile on Director Xu's face suddenly couldn't hold back.

Wang Dahai felt a bad breath.

hurriedly stepped forward to play the round, and said with a smile: "Haha, Director Xu, don't you understand what Ye Feng means?" It means that your script is well written, so you don't have to worry. ”

But before he could finish speaking, he was suddenly interrupted by Ye Feng.

"Director Xu, to be honest, in my opinion, your script is a script written by a third-rate screenwriter, not even a second-rate script, a business war TV series, why do you insist on adding so much love and love." Ye Feng said helplessly.

The reason why I invested in this TV series.

It's not that Ye Feng has eyesight, it's entirely because the system has released a task and has a high-level treasure chest as a reward.

Otherwise, Ye Feng would not be so stupid.

But now when I look at this script, if I didn't get the screenwriting skills, I would be unhappy at best, but now I have found a lot of faults.

"Ye Feng, although you are an investor, you can't tarnish the hard work of our screenwriting team and me."

Xu Linli said with some dissatisfaction, after all, for him, this script is a work that he has been polishing for a long time.

"I'm telling the truth, and if I say yes, it's an insult to you." Ye Feng said calmly.

"Alright, Ye Feng."

Seeing that there seemed to be a smell of gunpowder between the two, Wang Dahai played a round again.

"That's it, Director Xu, let me tell you about the script, first of all, we are about business wars, but the emotional line here and the emotional entanglement between the second male and the first female are in my opinion the kind of ordinary urban love TV series, and they don't highlight the color of the business war too much."

"And there are also big problems with the logic here, such as the collapse of the character between the male and female protagonists, and the love between each other in the later stage, such a big loophole really can't be ignored."

"And here..."

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