When Xu Linli heard this, his brows furrowed, but in the end he was not angry.

Instead, he began to listen to Ye Feng's opinion.

Then he read the script completely from beginning to end, and sure enough, he found more than a dozen logical plots and bad plots in this script.

If this plot was just opened in the era of TV dramas, there would have been some ratings if there was no TV to watch, but now, it would definitely be a bad movie.

Since it is a business war drama, it must perfectly show the plot of the business war, it is not an urban romance film, otherwise it will definitely be sprayed to death.

It's okay not to say it.

One said.

Xu Linli's head also broke out with sweat.

If he really made such a vulgar and bad movie, then his directorial career will be labeled as a bad movie director, which is something that all directors don't want, and he naturally doesn't want to.

In the end, Xu Linli's mood completely eased and stabilized, and said to Ye Feng gently: "Then how do you think it should be changed?" ”

"First of all, I took a look at the script and found that the main plot is perfect, so this part is retained, and then half of the emotional line of the male and female protagonists is eliminated, mainly focusing on helping each other, don't set up any enemies or anything, it's unnecessary, it's too bloody." Ye Feng patiently explained.

This is also seen at a glance through the skills of screenwriting.

"Okay, just do as you say."

When Xu Linli heard this, he asked the screenwriters of the screenwriting team to delete the plots that made up the losses again according to Ye Feng's ideas, and added the plots of the main business battles, and reintegrated a script.

Finally down.

Indeed, after changing those bad plots, it does feel a lot smoother.

Now, if this script were to be sold somewhere, it would be worth ten times more than before.

"That's amazing."

Wang Dahai secretly gave Ye Feng a thumbs up.

Right now.

He was convinced.

Singing, playing games, acting.

Now I have another screenwriter's skill, and it's really more popular than people.

At this time, Xu Linli was also completely convinced by Ye Feng.

also gave a thumbs up to Ye Feng with a smile on his face and said: "Ye Feng, you are really an all-round talent, too powerful, I really didn't see the omission of the script before, I was wrong, thank you so much." ”

"It's fine." Ye Feng smiled calmly.

Xu Linli sneered, feeling very ashamed, he insisted on not changing it just now, but he didn't expect so many loopholes.

In the end, after Ye Feng's proposal, the final complete version of the script is a business war worthy of the name.

It's a battlefield about a group of men intriguing.

The day after it was decided, Director Xu eliminated some of the redundant plots and officially started filming Ye Feng's role.

The first scene is about the story of the male protagonist and the female protagonist breaking up in college and preparing to enter the financial industry alone.

But the female Egret didn't perform as perfect as the previous audition, and kept making mistakes, even to the point that the lines were not good.

Xu Linli was so angry that he was already in a hurry, but now he began to have trouble again.

Suddenly he was a little angry, pointed at the egret, and said angrily: "Egret, what's the matter with you?" Why can't you even grasp the heroine's mental situation? And can't even remember the lines? ”

"You know."

"The female protagonist is now going to break up with the male protagonist, do you understand? There should be a sense of sadness. ”

Xu Linli added sentence by sentence and reminded.

"Yes, I'm sorry director, me, my fault, I'll try to perform, I'll work hard, I hope you can give me another chance."

The egret had never been scolded like this, and his eyes suddenly turned red, and tears fell down his eyes.

After all, she is a woman.

"The psychological quality is not too strong."

Ye Feng thought with some sympathy, but he also understood that Xu Linli was under a lot of pressure now.

However, if you want to restore the egret now, I am afraid that it will not be able to do so for a while.

Immediately.

Ye Feng said to Xu Linli: "Director Xu, if you don't do this, let's shoot the second male and me first, and let the egret think about how to act?" If not, I'll take her with me. ”

"Well, that's all it can be." Xu Linli sighed and said.

"Okay, okay, don't say it, shoot you and Xu Qingyang first."

And then.

Ye Feng changed into a suit.

His own temperament was immediately rewarded by the system, and the boss's temperament was bonus.

The whole person looks very spiritual, especially with spirit.

"Ye Feng is really suitable for the role of a successful person, this temperament is really unmatched, and he looks like a big boss at first glance."

Looking at Ye Feng's suit, he has the temperament of a successful person.

Xu Linli and Wang Dahai couldn't help but sigh.

Enter the plot shooting.

But unexpectedly, another accident happened.

This time, the male protagonist entered the real business war, and he wanted to plan and invest in a company and plan for them, but he didn't expect to be given a head start by the second male.

The second male is his predecessor, and he has scheming, and finally stole his plan, which gave the male protagonist a big blow, so the male protagonist broke out on the spot and confronted the male second.

But Xu Qingyang didn't have any precipitation, and in the face of such a challenging role, he was in a mess for a while, and he was playing a mess.

Directly NG up.

"What's the matter with you?"

Director Xu frowned and walked in front of Xu Qingyang: "Xu Qingyang, have you seriously figured out this role?" Why are you like the egret, you forgot all the lines? ”

"No, I'm sorry Director Xu, I didn't mean to."

"But, but Ye Feng's aura is too strong." Xu Qingyang shrank his head and said helplessly.

The moment Ye Feng exploded in anger just now, he really seemed to be angry, which made Xu Qingyang, who played the man, stunned.

"It seems to be."

A reminiscence.

Ye Feng's acting skills are really very good, as soon as he enters the role, he seems to have the spirituality that belongs to that role, and he has come to life.

This also makes these new actors particularly stressful.

It's like the feeling of a newcomer facing an old actor.

Moreover, Ye Feng has the bonus of the boss's temperament, which also has a great effect on acting skills, which is perfectly suitable for the role.

"Well, everyone will rest for fifteen minutes, and after fifteen minutes, you'll start filming again when you're calm."

Xu Linli was also a little helpless and said to everyone.

When Wang Dahai saw this scene, he was a little embarrassed, and finally said to Ye Feng: "These actors can't understand the character psychology of those characters in the script, I'll wait to teach them, and when you play with them, don't have too strong aura, they newcomers can't stand it." ”

"Do I have a strong aura?"

Ye Feng asked rhetorically.

"Nonsense, I suspect that you are an old drama bone, I really don't know where your acting skills come from, I really haven't studied it systematically, and I haven't graduated from a professional class, why are you so powerful and able to perfectly substitute for the role."

Wang Dahai said very deliciously.

Eat one's heart out.

Thick jealousy.

"Maybe it's talent."

Ye Feng smiled proudly.

God-level acting skills, although they have not been fully mastered, can also allow Ye Feng to control the role perfectly.

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