"Who?" Li Kang wanted to ask, but now was not the time to ask.

So he opened his mouth, but said nothing, just listened quietly.

For Chen Xiaoli, who finally decided to open her heart, what she lacks now is a listener.

Then Chen Xiaoli's tone became low: "Three and a half years ago, he never updated again, and I didn't see him speak in the book review area, I was very sorry at that time, but then I had the idea of writing a similar novel on my own." ”

"Then ......" Chen Xiaoli paused, as if he had skipped something: "After more than two years of preparation, I felt that I could write, so I started to write......"

For more than two years, Chen Xiaoli has studied Poplar's book over and over again I don't know how many times, and even did better than him after analyzing the penmanship of Poplar, who was the first at the end of the line, and then imitated his own book, and finally started writing a year ago.

But after only 200,000 words were written, she collapsed.

Chen Xiaoli couldn't stop as soon as she spoke, she had too many words in her heart.

Li Kang refilled her cup of water from time to time and listened attentively.

In the end, Li Kang came to the conclusion that Chen Xiaoli would not be able to write emotional dramas.

Also, although she imitates her own book, it is estimated that she has studied the most is the poplar god, with the straight male attribute of the poplar god, but it has never involved emotional drama, Chen Xiaoli has nothing to learn, no wonder she is stuck here.

"I thought that writing here, I could logically let the male protagonist confess, I thought that after more than two years of precipitation, I could write feelings, but I still can't, when I think of the next direction, my brain is blank."

This is Chen Xiaoli's original words, Li Kang knows that this is the collapse of the text.

Unlike the typical collapse caused by the author's inability to control the text and the overlaying of the scene, Chen Xiaoli's collapse is a collapse in the small plot, or in the emotion.

She can't write emotional dramas.

She can't feel the love of the characters in the text, and naturally she can't write about it.

Chen Xiaoli's writing method is a rare substitution of real feelings, or this book is a real sense substitution.

This kind of writing technique was used by Li Kang, he once mentioned it in the book review area, but he didn't expect it to be discovered by Chen Xiaoli and used it, and he wrote it so well.

There are also many shortcomings of this way of writing, such as Li Kang, although the characters in his text are three-dimensional and soulful (although most people can't feel it because the writing is too poor), but also because the characters have models, and there are too many feelings poured into it, he can't write after breaking up with his ex-girlfriend.

He was reluctant to dissect this kind of wound and blood, and because the heroine was based on his ex-girlfriend, he couldn't continue to write on the original idea, he couldn't make it up, he couldn't lie to himself, so he ended up pitting.

It wasn't until three and a half years later, after he had faced up to this matter and walked out of the shadows, that he rewrote the real book, but correspondingly, the heroine was still gone.

Thinking of this, Li Kang asked: "The heroine of the recently updated chapter of Hangzi is gone, what do you think?" ”

Chen Xiaoli sniffed, and her voice was much better than before: "The female protagonist and the male protagonist are not all the way, and it is not strange that they are gone." ”

"How do you tell?" Li Kangqi said, he doesn't know how to write books, but he knows?

Chen Xiaoli studied the book "On the Road" very thoroughly, and directly clicked without turning the book at all: "Chapter 15, when they first met...... Chapter 62, They ......"

With Chen Xiaoli's analysis one by one, Li Kang found that his breakup with his ex-girlfriend was not accidental but inevitable.

The two are not a good fit.

One is a delicate flower that needs to be cared for in a greenhouse, and the other is a down-and-out person who can only build a thatched house even if he tries his best to give away his true heart.

Not to mention four years ago, even now Li Kang is still struggling, and he will be in this state for at least ten years in the future, he is one of the first children to read out of the orphanage, and he has a natural responsibility.

Even though the mother's mother said that he had no natural obligation to the other children in the orphanage, Li Kang felt that people could not only take care of themselves in their lives.

If it weren't for that kind man, he might only be able to sell his physical strength to make money now.

And after he has a little ability, he is also willing to be the kind person of his younger brothers and sisters.

Life, brocade clothes and jade food are a lifetime, and coarse tea and light rice are also a lifetime.

Li Kang doesn't have such a high material pursuit, and the savings of a few hundred yuan are enough for a month's living expenses for the two children, so how can he spend it.

In college, Li Kang actually made a lot of money, but he has never been in love since he broke up with his first love girl, except for necessary expenses, the money was sent home and sent back to the orphanage.

And those things he didn't write were actually seen by Chen Xiaoli, although she couldn't understand too specific things from the text, but she understood Li Kang and Li Kang's ex-girlfriend.

Listening to Chen Xiaoli's analysis, Li Kang sighed in his heart.

At the same time, he also wanted Chen Xiaoli to write down, her talent shocked Li Kang, and if she sank like this, it had to be said that it would be a huge loss.

"Miss Chen." Li Kang thought about it, but still said: "You can't understand love, so you can't write love, right?" ”

He decided to help Chen Xiaoli come out, it is a good thing to be in love, but being too in love is a shackle.

Li Kang decided to take the poplar that Chen Xiaoli had studied as an example, and he explained: "There are two books of the poplar god, one is fantasy and one is Xianxia, does he understand the things written? He doesn't understand. But his text, who can say badly? After reading his book, will the reader not feel a sense of substitution? ”

Hearing this, Chen Xiaoli's expression was a little strange.

Li Kang poured himself a glass of water and continued to talk eloquently: "Love is for the reader to substitute, not for the author to indulge in, sketching can be written, so according to this statement, wouldn't the author have to die once before writing?" ”

"When writing a book, you have to stand in God's perspective!" Li Kang concluded: "Unless you're writing an autobiography. ”

"Also, the control of words is not only reflected in the layout planning, but also in the ......"

Unconsciously, Chen Xiaoli listened more and more seriously.

Although she has achieved good results along the way, the online article industry is purely a crossing the river by feeling the stones, and no one will guide her.

The situation of the end Chinese network in recent years has also made the editor immetrical or unintentional to guide the author.

This innate model gives authors a lot of freedom, and at the same time, it also allows them to improve purely on their own experience.

Even a genius such as Chen Xiaoli lacks a guide, and now Li Kang is this guide.