What! I just said that this book is really good, but I turned my head and said that it would be a loss, can it be called good?! Big liar!

Ye Qingqing was a little angry, she didn't squeak, she just listened.

Zhu Jun was also not polite, and continued: "Assuming that Tang Ye is also a little-known newcomer, and he takes out his previous "Bright Bones" and puts it into the market at the same time as Fang Rin's "Twilight", who has a better chance of winning?" ”

Needless to say! Tang Ye's blood-splattered suspense is too much in line with the heavy taste of curiosity hunting in the current society, Fang Rin's middle-aged and elderly pen tone is not competitive at all, okay!

Ye Qingqing could only admit: "That must be Tang Ye." ”

"I know you must be thinking that the two books are not in the same category, and the audience is different, but just from the perspective of the market, the same newcomer, is it better to have a copy of "Twilight" than a suspense detective?"

“…… Right. Ye Qingqing was almost desperate, feeling that she had come to be rejected.

"But ......" Zhu Jun lengthened his voice again, continued to look at the next item in the notebook, and smiled at her, "We discussed it, if everyone rushes to produce something hot on the market, it is actually not good for the development of the publishing house." In addition, the propaganda has been in full bloom, if possible, we should try our best to publish this book, which reflects the life of educated youths before, with a part of prison life in the middle, and middle-aged people groping in the new era...... In fact, it is very interesting and covers a wide range of aspects, as if the author has experienced it himself. ”

"What?!" Ye Qingqing raised his head suddenly, "Experienced? ”

"That's right," Zhu Jun was a little puzzled, he looked at the manuscript, and suddenly laughed, "Don't you always think that this book is good because of the truth and the sense of substitution?" I can't write this feeling without a little experience. ”

"Could it be that the author, cough, Fang Rin has also been in prison?"

"I don't know about this, it may be the result of multiple investigations," Zhu Jun said, "If there is, it's not surprising, people are running around outside, and they dare to publish books, they will not be fugitives." ”

Ye Qingqing was apprehensive in his heart, and suddenly thought: "Then in this book, it is said that the protagonist Yu Qian did not kill anyone, and he was avenging his grievances in prison and after he was released from prison, isn't it the author himself who is avenging?" ”

"Why do you think about it farther and farther," Zhu Jun couldn't cry and laughed, "Books are books, people to people, mixing the two together, you will become more and more unable to see clearly." ”

"Oh, okay, okay." Ye Qingqing humbly learned, "You continue, you continue." ”

Zhu Jun looked down at the notebook again, pondered for a while, and slowly spoke: "There are also some problems in the style of writing, we read books as work, maybe as long as it is smooth and easy to read, we will not feel that there is a problem." But now many people are looking at it, the first page or even the first paragraph, even if it is successful, if it is not successful, it will be completely abandoned. You look at the first page of Fang Rin, water town, educated youth, young boys and girls...... If I were a young reader, it would be fine if I was interested in that era, and if I wasn't interested, I would just put it down. ”

Ye Qingqing finally couldn't help but start writing notes, and she said as she wrote, "So you mean to fix the beginning?" ”

"It may take a more attractive opening, I think the later part of the pouring night incense can be brought up, for example, Yu Qian, who grew up in the city, never expected that one day he would hold a spittoon full of feces and urine, waiting in line to pour the night incense......"

"Hahaha yes, yes, this is good! I can talk to the author. ”

"There are also some tones between the lines, although it is the author's habit, but it is too old, I hope the author is willing to replace it, such as what the male and female protagonists are called in some places, 'woohoo lament', or 'very good' and the like. The heroine is not so educated, after all, she is just a small town girl, how can she have such beautiful words and deeds? ”

"So you're going to make it more modern?" Ye Qingqing was a little unsure, "This may have to talk to the author, he may not be willing." ”。

"I understand, it's hard to convey it, and it's the most important question." Zhu Jun suddenly became serious, he thought for a while, but he still couldn't help but say, "Editor Ye, when you read this book, did you feel that something was missing?" ”