"Yes." Ye Qingqing said decisively, "But I can't think of anything missing, probably because the male protagonist's mental description is too thin?" ”

"Yes!" Zhu Jun clicked the manuscript vigorously, "I've read it twice in the past two days, and I always feel that something is missing, but now I understand, the spiritual pillar of the male protagonist is missing!" ”

"Huh?" This seems to be a little more than Ye Qingqing thought, she can only listen with an open mind.

"Yu Qian is not a very strong person, he is liked by the heroine because of his gentleness and caring. But after encountering so many things, he was not much tougher in his mentality, and was often in a state of confusion, helplessness and even on the verge of collapse. But he never broke down, and at the last moment he controlled the process of controlling his emotions, he turned too stiffly, which always made me feel that there was one less process of others explaining him. And in fact, the female protagonist is not the real soul mate of the male protagonist.,He has a sense of guilt and responsibility.,I feel that the death of the heroine's father has its own relationship.,So after coming out, I continued to take care of the female owner.,But between the lines,,I think he's missing someone else.。 ”

Zhu Jun finished speaking in one breath, listening to the excitement as if he was reasoning, and said: "Who is he missing, could it be this spiritual pillar, and why he didn't write it?" ”

“…… It's also possible. Ye Qingqing felt that Zhu Jun was poking herself too much, as if every sentence was in her heart, but when she thought of the appearance of the old man Fang Rin, she still couldn't help but say, "It's also possible that we have too much brain supplement, but in fact, we don't have this spiritual pillar at all?" ”

When Zhu Jun heard this, he leaned back in his chair, thought for a while, and said: "If it is really a blunt problem of emotional transformation, then it needs to be overhauled, otherwise this book will reach the hands of people who read it carefully, and the male protagonist will not be able to withstand scrutiny." ”

"......" Ye Qingqing was silent.

"Editor Ye, do you think there is anything wrong with my opinion?"

"Nope." Ye Qingqing shook her head, she suddenly sighed with emotion, "I've really seen a lot." ”

"What?" Zhu Jun also began to pack up his notes.

"I've been an editor for almost three years, and I've published several books, but none of them can read a person's book seriously like you, and then analyze it from the perspective of style, content and even logic. I feel like I've been editing for so many years, I don't have any acumen and insight, and I have even read it so many times, just knowing that this book is OK, I don't have a single opinion in my head. ”

Zhu Jun laughed: "I know what your publishing house is producing, and sometimes we envy you." ”

"Huh? We have nothing to envy. ”

"It's all textbooks, you don't need to consider the market and receivables, just review the manuscript, and there is a state underwriting anyway." He got up and sighed, "It's like us, when we get a book, even if it's not our own good mouth, and even if we think it's ugly, we have to grit our teeth and hold on, and after reading it, we have to keep arguing with the author until it is published...... The author is relaxed, but we still have to find all kinds of opportunities to publicize and publicize, lest we not be able to return to the original. Thank goodness that the first print run of a book sold out this year. ”。

If the first print is not sold, it means that you can't get back the original, and Ye Qingqing also sighed: "Hey, work is a besieged city, and it's good to see others." ”