"How?" Yang Bing asked beside him.

Tang Mingyao closed the file, stood up and said: "I think it's right according to your feelings, if you don't think it's good-looking, you won't give it a draft, and if you think it's good-looking, it's as simple as that." ”

"What about these articles? Kill them all? ”

"Do you think it looks good?"

Yang Bing shook his head: "It's not good-looking, it doesn't go well to see people." ”

Tang Mingyao said: "So let's follow your feelings." You think of yourself as a pure reader, and if you read a novel that is uncomfortable, other readers will certainly not be comfortable reading it. ”

Yang Bing nodded thoughtfully, and then asked, "Do you have any tips for writing novels with this theme?" As an editor, I can't just look at books from the reader's point of view, and sometimes I need to give review comments to contributors, and I can't always be vague. ”

Tang Mingyao thought about it, these days in Zhengcheng, Yang Bing has taken good care of himself, and his skills in writing routines are not a peerless secret, there is nothing that cannot be said.

And after he finished writing this "Martial Arts Supreme", he should not encounter the same type of novel in the future, and he is not afraid of others robbing him of his wealth.

So he immediately said: "I'll give you a few standards, and you will follow these standards when reviewing the manuscript, and that's right." ”

"First, this kind of novel must have a sense of rhythm. First suppressed, then exploded, then suppressed, and then exploded, after three or four small outbreaks in a row, there must be a big outbreak, which is the high (#) tide of the plot. If a novel that follows the trend and you can't see that in it, then it's a failure and it's not desirable. ”

Second, this type of novel should constantly set goals for the protagonist and create a sense of expectation. The goal is usually divided into short-term, medium-term and long-term, the beginning must set a medium-term or long-term goal, the setting process can be written at the same time short-term goals, several short-term strings into the medium-term, when the medium-term goal is completed, it is the plot of the high (#) tide, which has a high degree of overlap with the previous point. If you can't see the short-term, medium-term, and long-term goals of the protagonist in a novel, it must be scribbled, and it is also not advisable to take the pulse. ”

"Third, the technique of repression and the creation of a refreshing feeling of the article. Repression means that the protagonist must suffer first, and this suffering must be kept within the range acceptable to the reader, such as the protagonist of martial arts novels, he can't beat others, he is injured, and he vomits blood, which is acceptable; But he couldn't beat others, he was beaten into a cripple, and if he couldn't be cured, he became blind and lame, which is unacceptable. The few books I just read, this point is not done well, the protagonist is fed dung and cuckolded at the beginning, and normal readers can't accept it......"

And the refreshing feeling of manufacturing, summed up in one word, is called: Jianwei must be repaid. How does the villain treat the protagonist, the protagonist must redouble his revenge and come back, the villain punches the protagonist, and when the protagonist is stronger than him, he will inevitably punch him five or ten punches; The villain robs the protagonist's fiancée, and when the protagonist becomes powerful, he will rob the villain's wife, concubine, aunt, aunt, sister and sister, and snatch all the women related to the villain; The villain kills the protagonist with a dog, and the protagonist kills the villain's whole family......"

"Also, in addition to individual bosses, it is best for small characters to make him unable to turn over at one time, and he must not be defeated again and again and jump out, which will only make people feel that the protagonist is incompetent......"

"Well, that's about it. If someone can do all of these things, writing it is a qualified follow-up work. ”

Yang Bing was stunned and speechless.

This large series of theories came out, and she was deeply aware that a seemingly simple novel did not know how many detailed and profound truths were buried behind it.

No wonder the train king can write a novel well!

Other authors, I'm afraid they can't say a single one.

How can those who follow the trend write such wonderful novels without such a deep theoretical foundation?

At this moment, Yang Bing suddenly had a heartfelt admiration for this big boy who was only a teenager.

After digesting these theories for a while, she raised a question in her heart: "If you write it according to your standards, will the protagonist's character be too violent?" Criticized? ”

Tang Mingyao said: "Isn't it okay to set up villains as bad guys and wicked people?" Besides, being violent or not has nothing to do with routines, it's still about personal skills, you see my book "Martial Arts Supreme", the protagonist is suppressed all the way, and he becomes stronger all the way to kill, but it doesn't give people a violent feeling, but it's very hot-blooded! This is what readers love to read. ”

Yang Bing thought about it, it was indeed the case, and nodded in agreement.

After some exchanges, Tang Mingyao gave the editor a big lesson, and then embarked on the journey home with Luo Wenxi.

When I went back, I took a new route, passing through Luocheng, Chang'an, and through the Qinling Mountains, and returning to my hometown county.

It took more than ten days to stop and go on the road, and when I got home, it was August 20th.

It was exactly a full month before departure.

The promise to Rowan Creek is perfectly fulfilled!

Tang Mingyao sent his girlfriend to the door very intimately, and then dragged his luggage home.

Putting down his things, he didn't do anything except say hello to his mother, the first thing he did was to run to the photo studio in the county town and wash the photos!

After a month of traveling, I took more than ten films, which is because the two of them have been saving and not shooting as hard as at the beginning.

I really let go of the shooting, and I couldn't hold dozens of films.

One film can take 36 photos, and if it is well preserved, it can take 38 or 39 photos, more than 10 films, which is more than 400 photos.

Tang Mingyao asked the owner of the photo studio to make a wholesale price, and washed three sheets for one dollar, and it only cost more than 100 to wash them all.

But for these photos, he also had to prepare a copy for Luo Wenxi, so the price doubled.

Then, in order to preserve them, I had to glue each one, and I had to buy a photo album and put it up, one album per person, and after all of them were calculated, it cost more than 100 yuan.

After settling the general ledger, these photos alone will cost him 400 yuan.

It's all worth it, though.

These things, in a few years, decades later, will become the most precious memories between him and Luo Wenxi.

Thinking about the time when the two of them have grown up, and then sit together and look at these photos, he feels very warm in his heart.

The photo is not available for the time being, Tang Mingyao temporarily stored everything in the photo studio, went home to wash off the dust, and then took out his system record book and calculated the points account.

At the end of June, he paid off the 2,000 points he owed to Luo Wenxi.

Then he upgraded the system, and by the time he set off on July 20, he had a lot of time to read and write during the summer vacation, and he had saved more than 2,300 points a month.

This trip took a month, accumulating more than 30 points on average every day on the road, and another 1,000 points down.

Taken together, the total score is a little over 3,300 points.

In terms of consumption, taking a car and boat back and forth is a small head, and it is less than 300 yuan together, after all, the two have student IDs, and they are half price along the way.

The big head is to live in a hotel, and the two of them don't live in a good kind, which is an ordinary business hotel, dozens of dollars and hundreds of dollars a day, because they have lived together during the winter vacation, and they are not particularly shy about it, most of the time they are open to a room, two beds, or a bed......

Of course, Tang Mingyao has always adhered to the courtesy of a gentleman and has not done anything to his girlfriend.

A girl of this age doesn't really have any need for physical contact, and she is very satisfied if she can see each other all day long.

So all the way down, there were no accidents.

Tang Mingyao felt that he was looking for a little girlfriend, not to covet the girl's body, but more to obtain psychological satisfaction, that is, the sense of accomplishment that dominates in love and is attached to others.

In the final analysis, it has something to do with hitting the streets in the previous life.

has been on the street for a long time, and there is a lack of sense of accomplishment and existence in life, which can be well made up for in the little girlfriend.