When he walked into the brand franchise store again, Tang Mingyao changed from two people to three people.

Yang Jing also came.

I was asked to help.

As soon as I entered the door, the young lady in charge of sales came up to serve enthusiastically.

Tang Mingyao thought that this young lady was also strong in her heart, after he and Luo Wenxi left the store yesterday, they found that they were being followed by her, and after getting into the car, he asked the taxi driver to take them around the city several times, and the young lady behind him cried.

In the end, Tang Mingyao confirmed that he had thrown the people off, so he took his things and went to the reserved park to do sales.

When I went back, I felt that since the business had been done, I would do it again.

Don't you manufacturers want to know how we sell it?

Yes.

The plan is sold to you!

Take the money.

It's that simple.

However, in view of his appearance and age, Tang Mingyao felt that he still had to find a big backup to follow him, so that he could negotiate with others.

So I found Yang Jing.

The only people he can find here are Yang Bing and Yang Jing, Yang Jing has a small age gap with them, and he has confided in them, and the psychological distance is closer than Yang Bing.

Door.

Yang Jing took the lead: "Where is your person in charge?" Whoever calls the shots here, find someone who can talk about things. ”

Young lady: "Excuse me, do you have anything to do with our Mr. Yuan?" ”

Yang Jing pointed to the two pretending to be good babies next to her: "Our children, there is something to sell to you, you must know what to sell, you can't be the master of this matter, ask your boss to go." ”

The young lady went obediently.

After a while, I came back and asked them to go upstairs and go to the office of the company's sales department to talk.

The three went upstairs.

More than an hour later, it came down from it again.

There was an extra pile of banknotes in his hand, and he took it out of the finance office, a total of 100,000 yuan.

Tang Mingyao was amazed by this operation, and thought that it was good to invite Yang Jing to come, and someone else would go up, and he might not be able to fight the old fox upstairs.

Luo Wenxi's eyes were full of little stars, and he looked at Yang Jing adoringly: "Sister, you are so powerful, you actually persuaded that Mr. Yuan." Just now he only offered us 20,000 yuan, we didn't say anything, he knew that our sales plan is limited, can not be unlimited promotion, and said that we will not sell to him, he himself sent someone to the market research, a week to find out...... I thought I wouldn't be able to get 20,000 yuan. ”

Yang Jing said: "This is the negotiation technique, try to belittle the opponent, elevate yourself without a trace, as long as you appear to have no desire in the negotiation, you will win." To be honest, my sister is quite ashamed, that Mr. Yuan looked at me with the wrong eyes, I can be regarded as using beauty (#) sex, otherwise I wouldn't have gotten so much money. ”

"Hmph, he also asked where you live, and wanted to ask you to dinner, older than my father, and the toad wanted to eat swan meat!"

Yang Jing smiled slightly and was silent.

Three people get into the car.

After walking away, Tang Mingyao gave half of the money to Yang Jing and said, "Without you, we wouldn't be able to get so much money, it's yours." ”

Yang Jing said: "I'm here to help, but it's not for these tens of thousands of yuan." If you want to thank me, invite me to dinner. ”

Refuse.

Tang Mingyao sent it twice, and when he saw that Yang Jing was really unwilling to accept it, he stopped being hypocritical, put it away himself, and turned back to share it with Luo Wenxi.

Dinner is indispensable in the evening, and after that, Tang Mingyao and the others stayed in Zhengcheng for two days, and they had all the more famous attractions around, so they decided to set off and go back.

Before leaving, I went to the magazine to say goodbye to Yang Bing.

Yang Bing grabbed Tang Mingyao and said, "It's just in time, I want to ask you for advice on something." ”

"What's the matter?"

"Uh, your "Martial Arts Supreme" appeared to follow the trend, you know?"

Tang Mingyao said: "I know, there was a novella in the last issue of the magazine, I read it, and it was not very well written. ”

Yang Bing said: "In the past two days, I have received several more submissions. You know, I was the editor of "Hot Wind" a few months ago, and I don't have a deep understanding of martial arts novels. I'm going to make sure you don't care about this kind of borrowing before I can ask for your help. ”

Tang Mingyao said: "There's nothing to care about about this. It's like drawing comics, everyone can draw them, they can be hot-blooded comics, as long as the plot is not exactly the same, no one can say anything. ”

"That's fine. Then can you please help me look at these manuscripts? The style is similar to yours, but I always feel that it is not as good as yours, but I can't tell what's wrong. ”

Tang Mingyao nodded and agreed.

Sit in front of her computer and click on the manuscript.

The first is a long beginning called "Martial Arts Master".

Ma Dan, this follower is too lazy, and even the name has only changed two words.

The first chapter of the novel is a plot in which the young protagonist worships a Jianghu sect, becomes a new disciple, is bullied, and then works hard to slap his face.

The rhythm and escalation routines have learned some of the fur of his novel, but it doesn't look cool at all, but feels very poisonous.

For example, the plot that suppresses the protagonist at the beginning, the protagonist just entered the sect, and the senior brother asked him to pick up dung, and he went, but was kicked into the manure tank by the senior brother and drank several sips of water.

Tang Mingyao was speechless when he saw this detail.

The routine pays attention to suppressing first and then promoting, but the repression is not so suppressed!

The protagonist who drinks fecal water, can't the reader substitute it, okay?

I don't know what kind of mood the author wrote with such a plot, does he think this is very exciting?

Then look down.

The protagonist inadvertently came into contact with a reclusive senior of the sect.,Probably similar to Feng Qingyang.,The predecessor passed on his kung fu.,Martial arts quickly became successful.,When the protagonist picks up dung for the second time,The senior brother came to bully him again.,And then he was defeated by the protagonist.。

The fighting process does not conform to the rhythm of Shuangwen, let's not say it, let's see what the protagonist says after the victory: "Let you go this time, and in the future, if you bully your fellow disciples, you will not be spared!" ”

Tang Mingyao: "......"

So forget it?

This senior brother fed you dung water, brother, you defeated him, and you actually said a few words about the scene.

Shouldn't you feed him dung?

Or to be more ruthless, let this senior brother squat in the manure tank for three days, let the people of the entire sect come to visit him to drink dung, so that he will never have the face to stay in the sect again, this is what the protagonist of the routine text should do!

In short, the depression is too poisonous, and the slap in the face is unpleasant......

No wonder it's not pretty.

Tang Mingyao then turned the second article to follow the trend.

Name: "The Supreme of the World".

emmm, or only two words changed.

This author is even better, and he actually wrote a divorce stream without a teacher at the beginning, but it's a pity that when he wrote about the plot of his fiancée coming to the door with a new concubine (#), he actually wrote that the woman was in front of the protagonist, and the concubine (#) performed live (and) spring (and) palace, and the green hat was worn so uprightly that he couldn't take it off!

You don't have to look at the back of this novel, it's strange that it can be good-looking with this kind of opening.

Then I turned to several other submissions, each of which had a lot of questions.

It's either too hard, or it's unpleasant to slap your face, or you can't control the rhythm, for example, the protagonist will provoke a BOSS-level character when he appears, and then the protagonist will practice martial arts day and night, upgrade and upgrade, and after the promotion, I will look at it, MMP, or I can't beat the BOSS......

This can't hit the villain in the face at all.

These novels have only learned a little bit from him, and the things he writes are nondescript, routines and essays are not like routines, and traditional martial arts are not like traditional martial arts.

How can such a work look cool?