Chapter 456: Man Gets More Death Than Man
Lu Jiuyuan looked at Du Jinning, full of praise was about to overflow from his eyes: "There are "Linjiang Immortals" and "Thoughts" in the front, and this "Wine to the Moon Song" in the back, it can be seen that Du Jinning's poetry is no worse than your literary talent." Sure enough, he is worthy of being a disciple of Song and Caizi, and his poems are written so well, he has the style of the master in the capital back then. The most rare thing is that your poems are well written and written quickly, and the philosophical ideas expounded in your poems are not something that ordinary people can do. ”
The students below suddenly wailed in their hearts: Do you want to do this, they haven't handed in the poems yet, why do they give this Du Jinning such a high evaluation? Still don't let people live?
The most bitter in my heart is Qi Siyu.
If he had handed in his poems first, Lu Jiuyuan and the others would not have praised Du Jinning so without a bottom line when they saw his poems...... Right?
What kind of broken poems, can there be his poems?
At this time, he didn't care about the shame just now, fortunately he didn't break the manuscript paper in his hand just now, he handed the poem to Tang Zhao: "The disciple has done a good job of poetry, and please ask the professor to look at it." ”
Compared to Lu Jiuyuan, he still preferred to believe Tang Zhao, at least he wouldn't be so partial.
Tang Zhao still hadn't calmed down from the anger just now, so he said lightly to Qi Siyu: "Okay, let's put it here." ”
If before, because of Qi Yuandao's relationship, Tang Zhao was always very kind to Qi Siyu, even if he couldn't say that he was kind, this was the first time he was so cold to him.
Qi Siyu knew that the mistake just now made Tang Zhao unhappy, and he made such a big fool just now, so it was the best policy to retreat and sit honestly at this time. But he was unwilling, unwilling to let Lu Jiuyuan's eyes stay at Du Jinning's place, and the words of praise were thrown out like money.
Relying on his grandfather's face, he still stood in place and said to Tang Zhao: "Please also ask the professor to comment." ”
Tang Zhao heard Lu Jiuyuan praise Du Jinning's poems, and wanted to read Du Jinning's poems first, after all, Du Jinning was the first to submit the manuscript, so he had to comment on Du Jinning's first, and then Qi Siyu's.
But Qi Siyu actually stood here without moving, and there is quite a pattern that if you don't comment on my poems, I won't go, thinking about Qi Yuandao's contribution to Fuxue, Tang Zhao endured the anger in his heart, picked up the poem and looked at it.
To tell the truth, Qi Siyu's poetry is not only famous in Fuxue, but also in Fucheng, which is not unreasonable.
His poems are fresh and refined, timeless, and very good at using allusions.
For example, this one: "The spring outing is vast, it is the season of pear blossoms every year." The white brocade is fragrant without lines, and the jade trees are piled up with snow. The silent night is heavy, the floating light is hazy, and the cold soaking dissolves the moon. In the heavens on earth, the rotten silver glows through the ......" used Cen Shen's poems and "Zhuangzi. There are two allusions to the description of Gu Shot's real people. And although this word is a song, it is actually a song, which is very in line with the requirements of Lu Jiuyuan's topic.
Tang Zhao thought it was very good.
He couldn't help but praise: "This poem is written vividly and vividly, which makes people feel fresh and refined, and the spirit is abnormal, not bad, very good." ”
Qi Siyu wants such an effect.
Whether Lu Jiuyuan and the others are newcomers or newcomers, they will definitely not be able to compare to Tang Zhao in terms of prestige. What if Du Jinning submits the manuscript first? What about the eccentricity of Lu Jiuyuan? As soon as Tang Zhao said a few words of praise, the disadvantage of his later delivery was reversed.
After a while, Lu Jiuyuan saw his poem manuscript and found that it was better than Du Jinning's, and that was when he was radiant and in the spotlight.
Lu Jiuyuan and the three of them are extremely protective. As soon as they heard Tang Zhao praise Qi Siyu, the three of them were not convinced.
In their opinion, Du Jinning's poem is written to the extreme, what poem can be better than this one? Qi Siyu's poems they hadn't seen during the college exam, the poems were good poems, but the traces of the axe were too heavy, and they were not as refreshing and natural as Du Jinning's.
Lu Jiuyuan handed the manuscript in his hand to Tang Zhao and said, "Professor Tang, you might as well take a look at this first." ”
Among the three, Shi Xiu's temperament is the most cautious and meticulous.
He was afraid that people would see that they looked at Du Jinning too differently and caused unnecessary trouble, so he hurriedly added: "After all, this manuscript is the first to be handed in." ”
Tang Zhao put down the manuscript in his hand, picked up Du Jinning's poem, thought about it, and handed Qi Siyu's manuscript to Lu Jiuyuan.
He didn't mean anything else.
After all, he still doesn't know Du Jinning's level of writing poetry, but Qi Siyu's level of this poem is indeed good. He didn't want the three of them to look down on his own school, so he wanted to present the best things in front of the three of them.
Lu Jiuyuan had no choice but to take Qi Siyu's poem manuscript.
This time, Shi Xiu and Peng Shicheng didn't come over, but waited for Lu Jiuyuan to see them before reviewing them.
But before they could see it, Tang Zhao slapped the table and shouted: "Good poetry, good poetry." Du Jinning's poem is well written. ”
As he spoke, he raised his head and looked at Du Jinning, only to find that Du Jinning had already returned to his seat and sat down. Only Qi Siyu was still standing there.
Some things need to be compared to see the good and bad, such as the poems in his hands, such as being a person.
Although Qi Siyu's poem is good, it is always a little smaller, and the ending falls into the scope of talking about Taoism and teaching; In comparison, Du Jinning's poem is much more atmospheric, not only very on-topic, but also has a stunning turn at the end, showing his noble ambition. The same topic, the same meaning I want to express, but Qi Siyu's song is much worse than Du Jinning's song after all.
Qi Siyu was expecting Tang Zhao to criticize Du Jinning's poem, when he heard his applause, and it was louder than when he read his poem, as if it was not loud enough to express the surprise in his heart. His heart was on the verge of collapse.
What's so good about that kid's poem? What's so good? Why are they praising his poems one by one?
When Lu Jiuyuan heard that Tang Zhao also praised Du Jinning's poems for being well written, he was satisfied.
He knew that he had only come to study in the house, and it didn't matter if he offended Qi Siyu, but it would be unwise to offend Qi Yuandao. In his heart, Qi Siyu's poem was rated as the second place at present, but Lu Jiuyuan still praised Qi Siyu twice because of Qi Yuandao's face: "This poem is well written and has a lot of aura." ”
If he praises more, it may seem more sincere. But just now I praised Du Jinning for a lot, but when I arrived at Qi Siyu, there were only these two sentences, and I felt very insincere in Qi Siyu's ears.
Although Wang Changzhi and Wu Qin are also gentlemen, they are just people, and they cannot be compared with Lu Jiuyuan in terms of identity or knowledge, as early as when Lu Jiuyuan and they came, the two took the initiative to stand up, gave up the most central position to a few people, and sat on the side.
Seeing Qi Siyu's embarrassment at this time, the two of them couldn't help it. Wang Changzhi is older, he is sixty years old, there is no hope of going to school in this life, and he has some talents, so he came to the house to teach, get some salary to support his family, and at the same time fight for some fame.
Therefore, he was very stammering with Qi Yuandao.
Seeing that Qi Siyu's face was not good-looking, he didn't care if his actions would make Tang Zhao think deeply, so he hurriedly came over and took Qi Siyu's manuscript from Peng Shicheng, who had just gotten the manuscript paper and hadn't had time to read it, glanced at it twice, and praised it greatly.
Du Jinning handed in the manuscript, there was nothing to do, so she took the above as a big drama, and when she saw this situation, she couldn't help it, covered her mouth and laughed.
Wang Changzhi's move, seeing that she was even embarrassed, I don't know how the person concerned, Qi Siyu, feels.
It is unknown how Qi Siyu feels, but Tang Zhao can't stand it.
Tang Zhao glanced up at Qi Siyu, lowered his face and said, "You go back first." Your brothers haven't finished writing yet. ”
Anyone can understand the meaning of Tang Zhao's words: Everyone hasn't delivered the manuscript yet, no matter how anxious you are, no matter how ugly you look, you have to wait until everyone has submitted the manuscript for review, right?
Qi Siyu is not stupid, he naturally heard this meaning. I hated it in my heart, but I didn't dare to show it in the slightest, so I had to answer, and turned around to go back to my seat.
But I don't want to almost run into someone.
He was about to apologize, but when he raised his head, he bumped into Qi Muyuan's eyes. Qi Muyuan looked at his cold eyes, which made Qi Siyu feel a chill in his heart, and a chill rushed from the soles of his feet to his neck, and he couldn't help but shiver.
Qi Muyuan ignored him at all, walked around him, handed his poem manuscript to Tang Zhao, and then gave a salute to Tang Zhao and Lu Jiuyuan, and simply returned to his position and sat down.
He compared Du Jinning's behavior with Qi Siyu's dead-faced behavior of trying to force the teachers to praise him, and he had an immediate opinion.
Those students who feel that their poems are not good and have no sense of competition at all are not particularly attentive to writing poems, and their attention is on the stage when Du Jinning and Qi Siyu come to the stage to deliver the manuscript. Seeing this scene at this time, I couldn't help but glance at each other below.
Qi Siyu relied on his grandfather's identity to claim the king and hegemony in the school, and he was a narrow-minded person, and he used to stumble on others because others offended him. However, he did it secretively, and it was not particularly excessive, and there was a gentleman like Wang Changzhi to protect him, Tang Zhao and they didn't find out, but these couldn't be hidden from the students. Everyone also criticized him in private. It's just that I'm afraid of revenge, and I dare not speak out in anger.
Seeing him deflated at this time, everyone was quite happy.
The gentlemen's papers in the college have always been based on the way they are judged in the examination. If you feel good, you will draw a circle on it, and if you feel very good, you will write a comment on it. The more circles and the more comments, the better the poem or article will be, and the more it will win the first place.
And the seating on the stage did not follow the convention, with the center as the respect, and then sat on both sides in turn. In order to facilitate the marking of the papers, Tang Zhao sat at the front, and in the past, Lu Jiuyuan, Shi Xiu, Peng Shicheng, Wang Changzhi, and Wu Qin were in order. After Wu Qin finished reviewing the manuscript for the last time, he would hand it over to Zhaifu for statistics. The more circles and comments there are on the manuscript, the more Jaifu will rank that manuscript first.