Chapter 455: There is also a mind in the poem?

For example, in the question in front of you, although it is said that it is the bright moon, if you really directly describe the bright moon as "turning into a white jade plate", it will definitely not work. Because of "when will there be", "put the wine", "ask the blue sky", there is a poet's shadow here, you need to first analyze the state of mind of Li Bai's poem, and then write a poem related to Mingyue for his state of mind, this poem must also correspond to Li Bai's state of mind.

It's too hard, okay?

Seeing this question, Du Zheyan suddenly became excited, and whispered to Qi Siyu: "Senior brother, God help you." ”

Qi Siyu glared at him: "Silence." But the slightly upturned lips showed that he was in a good mood.

Before the examination in other hospitals, Qi Yuandao had a lot of topics for him to write essays and poems. Li Bai's poem "When is the bright moon", Qi Yuandao happened to come out, and the poem he wrote at that time was praised by Qi Yuandao.

And that poem, because it was prepared for the college examination, was not published and written on other occasions. At this time, he used this poem directly, and there was nothing wrong with it.

You know, the poetry meeting is a competition, and this speed is also a standard. Everyone should write the poem before a small piece of incense is burned, otherwise it will be punished as a failure.

And to think about a good poem in a limited time, it is not only necessary to have the talent to write poetry, but also to have inspiration and urgency. Some people can write very good poems if they are given enough time, but if they are in such a hurry, the standard will drop dramatically.

This is true for most people.

Therefore, Qi Siyu has ready-made poems available, and they are carefully crafted by him, which is a big advantage.

Liang Xiankuan is also a person who is not good at writing poems, and the poems he writes seem to be exquisite and neat, but he always lacks an aura.

Therefore, he pinned his hopes on Qi Muyuan, hoping that he could write a good poem to save face for the few of them.

So as soon as the topic came out, he didn't start thinking about it himself, but stared at Qi Muyuan. Qi Muyuan looked at the topic and frowned, obviously there was no good inspiration to write the poem at once.

Liang Xiankuan was slightly disappointed, his eyes habitually swept to Du Jinning's side, and he saw that Du Jinning was also frowning, looking embarrassed. Liang Xiankuan sighed, lowered his head and pondered the poem.

Regardless of whether he writes well or not, he has to do his part.

It's not that Du Jinning can't write poems, but he struggles with how to write them.

This entanglement is the same as the entanglement when she copied the poem during the college exam.

She thought she didn't need to copy poetry anymore except for exams. She also made up her mind that in the future, unless she took the exam, she would not copy the poems if she copied them.

But at this time, the situation was more complicated, in addition to Lu Jiuyuan, there was also Qi Siyu staring at her. Qi Siyu was unwilling to let him down during the exam. If the poems she writes now are far from the level of the poem "Linjiang Immortal", he will definitely spread rumors outside, saying that the poem she wrote in advance was written by someone in advance.

Although she was afraid of Zhao Liang and Lu Jiuyuan, Qi Siyu didn't dare to do too much, but this was not a good thing for her after all.

Moreover, there are obviously good poems that can be taken out and compared to Qi Siyu, but she is so aggrieved that she doesn't dare to use them, watching him being slapped in the face by Qi Siyu, and then watching him use this matter to make a fuss, which is really not in line with her personality.

dared to provoke her, whether it was a letter or a martial artist, she fought back fiercely, telling them to only clamp their tails and do it. Happiness and grievances, this is her character. has crossed through and been reborn, standing on the shoulders of giants, with so many resources, and living incompetently and aggrieved, she simply crashed to death.

With that in mind, she began to write poetry.

Originally, Qi Siyu was not in a hurry, thinking that these people had to think about how to get the topic for a while. In order to prevent others from suspecting, he was not in a hurry, and slowly grinded the ink, but his attention was still on Du Jinning's side.

At this time, seeing that Du Jinning actually picked up the pen and was about to write, he was surprised, so he became anxious, quickly put down the ink strip, dipped the pen in it, and began to write poems.

In any case, he has an innate advantage and must not let people take the lead. Cao Zhi is famous for his seven-step poems, which shows that the speed of making poems is also very important. Before others could think about it, he had already written the poem, and he wrote it quite well, so that his poem would amaze everyone.

After writing for a long time, seeing that the incense is almost burning, everyone has handed in the poems, and you hummed and wrote a poem, even if it is written very well, it is not eye-catching. He wouldn't do such a stupid thing.

As a sworn enemy, Qi Siyu looked at Du Jinning, and Du Jinning also looked at him and Du Zheyan. Because she knew Qi Siyu's reputation in poetry, she didn't dare to slack off in the slightest. When both poems are at the same level, the speed of the poem has to be judged. So no matter what, she had to hand in the poem before Qi Siyu.

The two of them began to write at the same time, and the pen in their hands was flying. But no matter how fast Qi Siyu writes, can he be as fast as Du Jinning, who writes thousands of words every day? If you write quickly, you are prone to mistakes. But all the books have developed a routine for the exam, no matter what you write, as long as it is something that is handed over to others for review, there can be no alteration, and there can be no taboos, otherwise no matter how good you write, it will be directly degraded.

After writing a wrong word and changing it to a piece of paper, Qi Siyu had to slow down a little, and at the same time he didn't dare to look around, but concentrated on writing the poem.

When he raised his head and was about to hand in the papers, he saw a thin figure in a blue robe already walking on the way to hand in the papers. He was in a hurry, got up and wanted to grab the front, but he didn't want to hook the table leg in a hurry, and he fell to the ground with a "horn", and the pen stand on the table fell down and smashed on him.

That's not all, because this auditorium is a place where the school gathers, and the table is not the desk they usually use, but a long table, and there are several scholars who share a table with Qi Siyu. The hook on his foot didn't knock the table over, but it shook violently. Some of the scholars were sharpening the ink, and all the ink was spilled out; Some raised their hands to write, and drew a long curve directly on the paper, not to mention that the paper was wasted, and the previous writing could not be wanted.

This situation made people want to scold Qi Siyu, but considering Qi Siyu's identity, as well as Professor Tang and the gentlemen on the stage, everyone endured this tone, but their faces were very ugly.

And this loud noise, everyone looked up and looked this way.

Du Zheyan hurriedly put down the pen, helped Qi Siyu, who was lying on the ground in a posture, and asked him with concern, "Are you okay?" ”

Qi Siyu has grown so big, he has never been so ugly, his face is flushed, and he can't wait to find a crack in the ground to get into.

The first time Lu Jiuyuan and the three of them participated in this kind of poetry meeting, the students from their own school showed their "style" in this way, and Tang Zhao was angry in his heart.

Originally, as a professor in the college, the student did not make mistakes on purpose, even if he did not say comfort, it was better not to say anything, this is the style of a professor.

But he couldn't help it, and said to Qi Siyu with a dark face: "Why are you so frizzy?" Can't be steady? ”

Du Zheyan saw that Qi Siyu was stunned and silent, so he quickly pushed him.

Qi Siyu seemed to come back to his senses at this time, and hurriedly apologized: "I'm sorry, the disciple knows that he is wrong." ”

Lu Jiuyuan and the three of them didn't have time to pay attention to what happened to Qi Siyu, at this time, they saw Du Jinning standing there with the manuscript paper, as if they were considering whether to hand over the poems or wait for Tang Zhao to hand them over when he was free, Lu Jiuyuan didn't care about whether he was arrogant or not, and said to Du Jinning: "Come, take it." Let's take a look first. ”

Only then did Du Jinning step forward and hand over the piece of paper on which the poem was written.

Shi Xiu and Peng Shicheng remembered the poem "Linjiang Immortal" written by Du Jinning during the college examination and the poem "Thought" written by Zhao Liang when he was taking the school examination, and they couldn't help it, and they came to Lu Jiuyuan's side regardless of the image and enjoyed Du Jinning's new poems together.

I saw that it was written: "Li Bai was in the moon before him, and only Li Bai's poetry can say it." Li Bai is now immortal, how round is the moon in the blue sky? Today's people still sing Li Bai's poems, and the bright moon is still like Li Baishi. I learn from Li Bai to Mingyue, can I know the moon and Li Bai'an? Li Bai can regain poetry and wine, I will repeat a thousand songs in a hundred glasses today. Although I am ashamed that I don't have Li Baicai, I don't think Yingyue thinks I'm ugly. I don't board the ship of the Son of Heaven, and I don't go to sleep in peace. There is a thatched hut outside the city of Gusu, and the peach blossoms of ten thousand trees are full of moon. ”

"Good poetry, good poetry. This poem is well written. After reading the poem, Peng Shicheng, who has the most bold personality, couldn't help but shout.

"It's good, it's good." Even Shi Xiu, who has always been emotionally restrained and self-controlled, couldn't help but applaud.

Isn't? This poem uses Li Bai's tone, and every word is inseparable from Li Bai, but it has its own novelty. The moon is inherently cloudy and sunny, but the death does not grow, and the poet immortal cannot be resurrected. The poem goes on to say that in fact, this is not a pity, because "today's people still sing Li Bai's poems, and the bright moon is still like Li Baishi", which shows that Li Bai and the bright moon will last forever.

If that's all there is to it, you can't make these three people so excited. What makes the three of them excited is that this poem is between Li Bai and Mingyue, although every sentence is inseparable from Li Bai, but there is my shadow in every sentence, expressing "my" ambition. This is what they value most in mind.

"Li Bai can poems and regain wine, I will repeat a thousand songs in a hundred cups today." This is the courage to compare Li Bai by himself, saying that he also has Li Bai's demeanor, and his confidence is overflowing. But "I" is not arrogant, and the next sentence "Although I am ashamed that there is no Li Baicai, I don't think Yingyue thinks I'm ugly." "I admire Li Bai so much, but I don't let others go. The last sentence "I don't board the ship of the Son of Heaven, and I don't go to sleep in Chang'an." There is a thatched hut outside the city of Gusu, and the peach blossoms of ten thousand trees are full of moon. He is even more dignified and detached than Li Bai, showing his noble conduct and ambition.

If Du Jinning used her two articles to expound the theory of mind during the college examination, then this poem is also the best interpreter of the theory of mind.

What about Li Bai? What about the bright moon? What about him and it? I admire them, and that doesn't stop me from surpassing them. How similar is the content of this poem to Du Jinning's original answer about how to view the "Six Classics"?