Chapter 506: Shi Yu who was tricked
That night, Ji Kong still followed Kasumigaoka Shiyu into her bedroom. Pen & Fun & Pavilion www.biquge.info
Because she said it, she just had a lot of writing things she wanted to ask Ji Kong for, and she promised again and again that she was really just discussing the plot, and there was absolutely no other meaning.
Looking at her sworn appearance, coupled with the fact that she was indeed in Kawen recently, Ji Kong believed it and followed her into the bedroom.
The layout of Kasumigaoka Shiyu's bedroom is simple and bright, and there are not too many fancy decorations, and the color with white as the main tone looks fashionable and economical, giving people a very fresh feeling, which is a little different from her own temperament, which makes Ji Kong a little surprised.
"So, what exactly do you want to ask?"
In Kasumigaoka Shiyu's bedroom, there was no extra chair, so Ji Kong had to sit on the bed and ask her questions with his arms crossed.
"Hawkers, it's been a long night, don't be so anxious, Mr. Kong, how about drinking a glass of water to replenish some water first?"
Kasumigaoka Shiyu blinked, and the smile on the corner of her lips was ambiguous.
"Don't be verbose, hurry up and get to the point."
Ji Kong's face was expressionless, but the corners of his eyebrows twitched slightly.
The title of Mr. Kong,It's still the name used by the two when they met on the Internet a long time ago.,At that time, Kasumigaoka Shiyu was not a best-selling author.,Just a budding newcomer.,Because of problems in writing, he chose to ask Ji Kong for help.γ
Because Ji Kong discovered her true identity by chance, he thought it was funny at the time, and decided to use the identity of 'Teacher Kong' to train his maid, but it was revealed afterwards, but their relationship was at an impasse for a while.
Later, although they reconciled and the relationship went further, this title is now used less, and now Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu shouted it out in private, which made Ji Kong feel a little ashamed in his heart, and at the same time, he was inexplicably a little shameful.
"Tsk...... It turns out that Ji Jun doesn't like the type of foreplay, but I don't hate this, and I prefer to go straight to the topic. β
Kasumigaoka Shiyu sat upside down, her arms folded on the back of the chair, her delicate chin resting on her arms, and she stared at Ji Kong delicately.
She was originally a very bold type, and at this time there was no one else, and she would not restrain herself, and a foul language poured out of her cherry lips, which was enough to make a pure-hearted person red-faced.
However, Ji Kong is now an old fritter, and he was not moved by her words at all, but stood up and said as if he was about to leave: "If you are long-winded, I will leave." β
"Well, Ji Jun is really puzzled."
Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu smacked his lips, and finally gave up his plan to continue to tease Ji Kong, turned around and took a notebook from the computer desk, handed it to Ji Kong, and said, "This is my outline, Ji Jun, you can take a look first." β
The outline of a novel can be said to be the essence of the novel, and Kasumigaoka Shiyu is willing to take this out to Ji Kong, which can be said to be 100% trust in him.
Unlike the first volume of "Love Metronome", which was almost completed under his guidance, the second volume of "Love Metronome" was completely created by Kasumigaoka Shiyu independently, so so far, Ji Kong doesn't know what she has written.
Holding the notebook in his hand, Ji Kong read it carefully.
The outline was not very long, and after just a few minutes, Ji Kong finished reading, and Kasumigaoka Shiyu asked, "What does Ji Jun think?" β
"It's very good, I feel like the plot is very interesting." Ji Kong nodded, "But isn't what you want to talk about Kavin?" Why are you showing me this? β
"Ji Jun, pay attention here."
Kasumigaoka Shiyu leaned over to Ji Kong's side, and her slender jade finger drew a cross on the notebook for Ji Kong to see.
"Here's Kavin?"
Ji Kong understood it all of a sudden, and then went to watch the plot again, and suddenly froze there.
"That's right."
Kasumigaoka Shiyu nodded, showing a somewhat distressed look, "For a pure girl like me, it's too difficult for me to write such a rich emotional drama, so I have to ask Ji Jun, who is an old driver, for help." β
"Don't worry, this is definitely just the purest consultation, but in order to let me understand the heroine's heart more clearly, I hope Ji Jun can play the heroine and heroine with me, of course ......"
"Your plot is very wrong!"
Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's words were interrupted by Ji Kong, who suddenly spoke, which made her slightly stunned for a moment before she spoke: "Ji Jun, what do you mean by this?" β
"This novel is only the second volume, right?"
Ji Kong's eyes were firmly fixed on the outline, bowing his head and pondering, his focused posture made Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu also can't help but get serious, and nodded yes.
"So since it's only the second volume, the hero and heroine have already gone to bed, don't you think it's too fast?"
"But Ji Jun, look carefully, this is not really going to bed, it's just an ambiguous means, in fact, after a stage, the male protagonist's childhood sweetheart will jump out to stir up the situation, so even if you write it like this, it's no problem."
"But isn't this a routine?"
Ji Kong looked at Kasumigaoka Shiyu with a sad expression, "Have you forgotten what you said to me when we first discussed?" 'Don't want to be a routine', 'want to innovate', this is your own wish, is it just a few months later, you have forgotten your original intention? β
"But Ji Jun, you also said, 'as long as you write new ideas in the routine', it is a good work, although my overall plot is clichΓ©, but you look at the process, isn't it very interesting? Especially the part where the pro-plum sweetheart accidentally rushed in because of recklessness, I laughed out loud when I wrote it. β
"Although this process is indeed new, I still think it is a little wrong, and I think you can write it like this......"
Ji Kong took the pen from the computer desk and made some changes on the second page of the notebook.
Kasumigaoka Shiyu read it and grabbed the pen again, "Ji Jun, the plot you modified is new enough, but it's obviously not interesting enough, I think you should add more things to your plot!" β
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When the clock finally rang at two o'clock in the morning, the two finally agreed, and a new outline was finally released.
"Isn't this plot much more interesting now?" Ji Kong stretched his waist and said with a smile: "I said it, for a novel, ambiguity is always secondary, and what really attracts readers is the interesting plot." β
"Cut~ Even if it's a newly changed outline, it's mainly me who contributes."
Kasumigaoka Shiyu pursed her lips, but was obviously very satisfied with the outline.
"I don't fight with you about this."
Ji Kong shook his head, patted Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's shoulder and said, "It's not early, I'll go back first, Shiyu, you should go to bed early." β
"Then Ji Jun has good night."
Kasumigaoka Shiyu nodded, she had already taken a bath, and when Ji Kong went out, she turned off the lights and went to bed, but after her head was on the pillow, she suddenly remembered - wait, did I forget something?!
"People! Dregs! Monarch! You cunning big fox! β
An angry shout came from Kasumigaoka Shiyu's bedroom, but at this time, Ji Kong had already locked the door and was lying on his big bed......