Speaking of which, I have always owed a starting point forum in the book, the long review of the book on the cloud of the New Star Literature Society, and now I will post this long comment for the reference of readers who have just entered the pit.

To be honest, this is the best long review I've ever seen, as if to say a word here, hard work, sincere thanks.

With a flattered mood, I carefully read the long review, and thanked you for your great love.

Your encouragement and suggestions, word by word, analyzed some of the details written down at that time in detail, and also pointed out a lot of foreshadowing from a high-level perspective.

The following is attached with the content of the long comment:――

[Title]: "Soul Lost Heavenly Master"

[Author]: Like

[Commentator]: Yoyo on the clouds

[Reading Chapters]: All chapters

【Book Review Content】:

Congratulations to the author in advance, unanimously passed the sweep, which means that everything has been read, and there is no one who does not like it. The works of the great gods, about that. I'm no exception, and I'm here to like it. However, from a learner's point of view.

Wonderfully described

This one is wonderful! When I saw the author's eyes describing the cute pet, I couldn't help but praise it, okay!

The author Jun takes us to see the look of cute pets, the look of contempt, the expression of the superior of the food chain when he sees the subordinate, like a lion inadvertently glances at a zebra, like a tiger casually glances at a wild boar......

Then, the author came to the conclusion that this cute pet is not ordinary.

There are expressions but no conclusions, just because they don't need to. At this point, the reader must have his own judgment. What kind of look was that? For a thousand readers, one hundred and eighty answers are normal. What I see here is full of confidence, a strong self-confidence that everything is under control.

Well, it's great! In addition to writing, the key to achieving this is writing skills.

Completely straightforward outpouring description, contempt, is very monotonous and boring. Therefore, the author gives a definition like a technical term - the food chain. It's a lot like a textbook, and it's nerve-wracking. Therefore, the author Jun translated it into popular language, and mortals must understand it at a glance. At this point, contempt, the artistic conception of the word is refined to the extreme.

If it were all there was to it, I wouldn't be so enthusiastic about it.

It turns out that the author's writing skills are very good, so why does the author only write like this here, or in some places?

The answer, of course, is, yes.

Such a careful description is needed to point out the unique identity of the cute pet, so that the male protagonist can turn into peace, and at the same time, lay the groundwork for the physical characteristics of the male protagonist. Such a hegemon, why did it come to the male protagonist? Arouse the reader's curiosity and attract the reader's attention.

Write in cumbersome when you need it and shorthand it when you don't...... The author's judgment is really strong in his ability to control words.

Praise for the characters

Calm down and look at the characters.

Even in the first person, the male protagonist didn't come up and said something like "My name is Chen You, and I'm 24 years old this year". Why? Because in the beginning, it doesn't matter if you don't say it, even if you say it, you can give it in other ways, such as returning from studying in the United States.

The characters appear one by one, the takeaway does not need a name and dress, and the uncle focuses on the description; The three of them appeared at the same time, describing King Kong and the little monk, and Gu's description was only plump when several people smoked. And the reason why it was described at that time was because of the need.

The author's grasp of the timing is just one word, and he must be presented on his knees!

The overall brilliance of the characters lies in the variety. There are those who violate the harmony department, cute pets, uncles; And King Kong is the same inside and outside, as well as the mysterious system, the second series, and the convulsions...... The real ones are endless.

This point, looking at the smell of butterfly blue, is something we know but can't do, and we still need to work hard.

Narrative ingenuity

Grind the ink and lay the paper, and first sort out the order in which the story happened. After reading the current chapter, my personal guess is as follows:

An organization has found out the magic of the male protagonist's necklace.,Before the male protagonist returned to China,,Have used their own power,Make the airport security extremely detailed.,And then steal the male owner's necklace.,The male owner has no protective cover.,Natural attributes are exposed.,Triggering a series of stories later.。 The wonderful use of the necklace has yet to be revealed, and it will be of great use.

Once the story is clear, who to start with? Of course it's the male protagonist!

Where to start? After pondering, "You can't write about people who are at the end of their rope", so there is no better place than to start with a necklace being stolen.

How do you get started? The ignorant male protagonist doesn't know what is going to happen, and all he sees in his sight is the sudden security check and the anger of the lost necklace. Therefore, when dealing with it, you must not jump out of the sight of the male protagonist, otherwise it will be equivalent to spoilers.

Speaking of which, I found that the third person is not as good as the first person. However, if the writer does not have accurate judgment, it is still not recommended. Because, in case the author himself is wrong, the reader will also be crooked......

The void of the main story

The main story, when I saw the end, especially at the beginning of the second volume, it didn't feel very good.

Short-term, or there is nothing wrong with the attraction. The male protagonist solves his own problems, introduces cases, begins to cultivate, and Tiangang appears......

Throughout the process, there is a lack of a long line, which I call the ultimate goal. For example, the full-time master is to win the championship, the Langya Bang is to take revenge, the goal of romance is for the prince and the princess to be together, the limit of the house fight is to dominate the back house, and the result of the palace fight is to become the queen mother? In short, there has to be hope...... I don't know where this hope of this article is. I can't give the title, introduction, or opening of the book.

The above is the words of one family-

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