"I've finished reading the first chapter you sent me. Pen "Fun" Pavilion www.biquge.info"

After reading the first chapter sent to him by Aya Tojo, Ji Kong typed this text into the chat box.

"What does Ji Jun think? Will it be ugly? Wouldn't the story be childish? If it does, what publishers will not reject the manuscript for? ”

You can hear from her voice how nervous Aya Tojo is at this time, but this is also a matter of course, right?

After all, she used to write for her own amusement, and this is the first time she has made up her mind to publish her own novel, so it is inevitable that she will be nervous and nervous.

Ji Kong: "Do you want me to tell the truth or tell a lie?" ”

"Is it true that my novel is poorly written?"

Seeing Ji Kong's reply, Dongcheng Aya almost collapsed, because according to the rhythm of those light novels or anime, this is obviously Ji Kong thinks that her novel is poorly written, but she is embarrassed to say it, so she deliberately expressed it in this euphemistic way.

But despite this, Dongcheng Aya still bit her lip and typed very strongly: "Ji Jun, just tell the truth, I can stand it, this is the first time I am preparing to officially publish my own novel, so I know that there must be a lot of shortcomings, if you point it out, I can know my shortcomings and then correct them." ”

"If you want to talk about the shortcomings in your novels......"

After Ji Kong typed this line, he paused, and waited for Dongcheng Aya's heart to reach his throat before continuing to type: "That is, this novel is too attractive to me!" ”

Aya Tojo: "Huh?!! ”

"Why do Taki and Sanye swap bodies? What interesting things happen when they swap bodies? Sanye knows that Taki's often touches her Oupai.,What kind of reaction will she have? I have so much to know about it! As a result, you piqued all my curiosity and told me there was only one chapter! You are a terrible sin! ”

Dongcheng Aya: "But, but Ji Jun, I've been working hard to write!" ”

Ji Kong: "Hmph! Anyway, I can't see the next chapters right now, I'm angry! What do you say? ”

Aya Tojo: "This ...... I don't know about this, why don't I write harder? Make use of your spare time......"

Even across the computer, Ji Kong can imagine Dongcheng Aya's cute expression at a loss, this quiet and beautiful girl, even if she grew up in such a family, but she still maintains a simple and simple heart, she will be easy to be shy, and she will be in a hurry because of a word from the person she cares about.

However, Ji Kong really didn't expect her to take her words seriously, so she hurriedly typed: "Haha, I'm joking with you, you must not write a novel during class, otherwise if your grades drop again, then I will really become the culprit." ”

“…… Ji Jun is so annoying, he actually makes such a bad joke! Dongcheng Ayajiao complained angrily: "And my grades are very stable now, and I will definitely not fall out of the first place." ”

Ji Kong: "Yes, you're very confident, Her Royal Highness Dongcheng Ayanu Xueba?" ”

Dongcheng Aya blushed on the computer, feeling a little ashamed of what she had just said, but after a while, she still asked, "What does Ji Jun think of my book?" ”

"I think it's good."

Ji Kong didn't joke anymore this time, and typed: "First of all, your writing is impeccable, the plot has made great progress compared to the previous speed of five centimeters per second, and the character portrayal is also very delicate, anyway, after I read your first chapter, I can't wait to read the second chapter." ”

Dongcheng Aya: "In this case, Ji Jun, do you also like this novel?" ”

"Of course I like it." Ji Kong added, "I'm sure publishers will like it too." ”

"Really? That's great......"

Dongcheng Aya paused, and then typed very determinedly: "Then that's all for today, Ji Jun, I'll start coding words right away, and strive to let Ji Jun see the second chapter in the shortest possible time!" ”

"Don't let yourself get too tired, just write slowly." Ji Kong admonished.

"Mmmm, thank you Ji Jun for your concern."

After sending this sentence, Dongcheng Aya's avatar went black, and it seemed that the code word was disconnected.

Ji Kong smiled and shook his head, but when it comes to the publication of the novel, it seems that Kasumigaoka Shiyu's "Love Metronome" has already been released, right?

Ji Kong checked on the Internet, and sure enough, the date of sale was yesterday.

And the sales record is also good, with more than 40,000 copies sold on the first day - although this is much worse than Ji Kong's "Sword Art Online", but after all, the publicity offensive of the two is not of the same level, so it is inevitable that there will be a big gap.

What's more, compared to ordinary newcomers, the first book has such sales, which is already a very good result, and it can definitely be called a "best-seller".

Just as Ji Kong was thinking this, a sound of footsteps came from the door, and then Kasumigaoka Shiyu and Shiina Mashiro pushed the door open and walked in.

"How does the church use soap?"

Ji Kong glanced at Kasumigaoka Shiyu and asked angrily.

"Isn't it natural for me to do the job?" Kasumigaoka Shiyu walked to a chair beside Ji Kong and sat down, deliberately leaned towards him, tilted his head and said, "In addition, I also taught Mahaku how to use some kitchen utensils such as microwave ovens. ”

Nowadays, Kasumigaoka Shiyu wears a low-cut outfit at home, and today is no exception.

A light green low-cut dress directly exposed her plump upper circumference under Ji Kong's eyes, and the white flower *** was simply dazzling, which made Ji Kong turn his head a little embarrassed.

"Not bad."

Ji Kong nodded, saying that he was actually very curious, and the two of them finally used whose original fat ci was used to demonstrate, but he was embarrassed to ask about this kind of thing after all, so he could only take a sip of water from the water cup to hide his embarrassment.

"Ji Jun is thinking about whose original fat ci we use?"

It is worthy of Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, she saw through Ji Kong's mind at a glance, she cocked Erlang's legs, the black and shiny stockings tempted Ji Kong's nerves, and said with a chuckle: "Should it be said that he is worthy of being a scumbag?" Even if you have a girlfriend, you can't change the true color of 'the dead house is disgusting', are you still wondering if there is a vacuum below us? If you're really curious, I can show you......"

She licked her red lips gently, and her black silk legs quietly changed their positions, so that her thighs were slightly apart, as if she was welcoming Ji Kong's arrival, that posture was simply charming, so that Ji Kong couldn't help but swallow his saliva.

However, at this moment, Shiina Mashiro said softly: "Shiyu's fat ci is drenched, and it is full of water. ”

"Poof—"

A mouthful of water from Ji Kong's mouth sprayed directly on Kasumigaoka Shiyu's chest.

Shiina Mashiro: "Ah, Shiyu's Oupai was also wet with Sora. (To be continued.) )