Chapter 223: Change only needs to take the first step!

"Xixi, you help us go to the convenience store to buy something. On the floor where the Dolphin Net writer lived in the hotel, Feng Lin shouted impatiently while knocking the door of the room.

"I'm coding words, I'm not available. Xi Xi's indifferent voice came from the room.

"Yo, what about the code, is your book read? Besides, don't you understand the meaning of your participation in the competition? Don't write it, go buy something for us!" said the honest-looking writer standing next to the maple grove.

"That's right, anyway, your book is Su Mariwen, except for those who sympathize with you, only the brain-dead and mentally handicapped will read your book!"

In fact, when Xi Xi went to the hospital for rescue because of suicide before, these dolphin network writers felt uneasy and a trace of guilt in their hearts.

It's just that the main reason for feeling uneasy and guilty is that they are afraid that if Xi Xi can't be rescued, public opinion in society will ruin their life as a writer.

And when Xi Xi rescued him and signed the contract, their uneasiness and guilt were all turned into jealousy by the amount of Xi Xi's contract posted on Weibo. Jealousy made them secretly decide to bully the table even more in the next final.

After all, in their hearts, they always thought that Xi Xi was still so weak and easy to bully as before.

As their words became more and more excessive, the door to Xixi's room suddenly opened, and the girl who came out had a rare look of coldness in her eyes.

"Of course my book has been read, and many more. Xi Xi looked at the honest-looking writer and sneered.

"Isn't it all because you're pitiful that I sympathize with your books?, I really think you're a great writer?" Looking at Xi Xi's sneer and the contemptuous look on her face, Feng Lin felt her self-esteem frustrated, and she yelled at Xi Xi hard, trying to use her voice to make the girl submit.

"Do you read my book because you see me pitiful and sympathetic to me?"

"If you are envious, you can also try to kill yourself. ”

This passage from Xi Xi. Feng Lin and the honest-looking writer suddenly felt a chill in their backs, and they looked at Xi Xi in disbelief, who seemed to have changed his temperament.

"Do you want me to teach you how to commit suicide, how to win the sympathy of the readers?" Xi Xi looked at them, her eyes revealing madness.

"Don't worry, the method I taught you won't make you feel too much pain..."

"You... You... You're crazy, aren't you? Commit suicide to gain sympathy. My book... There are a lot of people watching... You... If you don't buy it, forget it... Let's buy it ourselves..."Feng Lin looked at Xi Xi's increasingly crazy eyes, she said this sentence vaguely and fled with the writer standing on the side.

Seeing them leave their doorway, Xi Xi hurried back to the room, locked the door, and began to tremble with fear.

She is still the kind and simple little girl she used to be, and she hasn't changed at all. Everything that just now showed was just her stubbornness.

The reason for being stubborn is not just because she is fed up with this life of being fingered.

The more reason for the stubbornness is that those people not only ridicule their own books, but also ridicule the readers who read their books.

That's why she deliberately disguised her crazy personality for these reasons.

This kind of disguise made her scare away Feng Lin and the others who had been bullying her, and similarly, it also made Xi Xi, who was trembling with fear, understand a truth.

That is: if you want not to be bullied, then you have to go crazy yourself.

This truth, which is a little paranoid and a little sad, has almost run through most of the writer's life after Xi Xi.

In fact, Xi Xi should have embarked on the same positive life path as Yang Fan.

But for a writer, the environment in which he grew up determines his writing style and his future.

But that's all for later.

After Yang Fan returned to the hotel, the first thing he did was to take a comfortable bath, and in the bath, he began to reflect on the shortcomings of his books.

Although readers and book reviews did not have much of an impact on him. But as a professional writer, you should always find the shortcomings of your books and correct them.

After a short period of reflection, he quickly summed up three fatal flaws in his book so far.

1 It was because of the book review that it was difficult to distinguish between the real and the fake, and the progress of his writing of the book slowed down a lot. Generally speaking, slow heating is a kind of thing, which sounds good is precipitation, and if it is unpleasant, it consumes the reader's patience, and he must speed up the progress.

2 is that his books have written too many supporting characters, which has led to a lot of reduction in the protagonist's sense of existence, although readers like to watch the lives of supporting characters. But writing too many supporting characters can easily mess up the rhythm of the book in the later stages.

3 is also the biggest shortcoming of his book, that is, his book is not written like an online article now. Of course, this does not mean that his books are modern literature. Instead, it has become a kind of existence that is not like four, so Yang Fan has to make a choice. That choice is whether to make the book modern literature or online literature.

After taking a shower, he began to write down these three fatal flaws on paper and began to solve them one by one.

The next storyline of his story is that the flower shop owner and the noodle shop owner's son team up to defeat the star shop and the chain store, so that the old street can be restored to its original order.

Originally, Yang Fan wanted to use his own efforts and intentions to continuously improve the quality of his goods and attract customers by portraying the flower shop owner and the noodle shop owner's son, so as to achieve the purpose of repelling the two famous shops.

But yesterday's book review also reminded him in disguise that there is too much positive energy in this book, and he will always feel greasy when he drinks too much chicken soup.

Therefore, he had to think of another way to repel those two famous stores with strong capital.

This method must have a certain degree of coincidence, and it must also have a charm that can make the reader's eyes shine.

This kind of overturning and changing the original plot is more difficult than creating a new plot, and at the same time, it also requires the courage of a strong man to break his wrist.

Actually, Yang Fan didn't have to be like this. After all, he has enough readers to keep until the end of this game. However, for Yang Fan, as an author, he must strive for excellence and constantly break through himself!

"What should I do?" Yang Fan rarely frowned. Watching the minutes go by, his heart was a little confused.

"Actually, as a writer. If you find a flaw in your book and want to make up for it in the following chapters, there is only one way. At this time, Lan answered the question raised by Lin Wanting, who had just tried to write a book.

Looking at Lin Wanting's cute appearance of nodding her head and looking forward to answering her questions, Lan continued a little proudly:

"That is to highlight the presence of the protagonist! Let the protagonist use coincidence to make up for the defects of his book!"