Chapter 224: All the Coincidences in the World Come From... (Above)
Indeed, as Lan said, when a writer discovers a flaw in his book or can't open the situation, then the method is basically to strengthen the protagonist's sense of existence and use the coincidence of the story to make up for the flaw. If there is a golden finger, it is naturally the best, because it can be forced to issue tasks or items to fill the hole.
This is a common way to make up for 70% of novels on the market today.
Of course, this popular method of making up for the shortcomings does not apply to Yang Fan.
The reason is very simple, that is, Yang Fan is a paranoid writer who writes books with heart, he likes to accept the challenge of writing, and he prefers to think, so he is very troubled now.
"Coincidence, how to create coincidence?" Yang Fan closed his eyes and recalled all the experiences he had had since he wrote the book, trying to find the answer from it.
However, he soon gave up.
Because, since he wrote the book, his achievements have basically been earned by his own efforts, and it seems that this thing has never existed.
Seeing that the time had reached twelve o'clock at noon, he hadn't even coded the most basic chapter, which made him have to pause and give up thinking about it, and decided to write a chapter first and think about it after he finished writing.
Yang Fan, who has no ideas, has a lot of updated content in the first chapter, and the main content is that although the noodle shop has those kind neighbors to support it, in a society with soaring prices, the small shop that has lost a considerable number of customers is now barely enough to make ends meet.
Although it is only enough to make ends meet, the father and son of the small noodle shop are very happy.
Because, they have all found the purpose they have been fighting for all their lives!
It's a pity that the good times didn't last long, and after maintaining such a balance for a month, the manager of the star store looked at the happy father and son who were busy every day. I was secretly unhappy in my heart, in order to destroy this eye-catching happiness.
He and the store manager of a big brand chain decided to rely on the advantages of the consortium behind them with strong funds and broad contacts, and adopted the method of finding famous stores in the same type of circle and inviting them to settle in Lao Cai, in a vain attempt to force them away with money.
Of course, the main purpose of the store managers of their two big brands to invite famous stores to settle in is because they have a unique vision and can see the potential of this old street, and they want to quickly form a new chamber of commerce in this old street before the commercial street invades.
So, although the landlords of the two families missed the old relationship, they were tempted by the money offensive of the two new brand stores, so they found the owner of the small noodle shop and the owner of the flower shop, and couldn't bear to explain the reason, and put forward the condition of raising the rent by 1,000 a month and paying it for a year, wanting them to automatically give up the business.
Although this condition is helpless, they are also small people who understand and decide to give them an answer before the end of the month.
Although this chapter is a bit watery, the reader understands and supports the reader after reading this chapter repeatedly.
Because, although Yang Fan's risky actions before have lost many fans, they have also left a lot of tolerant readers from the perspective of humanity and kindness.
After all, in this world, there are always more kind people than those who are dark inside!
Yang Fan was a little moved, and repeatedly looked at the book reviews in the book review area that constantly cared about himself and guessed the follow-up stories.
It made him feel empowered, and for the first time, he began to think differently.
"If I were a reader, what kind of chapters should I expect?" Yang Fan looked at the book review and suddenly muttered to himself.
"If I were a reader, I would have expected the two small shop owners to fight back. ”
In a society where money and materialism are rampant, what can ensure fairness?"
"That's right!
"But the competition must be unfair. ”
"Then choose a big game?"
"The whole city, the whole city, and the whole country should be less unfair. ”
"Well, even if you choose a competition, how do you combine a flower shop and a noodle shop?"
"That's right, so you can write it..."
In Yang Fan's lonely self-talk, his thinking became more and more broad.
At the same time, in this lonely self-talk, he slowly found himself and experienced another wordless metamorphosis.
For a long time, Yang Fan's real flaw is that since he wrote the book, he has basically not decided the direction of the story from the perspective that readers expect. He's always been on his own with his feelings.
That doesn't mean he's not a good writer. It's just that he has been under high-intensity pressure for a long time since he wrote the book, and he doesn't have the heart and time to empathize.
However, this also proves that many seemingly difficult problems can be easily solved as long as you think about them.
So, after solving the plot problem, Yang Fan cheered up and began to update.
An hour later, the second chapter of Yang Fan was freshly released. The main content of his second chapter is:
In order to keep his father's shop and to protect the flower shop, the son of the noodle shop owner began to think of various ways to raise 240,000 yuan.
While he was raising money, he saw a game.
That competition was the National Pasta Competition. The prize money for the champion is as high as 300,000, and when he saw this competition, he immediately chose to sign up by phone, and of course, the star store also registered.
Seeing that there were only five days left before the preliminary round of the competition, he began to anxiously prepare the dishes for the competition.
He aroused the curiosity of the noodle shop owner because of his abnormal behavior of preparing dishes overseas and asking himself how to make noodles after closing the shop every day, but he was originally a man who didn't talk much, so he didn't ask much. He just watched his son's actions, and he began to feel relieved, and he unreservedly passed on his experience of making noodles for so many years.
And just like that, five days passed quickly.
On the day of the preliminary round, he asked his father to take a leave of absence to explain the situation, and he participated in the competition alone in his surprised and relieved eyes.
There were no twists and turns in the preliminary round, and he passed it smoothly. It also gave him a lot of confidence.
Then it was the city rematch four days later, and he went with confidence, but on the day of the rematch, although he passed, he only barely passed.
After all, this is just a small shop with a good reputation, and this kind of small shop will never have the strength of a big store that can constantly spend money on high-end ingredients and constantly experiment and break through.
This hit the small owner of the noodle shop, and the silent father watched his son be devastated, he just sighed, took out his last savings to buy a lot of ingredients and returned to the store, asking his son to continue to try to improve and match the soup on the opposite side with him.
The little boss looked at this full of expensive ingredients, and suddenly didn't know what to say. Because he saw the heavy father's love in the ingredients.
This fatherly love brought him back together. I followed my father and tried a variety of ingredients and soups.
In just a few days, he finally came up with a soup that seemed perfect.
This overjoyed the father and son, who went to the race with confidence to take this unique soup with them.
Of course, they unsurprisingly won the semi-finals and reached the final.
The opponent in the final is the manager of the previous star store.
On the playing field, the manager of the star store looked at the father and son contemptuously and mocked them. He expects the young and impulsive little boss to lose his mind because of the taunt and do something he can't control. However, he was soon disappointed.
Because, the little boss learned a lot of things in getting along with his father, and one of the most important things is patience.
The second chapter ends abruptly, and this wonderful update makes readers with good hearts feel that their tolerance and anticipation are worth it. At the same time, it also makes them feel that waiting is a happy thing.
As in the past, they continue to support readers in the book review section and kindly urge them to change.
Yang Fan looked at those kind book reviews, he smiled and said:
"Thank you for always being with me, you are the best readers I have ever met!"