Chapter 32 Preliminary Examination of Works (2)
For the few lucky people who can get the school's tips, everyone is obviously looking forward to it. Pen ~ fun ~ Pavilion www.biquge.info this kind of attached honor, no one does not want to be the lucky one.
Chu Yaxuan is no exception, with a small longing in her heart. However, no amount of anticipation and prayer is just a way to comfort yourself. Whether he is the lucky one or not will not know until the leader makes a statement.
looked at Liu Ting casually, and saw her smiling face, as if she was quite sure. This expression is not faked, but from the heart. It seemed that she was already sure that she would be one of the lucky ones.
The reason why I will pay attention to Liu Ting this time is because her direct competitor this time is her. Although no one knew what she was doing this time, she had already gone in this direction. The purpose is to let Liu Ting see and understand, and she has the ability compared to her.
Seeing Liu Ting's confident appearance, Chu Yaxuan felt a little inexplicable. She is too clear about Liu Ting's attainments in Chinese studies. One relied on his family relationship to get the position of a team leader. What can be done with literary water? In the past, she had to write her graduation thesis by herself. I don't know where she got her confidence.
Just when Chu Yaxuan was full of thoughts, Liu Bin on the stage spoke. He said: "Among the many manuscripts, three articles worth reading have been selected this time. ”
"Three?"
"So little?"
As soon as Liu Bin's words fell, there was a whispering discussion below. As soon as this data was released, most people were slightly disappointed. Three articles, it's a little too little.
Liu Bin continued: "First of all, let's take a look at the first article. "He was on his laptop, and then a word document appeared on the projection screen.
"Persistence"
The title looks pretty concise and crisp. At a glance, you can guess what it's about.
Seeing everyone's expressions, Liu Bin continued: "Perhaps, everyone has read this topic. You can roughly guess what you want to express here. That's right, what it says is that a person should persevere and work hard to accomplish their own things. Perhaps, anyone can write about such a subject. However, after reading the original article later, I don't know if everyone will think like this. ”
Then, Liu Bin guided everyone to read the original text. The beginning of the article is not very eye-catching, and it can even be said that it has nothing to do with the title of the article.
Probably an idea to take my own view of words as the first work in my collection of essays. For more than a year, I have been crazy, persevering, and tired. I also thought about giving up, whenever I wanted to accept the cruel reality calmly. But there are a lot of stories that can't stop appearing in my thoughts, and I can't wave them away.
Such a beginning does not seem to have any characteristics. The only thing that says it knows is that the author himself seems to have been writing all along. And I persevered, tired, and wanted to give up. Such an opening is a bit unclear for the topic. Of course, the sentences in the book are quite beautiful. Or it is the result of the author's insistence on writing. Every word is not vulgar and is used just right. It can be seen that the author's literary skills do have the ability to outperform others.
Then look down.
A friend once told me, "I think you're only five minutes hot, and when you're tired, you're not going to be so crazy anymore." "Maybe he's right, five minutes of heat, when you don't have passion, there's nothing left. When you look back at that time, you may find out how naïve you were back then. Laugh at yourself for once working for something that you can't grasp or even ethereal.
Here, unconsciously, it has entered the topic. Everyone seems to understand what the author is trying to say. And combined with the previous article, it doesn't seem abrupt at all. Looking back at the previous text, in fact, the previous text has already been expressed in this direction. It's just not easy to get people to come out. When the second paragraph comes out, the reader will suddenly understand. It turns out that the author just wants to insist on it for the sake of literature.
In the blink of an eye, the Earth has also been orbiting the sun for a cycle. I don't know how many five minutes it contained, watching the work that I had worked so hard to create break in my own hands, but it didn't work.
I was struggling with when to give up, and before I knew it, the adjective 'give up', which originally belonged to behavior, had become a noun in my mind. This word gave me so many surprises. After countless renunciations, what is given to oneself is an attachment. Eventually, it became my hobby, like an indispensable part of my life. You can ignore it, but you must not live without it.
Reading this, everyone finds out. The author has already expressed it very deeply, and once failed to create. When I finally wanted to give up, I found that after being persistent, it had become my habit. A habit that can no longer be lived without.
The rest of the text uses a figurative practice, comparing a dead leaf to a person. Through the vision of dead leaves, combined with human practices, to explain the fundamentals of today's society.
A withered leaf fell into the water. In order to adapt itself to the environment in the water and to merge itself with the great current, it constantly tries to change its state. I don't have a fixed goal, and I don't know where I'm going.
If a person can't even stick to his only hobby, what is the difference between him and that fallen leaf? What's the point of playing a role you don't like just to adapt to the cruel world of the moment and let yourself fit in, even if you have a life of fine clothes and food. It's not life, it's survival at best. Survive like a walking corpse.
Finally, there is the final point. It points out the principle that you should stick to your dreams.
If you want to be yourself, you must continue to discover yourself and find your own interests. Keep trying. Even if you can't achieve something proud, you can feel good about yourself.
The whole article is just a few hundred words, but it completely explains the dedication to dreams. Use metaphors to make readers more resonant after reading it. Ask yourself if you want to live like a walking corpse. The end result, really. Many people, when they were young, dreamed and created a scene, but later they were defeated by the cruel reality. In the end, in order to adapt to the current society, he played a role that he didn't like.
This article can be described as beautiful, with beautiful sentences and good writing. Most importantly, the story is quite well expressed. It belongs to the article that adds a little redundant and a little less missing. It can be seen that the author has really worked hard. Positive, persistent in dreams, can also be regarded as advocating positive energy.
At this time, for those who did not choose their own works, their mentality was also relieved. Other people's works do have a crushing advantage over themselves.
At this time, looking at Liu Ting again, she seriously seemed to be flashing with an unnatural edge. It seems that I feel a little surprised that it is not my own work.
Of course, it was Chu Yaxuan who was surprised by chasing. When she saw it, she couldn't believe her eyes. This seems to be similar to my own work. There is basically not much difference between the views expressed and the artistic conception expressed. It's all about persistence and persistence in dreams. The only difference is the form of expression. He used the metaphor of withered leaves, while he himself used the combination of stars and moons, and celebrities and ordinary people.