Chapter 33 Preliminary Examination of Works (3)
Chu Yaxuan compared, she and his works are both inspirational views, which are very attractive to readers, especially young readers. Pen @ fun @ pavilion wWw. ļ½ļ½ļ½Uļ½Eć ļ½ļ½ļ½ļ½
Next, let's take a look at the local works. It is also full of positive energy. ā
Liu Bin opened a document again. Title: "Let the Flower of the Soul Bloom"
The title of this article seems to have a bit of connotation.
A grassland without grass has no vitality, but a grassland without flowers is monotonous, and only the coexistence of flowers and grass will make our life richer and more beautiful.
Again, it is difficult to read the content of the topic at the beginning of the article. A decent description does not have much characteristic. The only good thing is naturally the use of writing.
This is, Chu Yaxuan noticed Liu Ting's expression, and a hint of joy flashed in her eyes.
Well? Could it be her work? She can write sentences like that! Chu Yaxuan was a little suspicious, but she didn't show it, just watched silently.
The Flower of the Soul defeats difficulties and goes further and further on the path of ideals.
Liu Wei, an armless pianist who lost his arms in an accident, composed a song of life with his strong, optimistic and high-spirited spirit. He said: "There are only two paths in my life, either die quickly or live a wonderful life. This is also the flower of his soul, which inspires him to climb the Vienna ******** with an optimistic and high attitude, allowing the world to witness the miracle of this resolute and open-minded Chinese man.
Use the flower of the soul to illustrate people's strength. Yes, that's a great idea.
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Let the flower of the soul bloom and bloom on the ideal path.
The flower of the soul defeats the greed for fame and fortune and opens alone on the path of conduct.
Thinking about Mr. Jingjie, he doesn't want to bend his waist because of five buckets of rice to the neighbors, and the flower of his soul is probably a lotus flower. Its whiteness, out of the mud but not stained, clear ripples but not demons. It let him pick chrysanthemums under the east fence and let him return to the garden; Let him be poor and be alone, and if he is good, he will help the world; Let him be happy with the trickle of the spring, and rejoice with the prosperity of the wood. The flower of his soul is like a beacon that has always guided him.
Let the flower of the soul bloom and float on the road of conduct.
The Flower of the Soul defeats mediocrity and allows you to reap the wonderful in the ordinary.
Is she ordinary? Yes. She is a school worker, her name is Yuan Sumei, she used forty-four years of perseverance, in exchange for the cordial greetings of millions of students, the flower of her soul blooms vigorously, so that everyone can feel its fragrance, surrounded by its fragrance.
Let the flower of the soul bloom, it will embellish your ordinary life and let you have the height of life.
The flowers of life grow in our spirit beyond reality and the pursuit of ideals, let us draw nutrients from them to water the flowers of our hearts, let it bloom its own brilliance, undefeated openness.
Let the flower of the soul bloom, it defeats difficulties, greed and mediocrity, blooms on the other side of success, it allows us to face difficulties, overcome difficulties, and embrace him on the other side!
The point of view expounded in the whole article is very good, the flower of the soul is not a simple flower, but a state of mind, a positive and optimistic state of mind. The spirit of perseverance and not giving up. The whole article is very infectious.
At this time, Liu Ting's snickering demeanor was obvious. It is not difficult to guess at a glance that this article was written by her. This is also what Chu Yaxuan can't figure out, Liu Ting can really write such an article. Compared with the previous "Persistence", the writing of this work is only high and not low. Slow positive energy, it is indeed a good work.
She was very skeptical that Liu Ting really had the ability to write such an article. However, the facts are in front of her, and Chu Yaxuan has to accept it. Perhaps, I failed this time. She admits that her article is indeed lacking compared to this one. Chu Yaxuan was sure that this article was definitely not written by Liu Ting herself, she must have spent money to find someone to write it on her behalf. Otherwise, a person who can't even write a paper can write such a beautiful sentence. And so cleverly conceived!
But what's the solution? Even if she didn't write it herself, since it was called to the school, then the article is in her name. Chu Yaxuan was able to meet, and the final result was obviously that she lost.
Although no one knew that she was going to compare herself, including herself. But this result still made Chu Yaxuan a little unacceptable, a person who has no literary attainments at all will actually outperform herself, and she feels cautious when she thinks about it. Although there is unwillingness, it is indeed a fact that cannot be changed. knew that this was not her original, and could only watch her show off her might.
Perhaps, after this time, Liu Ting will really be able to show her face at school. It will bring her an immeasurable aura of glory, and how many opportunities will there be left for her to move to her in the future.
After that, Liu Bin released the next work again. With a few clicks, a new interface is projected onto the screen.
"I personally liked this essay a lot, and it has also been well received by the school. The number of words is not much, and the artistic conception expressed is very decent. It's like using physics to criticize literature, but it's really different. Let's take a look. ā
When she saw the title, Chu Yaxuan was stupid, "How can the stars compete with the bright moon".
Is this true, my work has been well received by the school? Like a dream, the mood that was originally full of clouds has been rekindled with hope. His own work is also a classic article, and he wrote it completely on his own.
The other teachers watched. The first three paragraphs don't seem very proper. It's a bit of a celebrity bashing, which doesn't seem good.
Then look back.
Ordinary people bring out their extraordinary.
If you think about it, it's not. If there is no foil for ordinary people, where can you find their light.
Under the night sky, the dazzling moon is visible, and it will take you almost no effort to find it.
At this time, many people have already substituted themselves into the work.
Isn't that the reality, at night. Isn't the moon the most conspicuous thing in the sky?
In comparison, the other stars are dim and may not even be able to enter your line of sight.
Yes, many asteroids, their light is so weak that if you don't pay attention, it's really likely to be ignored.
Is this article a tribute to the roundness and fullness of the moon, in which the other stars are too slim.
How can the stars compete with the moon?
It's a point, but what does the latter mean?
Read on.
You are a star that is always radiating its own light and heat. In a remote corner, moving with a specific trajectory. You have your own mission and values. It's just because you're too far away from people's eyes that you're ignored by the public.
It was only when I read this that everyone reacted. It seems that I misunderstood. No wonder you have to add a hehe, people don't praise the moon at all, but the sister moon to highlight the value of the stars. Combined with the contrast of Kaiwen, celebrities and ordinary people. That makes sense.
This passage is like a turning point, and the reader immediately turns his gaze from the moon to the stars. And it's not abrupt at all, you can see that the author of the article is really powerful.