Comment on the big toad "Heaven and Earth War Spirit" by City Beast with a little perfectionism

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Unconsciously, he has become a scathing man (as my friend said), it's really cold!

The wandering toad's big "Heaven and Earth War Spirit" just finished reading yesterday, and I still had no intention of seeing it on the recommendation list and opening it.

After reading it, I couldn't help but marvel, and Brother Toad made another effort.

Brother Toad's characteristic is that he likes to make the protagonist strong early. This can be seen from "Tianpeng Vertical", and on "Heaven and Earth War Spirit", I saw the cultivation speed of the protagonist "Shaking the Ancient and the Modern".

Below, use the little perfectionism I have cultivated in reading online books for six years to comment on the wandering toad's "Heaven and Earth War Spirit", which is slightly inappropriate, and I also ask the author and many fans not to throw eggs! (In fact, many of the ideas are considered cold and vicious by some friends~)

The biggest advantage of "Heaven and Earth War Spirit" is its unique and novel creativity. Although it is a first-class novel of Xiuzhen, its dazzling characteristics can be clearly seen.

1First of all, it is the setting of the war spirit.

When I first watched it, I was a little cold to the ghost-filled scene, which was the sequelae of watching too many ghost movies when I was a child. But as soon as the battle spirit came out, his eyes suddenly lit up.

What is the soul of the battle? The soul of the famous general of the ancient times can basically be compared to a first-class master. The super battle soul is like Xiang Yu, Lu Bu's, and his strength is even more terrifying, comparable to the four strongest people in the world today!

The war spirits that appeared one after another include Xiang Yu, Lu Bu, Guan Yu (I didn't see it, I turned the book carefully), Huo Quzhi and others...... It's really yyy. Accepting so many famous generals for his own use, Brother Toad is violent! Seeing Kang Mingyu introduce Xiang Yu's battle spirit into his body, he was really excited, and even my old book was infected. Then I collected thousands of ghosts in my body (Star Absorbing Dafa?'s little finger?), and I wondered if Kang Mingyu would be violent. However, that paragraph is indeed a climax, showing Brother Toad's extremely strong momentum skills.

However, in private, I thought a little crookedly, Kang Mingyu actually upgraded so quickly, and said more powerful than the nouveau riche.

My favorite battle spirit is Lu Bu, who seems to be very insidious, especially the "Ghost God Limit" (what martial arts? game?). Lu Bu's appearance and image give people a cool feeling, but Xiang Yu makes him look a bit like Li Kui~ (said in private, hehe)

Also, why hasn't Guan Yu's strong battle spirit appeared yet?

Up to now, although Riman and Fantasy have ravaged the soul to the point of no return, and producing a soul has become a certain means of hot literature, but the setting of Brother Toad's battle soul - the soul of a famous general can still be said to be ingenious and eye-catching.

By the way, the toad is big, I want to see Lu Junyi and Zhuge Liang, Zhao Yun.

Get them out, I want to see the spirit of the military division.

2 And secondly, the beginning of that great part of the struggle.

The battle between the Great Sun Dharma King and the Hundred Bone Dao people feels as exciting as watching Hong Kong comics. It's just that the Great Sun Dharma King is also a little too strong, Kang Mingyu has tens of thousands of souls in his body, several strong general souls, and Xiang Yu Lu Bu's super battle soul, and even the Yuan Shen of the Hundred Bone Dao people is also attached, plus the giant snake that can fight with the Hundred Bone Dao people for a day, it can't be the second Great Sun Dharma King, and he fought for so long, and finally let him escape.

When I first read it, I didn't expect that King Da Ri would be so insidious, and I thought that like an ordinary novel, there would suddenly be a "good man master", hehe.

This battle can be said to be a very brilliant part of the first part, and it also took a lot of effort compared to Brother Toad.

3 languages.

Concise language is a good book's means of increasing the stakes. The plot of the war spirit is rich and varied, and the language describing the battle between masters is extremely exciting. ）

Some of the words are particularly spitting, such as "The thousands of yin souls that were barely suppressed just now came in and out of the seven orifices of the Ming Jade." The miserable green ghostly light and ghostly fire, the dark and dull ghostly aura were like dozens of belts, swimming outside his body. Coupled with the blue flame and thunder, the water and the clouds, Kang Mingyu's current image is a little more terrifying than the big snake. It is as vicious and vicious as the rebirth of a thousand-year-old evil ghost and the reincarnation of a hellish demon. ”

There is also "Kang Mingyu painted a scoop according to the gourd, and sure enough, the wind under the ribs was fluttering, fluttering and leisurely, but the body was full of ghosts, and the black wind was gusting, not like the gods controlling the clouds, but it was like a monster driving the wind, which was a fly in the ointment." ”

The end is vivid and vivid.

And the book portrays the image of the Great Sun Dharma King and the Hundred Bone Dao people very well, but it seems that the character of the protagonist is still a little vague~

But there are also some wounds that are unavoidable to pull the book.

1. The first injury is the uncertainty of strength.

The Great Sun Dharma King is one of the four masters in the world today, and the Hundred Bone Dao people are one of the ten demons in the world.

And Xiang Yu and Lu Bu's battle spirits are said to be not inferior to them. However, according to the performance of the battle between King Da Ri and Kang Mingyu later, the ability of King Da Ri is a completely different level, and he still has a lot of powerful secret skills that have not been shown.

This is very similar to Hong Kong Manga, which is very exciting, but the strength of the strength is a bit off the track.

In the section of the Hundred Bone Dao Thunder Tribulation, the three scattered immortals finally stayed behind to prepare to kill the Hundred Bone Dao people, and the scattered immortals are the cultivators who have not survived the tribulation, and if they survive the tribulation, they will become immortals. The Hundred Bone Dao people are demons who have not survived the tribulation, and if they survive the tribulation, they will become heavenly demons.

I thought about this paragraph for a long time.

According to common sense, the strength of a Hundred Bone Dao people should be about the same as that of a scattered immortal, they have not survived the tribulation, but they have reached the peak of their strength. But it takes three scattered immortals to deal with the Hundred Bone Dao people, is this a hundred bone Dao people too powerful? Is the Heavenly Demon more powerful than the immortals? I think it is a bit of a waste to divide three scattered immortals to deal with the Hundred Bone Dao people, because at that time, the seven people wanted to kill the Great Sun Dharma King, and leaving three such powerful Scattered Immortals in the ancient tomb is not a bit of a watermelon and sesame seeds, as if it deviated from the purpose of killing the Great Sun Dharma King.

In addition, there is also a paragraph about the doubts about strength.

The book says that as long as Kuang Shiqing breaks through the last level of the star bowl (I can't remember the name of the secret technique, hehe), he will ascend to the immortal. Then is he about the same strength as the scattered immortals? Kang Mingyu's master is also a scattered immortal, and Kang Mingyu's strength is also about the same as his master.

And Bai Yundu, the ten demons of the world, also appeared on the scene of the battle, it seems that Kuang Shiqing and Bai Yundu are of the same level, but Bai Yundu should be about the same level as the hundred bone Dao people of the ten demons in the world, and the hundred bone Dao people are about the same as the Great Sun Dharma King, and the Great Sun Dharma King is about the same as the other four people in the hands of the four masters, is it that Kuang Shiqing is about the same as his master's skills?

Thinking about this, I'm really confused.

I feel that there are too many roles in the play, and Brother Toad's pen and ink can't take care of it, which makes people wonder about the strength of the role.

However, I don't want to have a situation like Saint Seiya XX, I can't die, and then the small universe suddenly explodes, making it even more elusive and inferior in strength.

2. The second wound is about Kang Mingyu's acceptance of disciples.

I feel that since Kang Mingyu accepted the apprenticeship, the whole article has begun to become flat. Feeling, that Ma Jia feels very unpleasant, feeling like a little ruffian, with low eyes and low hands, and smugness. Personally, I think that the image of the protagonist Kang Mingyu has not yet been full, but he has divided a lot of pen and ink to write about his apprentice, which is a little regrettable.

In fact, it is completely possible to replace Ma Jia's with pets. (Of course, this is just advice.) ）

3. The third wound is the overbearing women.

I feel that all the women in the Heaven and Earth War Spirit are very strong. A sword is drawn at every turn, and that is the ...... at every turn That little fox Gu Jiuwei should be female, but she is so fierce.

Women's characteristics are not rich enough.

Actually, I like gentle women very much. I even feel that Yuan Qingyi, who is vaguely going to become the heroine now, is so strong that she doesn't feel like a gentle type.

I hope that Toad Da can then write a gentle girl, like Shuang'er, how good, hehe~ In addition, is it possible to arrange for the female war spirit to come out? I feel that there are many female famous generals in history, like Mu Guiying~

That, domineering and tough, let's write it on the female war spirit, and leave the gentleness to the other girls.

Well, the heaven and earth war soul of Toad's big "Heaven and Earth War Soul" is less than 20w, but it is so attractive, I especially want to know what will happen to those monsters in Aoki Peak when they go out?

If there is a mistake in the review, then forgive it, even if I read a book all night, my head still hurts a little.

Let's write it here, I wish Toad Da's "Heaven and Earth War Spirit" more and more exciting~

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1st Floor Reply:yangchen314 2004-12-2 11:54:51 Reply Edit

I like the character of the protagonist more.,Neither should be a saint.,It's not a howling to be a demon.,Whoever thinks about himself in advance.,But it's not necessarily completely selfish.。

2F Reply:Wandering Toad 2004-12-2 12:00:35 Reply Edit

There are really a lot of bruises......

3F Reply:City Beast 2004-12-2 12:20:15 Reply Edit

Hard injuries are inevitable in books, and the big "Heaven and Earth War Spirit" is already very exciting, and I hope to be able to show the strength of the whole world next, related to Daomen, Demon Gates, and demons. This can be more three-dimensional and immersive.

4F Reply:Mossad 2004-12-2 12:29:04 Reply Editor

Messy topping

5F Reply:HELIUM4.0026 2004-12-2 14:54:32 Reply Edit

The biggest advantage of "Heaven and Earth War Spirit" is that it did not write love scenes............

The biggest failure of "Tianpeng Vertical" is that it wrote a love scene............

6F Reply:City Beast 2004-12-2 22:33:41 Reply Edit

Brother on the 5th floor, I feel that "Heaven and Earth War Spirit" may also be about to have a love scene. Don't you have a hunch?

7F Reply:HELIUM4.0026 2004-12-2 23:03:49 Reply Edit

==Reply to the 6th floor==>>It's a little ............ But since watching "Tianpeng Zongheng", I doubt the author's level of writing love scenes............

Originally, it would be good to write a relationship that is slowly fermented from shallow to deep, but the speed of the protagonist LEVELUP is too fast, and no woman can slowly cultivate a relationship with him; if you just write a short-lived love, let it be used as an episode, and let the protagonist mature, which is also good, but it is very problematic if the author can write it............

Now it seems that the author wants the protagonist to play the hegemony play, so the woman and the mentally handicapped love should be close at hand............

8F Reply:City Beast 2004-12-3 8:13:01 Reply Edit

I am looking forward to that Bai Jiao as the heroine, and I don't have any feelings for Yuan Qingyi yet.

Also, Ma Jia is really a headache, I don't know what Toad Da will do with him in the end, he robbed a lot of scenes and said~

9F Reply:City Beast 2004-12-3 14:30:07 Reply Edit

Top, top, top, so many people watch "Heaven and Earth War Spirit", why don't many people speak?

10F Reply:Wind Rising 2004-12-5 21:19:58 Reply Edit

I really like the toad's big new work.,Make people look at it very easily.,It's not like a lot of books to look at.,Make people tired.The kind of bumpy tiredness.Toad big book,To say that the disadvantage is that the protagonist's skill is improved like taking the elevator.,To go up a few floors on a few floors,The experience of reading books makes me think,A lot of the excitement is when the protagonist is weak.,Turning defeat into victory is impressive.Of course, the invincible chic is still quite easy.In the end, we read books,It's enough to have a good book.,Support VIP,No VIP,After all, people in reality need motivation to writeI hope this war spirit can reach 1 million words, hehe