Chatter: Chapter Comments
A few random sentences, what comes to mind and what to talk about, there is no discipline.
The reason why these chapters have added so many fighting scenes,
It's because I've recently been addicted to the hot-blooded comic "Fist Wish Asura" and can't extricate myself.,
Hereby, Amway, I definitely don't regret watching it, Netflix has released two seasons of animation, and the production quality is excellent.
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The structure of the book is a bit messy with friends,
Of course, I'll admit it.
I've done it before, and this book is very special,
No outline, no drafts, quite casual,
and George RRMartin, author of A Song of Ice and Fire, is a writing idea,
Of course, when it comes to writing skills, there is a difference of 108,000 miles from others.
Complain about the state of life recently,
IT work dog, every time I go to the gym to lift weights, I have to eat, drink and socialize,
Cultural and entertainment life must be had, books must be read, games must be played, dramas must be chased,
It's not a plaything,
These are crucial for authors, and quality content cannot be written without something in their heads.
Except for rest days, you can only take advantage of the fact that your family is asleep in the middle of the night to get your liver.
When each sleep time is equal to 4,
I have to drive to work in the morning,
This creates a problem,
As there are more and more characters, the setting becomes more and more complex,
I myself don't have time to review what I've written in the past.
There are a lot of inconsistencies in the plot, and even many characters have not been heard from for a long time after they appeared.
So, I have to downplay the connection between the previous and last chapters.
In addition to a few protagonists with more scenes, new supporting roles are constantly added to help drive the plot.
It's all about simplifying the workload of proofreading before and after.
This is also the reason why the chronology is rarely mentioned in later chapters.
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My book,
Each chapter has a melody beginning and end,
Strive to achieve a dramatic emotional impact and a strong picture blessing
Some chapters can even be read as stand-alone short stories.
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Recently I had an idea,
For the sake of your own health,
For the safety of their own lives (can not drive fatigue)
If the next new book writes cyberpunk sci-fi as originally planned,
I'll change to a more specific way of writing,
The same setting, the same planet, the same city with unfamiliar characters, independent short and medium stories, with subtle connections to complete the reader's impression of the entire worldview.
Kind of like Frank Miller's comic book SinCity.
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Back to my special writing habits,
The content of the chapters reflects my own recent life,
For example, I recently watched several Napoleonic war documentaries,
Then write some war scenes.
I had a good time playing American football with my brothers, and there had to be a game there.
PLAYED THE RENTANG SWITCH GAME "FIRE EMBLEM WIND FLOWER SNOW MOON",
The image of the princess Edgar Midknight is based on the game's favorite character.
Read a book and read some emotional sentences, or learn some knowledge of European history,
Then add emotional drama and increase cultural content.
I read my favorite hot-blooded comics,
With my straightforward character,
Of course, you can't wait,
Can't wait to get your characters into the ring to fight.
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furthermore
Attentive readers will also find that
The writing style of the book often changes in the middle of the book.
For example, the fighting descriptions and character dialogues in these chapters,
It adopts the kind of happy enmity and hatred of "Water Margin", and is hot-blooded and down-to-earth.
In addition, it is also mixed with some elements of Jin Yong's martial arts.
I've been trying to make every sentence more refined,
That is to increase the vocabulary difference,
Try to avoid using the same title for the same character in a few consecutive sentences,
For example, in the first sentence, "the princess" is used
In the second sentence, use "princess in disguise"
In the third sentence, use the character's name, "Edgar." ”
The reason why some of the ethnic minority characters in the book are "me" instead of "me".
It is to reinforce the special impression of the cultural background of this character.
(The nomadic tribes of the steppes northwest of Valstad were based on the Cossacks, who had the characteristics of both Mongols and Europeans, who were good at singing and dancing, straightforward, and brave in war.) )
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And one more important point to emphasize,
The introduction of this book is an epic fantasy, but in fact it is a kind of science fiction that is not too hard to consume.
All spells and god-descendant bloodlines come from advanced alien civilizations at high latitudes,
Their technology is incomprehensible to humans, which is why it seems amazing.
There's a little bit of Cthulhu, but it's not exactly the same.
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Feel free to tie the knot:
Hardcore is hard to bite, with distinct personalities, many characters, especially difficult to remember, dark and sadistic,
The official persuasion is to retire, no one reads it, it's normal, Buddhist writing, power generation with love,
Iron fans support, vote for rewards, be grateful, work hard, and never be a eunuch.
Lying and rubbing, it's very neat, Uncle Ben is both civil and military, and he is really a talent from Jinmen!
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Everything you want to compare is over,
If you think this clumsy book is okay with the eye,
Please also comment enthusiastically, multiple barrages,
It makes my writing journey less lonely.
- Demon Tribulation Fire
2020.7.29
Legend of the Heroes of Valstad