Chapter 13 Solving the Urgent Need
The new editor taught Bey a lot of writing skills.
From the newcomer author before writing the book how to make the framework so that it will not be messy, otherwise the more words in the later stage, the easier it is to write out of order.
How to write the opening highlights can be attractive.
and then can't write for the sake of writing a supporting role, the appearance of the supporting role must be useful, and the progressive relationship between the emotional interaction of the male and female protagonists.
The QQ avatar keeps flashing.
Bey looked at the words sent by the editor and fell into thought.
Yes, the appearance of a supporting role either plays a role in promoting the plot, or paves the way for the later plot. You can't always write a few strokes if you think a character is very interesting, and throw it away when you finish writing, it has nothing to do with the plot behind, and the reader will definitely feel inexplicable.
Bey went to the stationery store and bought a king-size piece of white paper.
She plans to use this large blank sheet of paper to draw a mind map first, which is specifically used to record which part of the book each supporting character appears. What will you do when you come out? Can these things reflect her original intention of writing this book, the ideas she wants to convey, and whether they can be related to the male and female protagonists.
As a result, Bey deleted nearly 60,000 words of the manuscript without blinking.
Before, more than 60,000 words were written in some useless supporting roles, and it was really difficult for readers to write down the names of so many useless people.
She finally accepted calmly why some readers scolded her for being childish and ridiculous.
Regarding the opening, plot arrangement, including the reasonable use of supporting roles, Bey feels that as long as she is given time to understand and practice, she will always be able to figure it out.
But in the relationship between men and women, Bey was stumped.
"Old sister-in-law, you say, my little zombie baby, why should you be good to the male protagonist. My editor said, let me think about it. ”
The old sister-in-law thought to herself, because the author had a problem, so she set such a stupid shortcoming.
"From my point of view, if I don't have a bottom line for any old man, or if I am known about receiving gifts and bribes in the system, and he has evidence there, and I offend him, I will be fine. Either I cuckolded my old man......"
The old sister-in-law said this, thought about it, shook her head and added: "No, even if I cuckold him, the guilt is temporary, I will only do bad things to treat him better at the beginning." Over time, I would cuckold him and bully him at the same time. ”
The old sister-in-law originally said it in passing, but she didn't expect that this would make Bey's eyes light up.
"I see, you have to have a handle. I'm going to set up my little zombie baby, and I have the handle to get the handle in the male advocate Yang. For example, she's a zombie's secret.,Only the male owner knows.,She's afraid he'll tell it out.。 And you can't kill the male protagonist who can see the real body of the zombie at will.,Then the female protagonist will be counterattacked.。 In this way, the reader will be able to understand why my little darling listens to Zhang Yang very much and follows him step by step. ”
Bey hurriedly took out his notebook, recorded the inspiration of this moment, and also said to the old sister-in-law: "Sister-in-law, in the future, except for me reading and writing, you can talk about the rest of the time, who knows which of your words will inspire me." ”
The old sister-in-law said, "You are really using and paying now, and you don't bother me now." ”
In fact, when it comes to writing, Bey still has a lot of problems to face. For example, the male and female protagonists are two strangers who have nothing to do with each other, and it is simply a step by step to write about how they slowly develop love from acquaintance to forced companionship, and then to interaction.
But Bey didn't have time to think about it for the time being, it was a big project to earn money for writing books, and her most important task at the moment was to earn five hundred yuan in a few days.
Speaking of this, Bey was puzzled: "Sister-in-law, why don't you urge me to make money?" ”
The old sister-in-law thought to herself: I don't dare to urge, I'm afraid that I'm in a hurry, Bei Bi will rely on her beauty to make money and become a wine girl.