1. Achievement report

The book was put on the shelves on August 19, when the first order was 4200, and the average order the next day was 3200, which probably took less than 40 days, and the average order exceeded 10,000, which is gratifying.

I won't say much else.,I'm already satisfied with this result.,I originally thought I could accept it like the first two.,Even a little bit worse.。

After all, it's a double heroine and a career line, and it's really not what I'm good at before.

I am very grateful for your support.

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2. Content evaluation

To be honest, what I'm best at is probably the layout and design of a book, and the first two books are pretty much the same.

This book is no exception.

In particular, the whole period from the college entrance examination to the beginning of the school year can be regarded as a practice of my own theoretical framework.

That is, with [the development of daily feelings] as the main core, as the cool point to radiate in the entire plot line, and then with [the development of the career line] as the lead, these scattered daily lives are strung together into a complete plot.

From Xu Xing's opening to borrow Sun Wanhui's online store to accumulate a second pot of gold, to fooling Yan Chi Vinegar and Xu Niannian to take model photos, and trying every means to pull them to join the game studio, to the process of making the game, the relationship between several people finally led to the successful ending of the game on the shelves after the start of school.

This paragraph is a very classic one-time transition and transition, and book friends who follow up may complain that the pace is too slow, but for book friends who read it at one time, I dare to say that the reading experience must be very good.

However, after entering the university, because the detailed outline was not too perfect compared to the previous one, and the preparation was relatively hasty because it had to be updated every day.

Even if there is a short trim in the middle, it is actually difficult to sit to a particularly perfect level in two days.

This led to the end of the climax of the fruit assassin to the showdown with Xu Niannian, which completely relied on Xu Niannian's information difference to support the sense of expectation.

Once the information gap here is filled, and there is no good connection to the new business line, it is easy to fall into a state of weakness.

Although the confession plot of Xu Xing and Yan Chi Vinegar was also arranged in the follow-up, and a new information gap between the three was set up according to the process of the outline, this part still belongs to the sense of expectation of the emotional line and has nothing to do with the career line.

And it wasn't until I wrote this that I slowly discovered the problem.

First, the outline before the book was too perfect, and I wanted the protagonist to get involved in the Internet ecosystem and create an internal closed loop of enterprise groups similar to Alibaba and Tencent.

Theoretically speaking, relying on the ultra-high turnover of mobile games, in the period of 12 to 15 years, it can indeed hold up in theory.

In 15 and 16 years, after 4G began to expand, the development of mobile games will get better and better, and at that time, some other businesses within the group will slowly rise up and begin to compete with large groups.

But the imagination is very beautiful, and the reality is that once there are too many industries involved, the protagonist's capital chain must be very sufficient, resulting in a lack of overall sense of crisis.

In the early stage, the protagonist only has tens of thousands of yuan, and he can barely be a fruit assassin.

What impressed me the most about this point should be "The Rolling of Rebirth" written by Eagle, although it is a small white business article that does not stand up to scrutiny, but the control of the protagonist's cash flow every time in it perfectly maintains the plot tension on the career line.

At this point, I'm still too kind-hearted, or I'm prone to insecurity in terms of money, so much so that every time I get involved in this aspect, I don't dare to deduct too much from the protagonist, which leads to problems in my current career line.

Another point is that once all kinds of fields are involved, the plot length will inevitably be shared, and if you want to do a good job in the distribution of plots in several fields, there are primary and secondary, and the hierarchy is clear, which is too demanding.

The first time I seriously wrote about my career line, this time I stepped on a huge hole, and I must learn a lesson in the future.

However, this book has come to this point, so I can only continue to write it according to the current career line.

For this reason, I still cut back the content on the branch line of my business.

Including but not limited to takeaway, news push, beep, live broadcast, taxi, group buying, etc., the follow-up will focus on micro-messaging and games.

Let's be honest.

If I could do it all over again, I probably wouldn't have let Fruit Assassin's success come so quickly, I should have suppressed it to a certain extent, and then just let the protagonist play the game with peace of mind.

In this way, under the condition of ensuring that the plot of the career line is sufficient, there will be no situation similar to the above, and the development of the emotional line can also be taken into account.

But the matter has come to this point, and the future can only continue to advance according to the existing plot.

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3. Follow-up updates

There should be no update today.

Since October, the update has been postponed, and I have to take a look at the development of the follow-up plot.

Every day at 11 o'clock in the morning, I update a chapter, with a word count of more than 4,000 words, and I try to write as much as possible.

In the afternoon, it was used to deduce the follow-up plot and design, and strive to adjust the bow of the ship back.

Up to now, the average subscription is 10300+, according to the original average subscription of 3200 to calculate, owing 71 chapters, and now it has just been repaid to 4900 average subscription, that is, there are still 54 chapters owed.

In addition, as of now, this month's monthly passes have a total of 9500+, and I don't know if it can break 10,000 before the early morning.

Previously, the monthly pass plus update has been increased to 4,000 votes, and there are still 11 chapters owed in the follow-up.

If you can break 10,000 monthly tickets at night, you owe 12 chapters.

If you add up and down, you owe a total of 65 chapters.

Actually, I wouldn't have owed so much, but since the beginning of the month, I've basically added four or five thousand words and only counted one chapter, not according to the 2,000 words in a chapter.

Otherwise, with the amount of updates I have made this month, I have actually added about 240,000 words, which is about 120 chapters.

But the reality is that I've only added 36 chapters this month, all of which are 4,000 to 6,000 chapters.

Otherwise, I'd probably have already paid off all the debts (dog head)

Anyway, there should be occasional updates in October.,But the normal update is the content of the chapter at 11 o'clock.。

In addition to the activities of 5,000 votes and 3 chapters during the double monthly pass period of this website, there will be no more activities.

It's too tiring.

During this time, I almost gave up my game time, and I started at 7 o'clock on time every day as I clocked in and out, and finished work at about half past ten.

Do an eight-part Vajra exercise for the cervical spine and waist and abdomen, have lunch at about 11 o'clock, take a nap after eating, and get up at about 2 o'clock in the afternoon.

Then code the word until half past five, and have dinner.

At six o'clock in the evening, I went downstairs for a walk, came back to do a follow-up outline and outline, and watched and took a break from the video.

As for why don't you play games?

Because I'm really tired...... I don't have much energy to move after opening Genshin Impact now, and I just want to lie in bed and do nothing after every day is over.

My mind is blank, and when I write an outline, I force myself to write.

If you want to say that the plot of this book is simpler, it is okay to push the main line without brains.

As a result, the emotional line and the career line are parallel, and the career line also picks the most difficult multi-threaded mode, which is simply the rhythm of finding their own death.

In the future, if I write a career line in a new book, I will be a fool to engage in such complicated things!

The business line is still the simplest single-threaded advancement mode, and I still thought about it at the beginning, and I shouldn't have been so reckless.

All in all, please bear with me in the follow-up, daily updates and recovery 4000+, I try to pay back a little bit every month, and strive to pay it off before the end of the book...... bar.

The goal of this book is two million words, but I don't think I can control it if I have more.

However, after adding a serious career line, I still learned a lot of things, and I feel that the road of online articles will be more spacious in the future, and it will not be simply limited to the dog food article.

In the next book, I plan to try the elements of a single heroine + urban ability.,Exercise the writing ability in terms of upgrade lines.。

But it's too early to talk about this, so I won't talk about it much.

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That's all for today.

Above.

Honey Ji thank you.