Standing at the front desk of the Internet café, Chen Li hesitated for a few minutes, and finally gritted his teeth, opened a membership card in this Internet café, and recharged 500 yuan.

In order to get rich by writing, he also made a bloody investment.

He doesn't have a computer himself, and if he wants to write an online novel, he has to come to an Internet café.

And it comes every day, and the time of the day is not short.

In this way, of course, it is more cost-effective to get a membership card.

With a 20% discount, you can save a little money.

I originally wanted to charge 1,000 yuan, because it was more cost-effective to charge 1,000 and get 500 free.

But I really can't get that much money in my hand, so I can only charge five hundred.

Charge 500 and get 200 free, that can also save some money.

took out the five hundred, and he only had a few dozen yuan left in his hand.

It has only been a few months since he came out to work, and he only has a salary of eight or nine hundred yuan a month, and then he bought a mobile phone, and now he can get five hundred yuan out, which is the result of his frugality.

Fortunately, the salary will be paid in a few days, and the dozens of dollars left in my hand can be sustained.

After doing this, he felt that the blood bar was empty, and said to Yan Xin: "I have gambled all my net worth." ”

Yan Xin encouraged him: "It can be seen that you are a person who does great things, people like you are not successful, and God will not tolerate it!" ”

Yan Xin didn't apply for a card, he has a hundred yuan left now, and he won't be paid until the 15th of next month, and the hundred or so yuan will last for more than 30 days, and now he doesn't dare to spend a penny.

He came this time to see how Chen Li wrote.

The first few chapters of a web novel are very important, and if the beginning is scrapped, it will be difficult to attract readers later.

Such a good idea, it can't be ruined by Chen Li.

I didn't write a line, just read a line, and then put forward my opinion.

No author can withstand such scrutiny, which will directly collapse people's mentality.

And looking at it one by one, I can't see that it's a good thing.

Let Chen Li write a chapter first, and then see how well he writes, can you send it out.

Chen Li wanted to use the original author number to release a new book at first, but was vetoed by Yan Xin:

"Your original number has a eunuch book, and you still need that number to issue a book, but don't you tell the reader that you are a eunuch? The eunuch hurts his character, so let's use a new number. ”

Chen Li explained: "Although my book is a eunuch, it also has more than 1,000 collections, and using that number to issue books can attract the original readers." ”

Yan Xin pursed his lips: "More than a thousand collections, or brought by the eunuch book, how high can you expect the conversion value?" Compared to the negative value brought to you by the label eunuch, that little benefit is not worth mentioning. ”

He was embarrassed to say it.

More than 1,000 collections are considered a dear, huh?

He has also seen the collection of old books exceed 100,000, but the author has opened a new book for ten days, and the collection has not broken 500.

What is there to care about in the more than a thousand collections of eunuch books?

Huh!

Under his suggestion, Chen Li finally decided to open a new account, with the pen name Elbow Stewed Potato.

"Choosing such a pen name can make others think that you are a foodie, which will increase affinity." Yan Xin said so.

In fact, of course, it is to absorb the luck of later generations.

This is metaphysics.

As for the title of the book, he gave Chen Li two choices, one choice was "Breaking the Sky", and the other was "Breaking the Universe".

Chen Li chose "Breaking the Sky": "This name is more domineering. ”

"I respect your choice." Yan Xin said with a smile.

At this time, I can't wait to record a video and keep it as evidence - everyone has seen it, this is his choice, and it has nothing to do with me!

All of a sudden, there is no such guilt of plagiarism.

From his point of view, plagiarism is of course bad, but the person who wrote is Chen Li, what does it have to do with me Yan Xin? I just told him this story.

From Chen Li's point of view, I just wrote out the ideas provided by Yan Xin, which is called cooperation, how can it be called plagiarism?

In this co-op mode, a world where only the little potatoes are harmed is reached.

When Chen Li started writing, Yan Xin didn't follow him to watch, but went outside for more than half an hour.

The air in the Internet café is so bad that it's a bit unbearable after a long time.

Wandering back, Chen Li has already made the first chapter - "The Fallen Genius".

The first line is still the same sentence:

"The power of the fight, three stages!"

This first sentence is a sentence that Yan Xinqian told and repeatedly explained to Chen Li that he must add.

Without this sentence, can "Breaking the Sky" still be called "Breaking the Sky"?

It's like without the sentence "**'s high school grades are not ideal", the landlady will have no soul.

This is metaphysics, and it is also related to luck, and it must be added.

The next content, the plot is still the plot he provided, the genius boy of the Xiao family once became a waste of firewood, and he lost face and was ridiculed during the family test.

followed by the cousin of the protagonist's childhood sweetheart, as well as the genius girl who lived in the Xiao family.

The names are all taken by Chen Li, the cousin's surname is Shangguan, and the genius girl's surname is Murong.

Seeing this, Yan Xin glanced at Chen Li and thought to himself:

"It can be seen from this compound surname that this guy really grew up watching martial arts novels."

Forget it, it's nothing.

At least this cousin is surnamed Shangguan, not surnamed Xiao like the protagonist, and it is worth affirming for this.

The text is definitely different from the original, but the plot direction and the order in which the characters appear are the same.

After all, these things are provided by Yan Xin.

Just looking at it, I feel that something is not quite right.

After reading it once, and then rewatching it, I found the problem, and moved the mouse with the mouse:

"Brother Li, look at the paragraphs you have here, the description of the environment actually uses two or three hundred words, this is not good!"

Chen Li: "Huh? My description of the environment is okay, right? ”

Yan Xin said: "It's not a question of whether it's okay or not, I admit that your environment is well described and detailed, but it's not necessary." ”

"I think that describing the environment in more detail will give the reader a sense of immersion." Chen Li explained.

"Most readers don't need this feeling," Yan Xin said, "This is an online novel, and it doesn't need to be read immersively, so it doesn't need to be immersed in description, and the most important thing is to write what readers like to read." The rest of the depictions, no matter how good, are redundant. ”

Chen Li was silent, thinking about his words.

"And the first few chapters are very important, you are a newcomer who has no work to prove himself, the reader is impatient with you, you have to quickly cut to the topic and write the selling point of the novel, so that you can catch them and make them interested in continuing to read."

After Yan Xin finished speaking, he paused and said:

"Think about it, when I talk to you about this story, if I told you at the beginning what the environment of the Xiao family is like, what the courtyard layout is like, and there are a lot of chatters, do you think this story has a head? The first three chapters, which I'll call the golden three, are where you have to write out all the selling points. Unlike this core appeal, all of them are invalid descriptions and must be deleted! ”

"That's the case...... Chen Li muttered.

All of a sudden, it seemed like an epiphany, and a smile appeared on his face:

"It's got to be you! If you don't point it out, I can't even figure out how my grades can be so bad. Someone like you, if you write a novel, it's going to be a big hit. ”

Yan Xin pursed his lips, thinking to himself, "I can just speak." ”

However, he did not deny it.

It is not a bad thing to let Chen Li have such an idea.