Chapter 22 A Cause Worth Fighting For
After Chen Li finished eating, it was already two o'clock.
There were other people in the dormitory, and neither of them mentioned writing a novel.
When he went to work in the afternoon, Chen Li went to Nanmen Post and chatted with Yan Xin about the novel for more than ten minutes, and Yan Xin knew that after he left, Chen Li coded two more chapters, and when he returned to the dormitory, it was already dawn.
"No wonder you slept so dead,"
Yan Xin understood, and said,
"That's not good, let's make such a thing out to make life better, not to gamble our lives. Take your time, and it's good to have a long stream. ”
"I understand," Chen Li was a little embarrassed, "It's just that the state was so good at that time, I felt much more refreshing than reading other people's novels, and I couldn't stop at all." ”
Yan Xin understood: "It's like the difference between watching a film and doing it." ”
"Forehead ......"
Chen Li hesitated for a moment, then pondered and said:
"Sometimes the actual operation may not be cooler than watching the film, but when the actual operation, if you meet a stunning beauty, it should feel a hundred times cooler than watching the film."
I thought to myself: "When I have money, I must find a beautiful girl, and try to see if it feels a hundred times cooler than watching a movie." ”
After coming out to work, I couldn't resist my curiosity, and when I went for a walk near Huaxi Park one night, at the invitation of the young lady on the side of the road, I spent 30 yuan in the green belt half-pushed, and spent two minutes of nervous and embarrassing minutes.
No matter how high-level it is, he can't afford to consume it, he doesn't know what it's like, Yan Xin uses this as an analogy, he doesn't know if it's accurate.
It feels so embarrassing.
At the same time, I was still a little curious - Yan Xin's first thought was such an analogy, did he have practical experience?
This looks like a child!
It's not easy to ask - it's not that I'm embarrassed to ask, it's because I'm afraid that I will prick my heart after getting a positive answer.
They chatted together for more than ten minutes, more about the next plot and how it should go on.
The two of them are not in the same position, and it is not easy to communicate for too long during working hours, so they dispersed after ten minutes.
The reunion was at 11 p.m.
I took a shower as fast as I could, changed into casual clothes, and left the community with my slippers and went to the Internet café.
Yan Xin didn't stay in the Internet café for long this time, and he didn't have the money to go online, so it was not interesting to stay.
I just read the two chapters that Chen Li wrote yesterday after he left, put forward his own views from the perspective of a reader, and made suggestions in several small places.
The content of those two chapters was written about the most gimmicky divorce, Chen Li was full of that emotional value, and Yan Xin couldn't help but applaud when he read it.
After reading too many martial arts novels, I still inadvertently made a few mistakes, but they are all small flaws.
It's better to change it, and it's not much of a poison point if you don't modify it.
But Yan Xin still pointed out.
It's not that there is much of a problem with that small flaw, but he wants to make Chen Li realize that he can't have such a habit, and correct one if he finds one, which can better cultivate his writing habits in the future.
After Chen Li made changes, he felt that there was nothing to find fault with, and then left the Internet café.
Before leaving, tell Chen Li not to stay up too late.
The chapter that came out at two o'clock in the morning has passed the review and officially appeared on the website.
Although it is a newly registered author account and has no fan base, it has only been a few hours since it appeared on the website through the review, and it has already had one or two dozen collections, and it has also received recommendation votes from several readers, which makes Chen Li quite excited.
The novel he posted on this website before was a stand-alone machine a few days ago, and there were only more than 20 collections before 30,000 words, half of which were collected by the author, and people also left comments for each other's collections.
This chapter was sent out, and there were also a few comments left by the author, saying that they were collecting his novels, and I hope everyone would exchange the collections, but there are also a few comments that are from readers, and there are no additional comments that require anything other than urging changes.
These comments made Chen Li particularly excited, as if he had found a soulmate in the vast sea of the Internet.
Of course, excitement is excitement, update, or continue the chapter.
It is obviously not cost-effective to update so many without signing a contract.
The newcomer posted the book, and the first chapter only had such data for a few hours, which also made him more confident.
The second chapter was issued, and then the next content began to be typed and written.
Yan Xin has already discussed the next content with him in detail, which is even more detailed than the detailed outline, and some lines have already been figured out, such as that sentence:
"Thirty years in Hexi, thirty years in Hedong, don't bully young people into poverty!"
This sentence is also the soul of "Breaking the Sky", and it must be added.
Whether Hexi is in front or Hedong is in front, Yan Xin can't really remember, anyway, which one in front does not hinder the expression of consciousness.
He wrote very smoothly, he was only going to write two chapters, but he couldn't hold back for a while, and wrote three chapters of nearly 10,000 words, and then stopped.
But it was also past three o'clock in the morning.
After I finished writing it, I went through it again, made some changes myself, and then it was there.
Looking at the author's backstage again, in the middle of the night, there are more than 40 collections.
In the middle of the night, more than a dozen collections actually rose in two or three hours, which surprised him.
And there are also one or twenty more recommended tickets.
There were votes from yesterday's readers, and there were votes from new readers.
A few more comments have been added, so he can update it quickly.
These comments made his heart warm.
Of course, there is still no update.
I read the comments over and over again, and even clicked on each commenter's homepage to determine which ones were impersonated by the author and which ones were real readers.
It was almost four o'clock before I returned to the dormitory satisfied.
By the time he woke up, it was already half past twelve at noon, and this time he woke up naturally.
Then I saw Yan Xin writing and drawing there with a notebook, and I was immediately in awe.
When it was time for dinner, Yan Xin did not ask him to get up to eat, but helped him bring back a boxed lunch, which ensured that he had enough time to rest.
After Chen Li had eaten, the two of them left the dormitory, and Yan Xin also brought his notebook.
found a shady place in the community, opened the notebook, pointed to those keywords one by one and Chen Li started the next plot.
Chen Li mainly listens and asks, but sometimes he can also make his own suggestions for this novel.
Of course, most of his suggestions were vetoed by Yan Xin.
There is only one reason for the veto - it is not cool enough.
Yan Xin is not a simple veto, but will also explain to Chen Li why he is not cool enough, and Chen Li will be obedient.
The two of them studied the follow-up plot, chatted for more than an hour, and at 2:40, they were about to go to work, so they went back to the dormitory, changed into work clothes, and prepared to go to work.
This novel is about whether two people can get rid of poverty and become rich and live a decent life, so they are both interested.
Usually go to work quite idle, it's not that they are not unambitious, but being a security guard is not the career they want.
When they found out that there was such a cause that could lift them out of poverty, their motivation came.