Chen Li finished the first chapter and began to write the second chapter.

What is the content of the second chapter, Yan Xin has already talked to him, and when he goes to work during the day, he is thinking about how to write, and he already has the details in his heart.

At the moment, it is not difficult to express in words what has already been brewed.

In the first chapter, he hasn't changed his bad habit of writing novels, so there are a lot of things that need to be revised.

When I wrote the second chapter, I didn't do any more of the things I wanted to express, but I used the simplest words to express what I wanted to express, and it was written very smoothly.

The keyboard was snapped by him, and in less than an hour, the second chapter was coded out, with a total of more than 3,000 words.

Then let Yan Xin check if there is a problem.

At this time, there were not so many people in the Internet café, and there were many vacant seats, so Yan Xin sat next to him and slept on the table for more than half an hour.

He woke him up, rubbed his face, and went to check the contents again.

After reading it, I praised it:

"Yes, this chapter is pretty well written. It seems that what you lack is not writing ability, but a correct online thinking. ”

In this chapter, Chen Li writes the protagonist's emotions very well, with the confusion of crossing into this different world, the depression after being ridiculed, and the enthusiasm of a teenager who refuses to admit defeat and does not admit his fate, and portrays the character that Yan Xin explained to him, with a full sense of substitution.

The setting of the Douqi Continent is not procrastinating, so that readers can understand the worldview of this novel without feeling long and boring.

The last break is also something he has specially explained, and the break where the ring appears again can mobilize the reader's sense of expectation.

Of course, for an online writer, it's good to do this once in a while, and it can stretch the catch-up.

It's still very hurtful to break the context like this, and it will make the reader scold while reading it.

I watched it once, and watched it a second time.

still found a few places that made him feel too strong, and asked Chen Li to modify it.

These are all minor problems, and Chen Li can solve them in a few minutes.

Seeing the efficiency of his revision, Yan Xin also confirmed that this guy's writing ability is really there, but he is on the wrong path.

This chapter was finalized, but Yan Xin didn't let Chen Li send it out immediately.

Now that the first chapter is under review, there is no point in sending the second chapter.

And now the amount of updates to online articles is generally not large, and the new book period is even more so, and there is no problem in updating a chapter.

Chapter 2 is there.

Chen Li saw him yawning while talking, so he said:

"You're sleepy, just go back to sleep, I'll try to code two more chapters out, and you'll come back tomorrow after work."

"Two more chapters?" Yan Xin was taken aback, "It's already past three o'clock in the morning, and there are still two chapters, you don't want to die?" ”

Chen Li said with a smile: "Now my creative passion is very high, and I am in a good state, and I can't sleep when I go back, so I might as well code two more chapters." ”

"Don't fight so hard, your brain can stand it, your liver may not be able to stand it, we don't have to rush for a while." Yan Xin persuaded.

In his previous life, Yan Xin was delivered to two or three o'clock in the morning every day, and after a long time, he got liver cancer.

He didn't want Chen Li to be like this.

Chen Li disagreed, he was only twenty years old now, and he was in good physical condition, and he didn't think that staying up all night would make him sick.

However, he also knew that Yan Xin had good intentions, so he said: "Okay, I'll code another chapter out, and then go back to rest." ”

also added an explanation: "The main reason is that after listening to your words, I feel suddenly enlightened and inspired, and it is too uncomfortable not to write it." ”

Yan Xin thought about it for a while, with his hand speed, a chapter was less than an hour, and he finished work at four o'clock, and when he went to work at three o'clock in the afternoon, he still had enough time to rest, so he didn't persuade him again.

He couldn't hold it anymore, and he didn't want to hold it anymore, so he chose to go back to the dormitory to sleep.

The next day, when he woke up, it was already past eleven o'clock in the morning, and he slept quite soundly.

When I got up, I saw that Chen Li was lying on the bed and falling asleep.

Seeing that the time was up, he woke him up:

"Chen Li, it's time to get up and eat."

Chen Li woke up and looked particularly confused:

"What time will you call me?"

"It's half past eleven, it's already time for dinner, wash up and it's time to eat." Yan Xin said.

"Oh......" Chen Li responded.

I tried to open my eyes, but closed them again, and said:

"I'm a little sleepy, I don't want to go to dinner now, you go to the canteen to help me get a meal, I'll eat later."

Yan Xin thought that this guy had slept much later than himself, and he might be very sleepy now, so he answered and washed his face and brushed his teeth first.

When I came back, I saw that Chen Li was asleep again and was snoring.

Shaking his head, he thought to himself, "This guy is too hard." ”

There was a sense of guilt.

I hope this book can be a hit, otherwise I'm really sorry for this young man.

went to the cafeteria to eat, and after eating, he signed for Chen Li, gave him a box lunch, and indicated that he signed on his behalf.

Carrying a boxed lunch back to the dormitory, it was past twelve o'clock, and Chen Li was still asleep.

Wake him up and let him eat, Chen Li said, "Just leave it there, I'll eat later", and then fell asleep again.

It seems that this baby is really tired.

Seeing Chen Li trapped like this, Yan Xin was embarrassed, took out his notebook, and pondered about the classic online articles he had read over the years, and there were some pretending to be slaps in the face that could be transferred to this book.

Not all cool bridges can be transferred, and they still need to conform to the character design of this novel.

He has read online articles for a few years, and he has read a lot of them in the dark, and he remembers a lot of bridges.

Now it's in there to filter out the content that can be ported.

How to transplant it, and at which node to transplant it, that also needs to be seriously considered.

At one o'clock in the afternoon, Chen Li finally woke up, saw Yan Xin writing and drawing there with a notebook, and asked:

"Brother, what are you writing about?"

Yan Xin glanced at him: "I'm perfecting some details." ”

There is very little content on the notebook, a large plot that can hold dozens of chapters, and the keywords that fall on the paper are only a few dozen words.

The average person can't understand it.

But Chen Li is the person who is in charge of this novel, and he has also listened to Yan Xin tell the overall structure of the story, so he can understand it a little.

I don't fully understand it, but it feels amazing.

There were other people in the dormitory, and it was not easy to discuss this matter, but I sighed in my heart:

"He already understands it so well, and he works so hard, no wonder he has such a deep understanding of online texts! There are so many online geniuses in this world, it's just that some people are working hard where you can't see. ”

"I must write this novel well, otherwise how can I live up to the idea he worked so hard to come up with."