Shen Xudong hasn't changed at all...

Kang Min he wrote follows the original book, not the kind of Pan Jinlian...

Kang Min's character is actually very suitable for a theme in literature, which is called seduction and rejection and framed!

Pan Jinlian is not!

Pan Jinlian is just a slut - this mother-in-law is so good, and she loves to steal men. There are poems as evidence: Jin Lian's appearance is more decorative, smiling and frowning at Chunshan's eight-character eyebrows. If you meet a merry child, wait for the idle clouds and rain to steal the period.

What about Kang Min?

Narcissistic, extreme, and vicious, she harmed Xiao Feng, just because Xiao Feng looked at her less in the Luoyang Hundred Flowers Club, and her way of revenge on Duan Zhengchun was to kill him!

Beauty is just a tool for her revenge...

Why did you write this on purpose?

Because... There is this paragraph in memory: Mr. Jin Yong said that he was dissatisfied with the image of Kang Min in "Tianlong Babu", especially said that he was "shaped into a Pan Jinlian-like character"...

Even so, Shen Xudong was still in a hurry...

After all, it's been two days since the email and text message were sent, and there has been no response.

I'm ready to do something else!

Then I received a phone call, it was not Zhang Jizhong himself, it was the chief screenwriter of "Dragon Babu" Dai Mingyu, who directly said, "Welcome to join the screenwriting team of "Dragon Babu"! ’

Shen Xudong, of course, is all kinds of thanks...

By the way, Dai Mingyu is from the 96-level Chinese opera director department, which can be regarded as a family - he followed Mr. Liang Zuo to write "I Love My Home" when he was in college!

……

What does it mean to receive a screenwriting job for "Dragon Babu" in my freshman year?

At least in the small circle of screenwriters, Zhao Linhai, Liao Gaoxiang, Zhao Xin, including Shen Xudong, the four of them are famous!

The circle of screenwriters is very small.

Some people describe the status of screenwriters in the crew: in addition to producers, directors, actors, post-production, lighting, props, scene notes, drama affairs, photography, dubbing, field affairs, art, special effects, stand-ins, and recordings...

That is, the existence of the bottom.

How to say it, if you don't report to the group, you really don't have the right to speak at all!

By the way, what kind of screenwriter is the best?

Writing a script for a giant bull?

No, it's that you're following a big-name actor.

Basically, big-name actors will bring two screenwriters into the group to be responsible for adding scenes to themselves, the director can't control the scene at all, the script is temporarily changed again and again, it doesn't matter if the change is not good, because the big names will help the two screenwriters argue with reason, and the director is not easy to speak.

So the original screenwriter was, and these two shelved screenwriters changed it coolly, which can be called the highlight moment of screenwriters in Chinese film history...

Of course, the most important thing for screenwriters is to have skills, and the process of screenwriters' struggle is actually the process of gradual accumulation of word-of-mouth.

If the producers, directors, and investors you work with are full of praise for you every time and think that you are particularly valuable, then they will come to you next time and introduce you to other opportunities.

But then again, you have no name and no points, who will use you?

So, getting started is key!

Shen Xudong's start was very good, and even the other three people in the dormitory started differently - the screenwriter of "Dragon Babu"!

Zhang Jizhong's Jin Yong drama is the hottest drama nowadays...

can mix with this crew as a screenwriter, this start is amazing!

Although only ten episodes were received - from the eleventh chapter to the twenty-first chapter.

It was Duan Yu who was taken away from Dali by Gu Mozhi to Qiao Feng and Azhu Yanmen...

So, of course, that's a treat...

……

"Actually, it's quite difficult - many original lines must not only be consistent with the original lines in style, but also achieve general knowledge of ancient and modern meanings, which can be described as dancing with town handcuffs..."

"Jin Yong's style is not easy to imitate."

"Jin Yong's works mostly use the technique of white drawing, and the words are never deliberately gorgeous, and they are rarely lyrical. No matter how ups and downs the plot is, what Jin Lao talks about is also plain, and only by tasting it carefully can you know that it is timeless. ”

"Comparatively speaking, in fact, Gu Long's style is best imitated!"

At the dinner table, a group of people chatted about the screenwriting work of "Sky Dragon"...

"I think the most difficult thing is that the 97 version of "Dragon Babu" is in front of Zhuyu..."

Several people were silent ...

Shen Xudong interjected: "I don't think Huang Rihua acted well..."

"Huh?"

"Huang Rihua didn't act well?"

"The Hong Kong version of "Dragon Babu" Qiao Feng is a textbook hero, do you remember the beginning of "Dragon Babu"? At the beginning, the beggar gang disciples broke into the Xixia Palace, encountered the four evildoers, and saw that the enemy was too much, Qiao Feng appeared, and cast eighteen palms of dragon descent in the air, and the wicked Xixia soldiers were all repulsed. The subordinates looked up at 45 degrees and shouted: Help! This is a very typical hero appearance! ”

"Because of this, there are a large number of character interaction scenes, emphasizing the expression of emotions, so it is reflected in film and television, that is, a large number of close-ups, large close-ups, and shots like this in the middle shot."

"Tall and majestic, righteous and awe-inspiring image, this image is named Qiao Feng. And the real Qiao Feng, most of the time in the book, is not fighting for justice, but fighting against fate, he is ruthless, so he can say ruthless lines such as 'dog mongrels are the first to kill you'. ”

"Huang Rihua's version of Qiao Feng's righteousness is too strong, and he is almost out of the core idea of "fate"... You must know that the character prototype of Qiao Feng is shaped according to the ancient Greek tragic male protagonist, fighting against fate and then going to a tragic ending! ”

After a pause, Shen Xudong added: "But TVB's "Dragon Babu" is indeed a classic... Whether it's lighting, photography, or even an adaptation, it's very good-looking! It's just that his Qiao Feng is too different from the one in the book! Qiao Feng in the book dared to kill the black-hearted doctor at the age of seven! ”

Qiao Feng told Ah Zhu about this, when he was seven years old, he quietly assassinated the black-hearted doctor who bullied his mother.

It's hard for you to imagine that Huang Rihua's version of Qiao Feng did such a thing!

Zhao Linhai also said: "Yes, yes, yes, it is said in the original book: Although the beggar gang is the largest gang in the rivers and lakes, the heroes in the gang are all incarnators, and they are not high-class people who pay attention to etiquette after all, so Qiao Feng must be more gangsteric than righteous!" ”

"That's... So, we have a chance to surpass the Hong Kong version? ”

"It's not that easy... Even if the actors are right, the photography, lighting, camera movement, etc., are difficult..."

"Moving the mirror?"

"The TV screen is so big, many of the countryside is still black and white, the resolution is very low, there is no way to more than 6 people at the same time... So the martial arts filmed by TVB have a lot of close-ups, and they don't even give the actors a full-body portrait... The audience looks comfortable! Judging from "Smiling Proud Jianghu", Zhang Jizhong's Jin Yong drama likes large panoramas and long-range shots... It's not friendly to the audience! ”

"Holy, you... Actually thought of this level? ”

“…”

Shen Xudong didn't know why he didn't answer...

This is all summed up by posterity!

The bearded version of Jin Yong's drama, the fight scenes are basically 'the camera turns to the face, and then a gust of wind blows the hair away, freezes for a few seconds, and then suddenly starts with a sandstorm'...

Sometimes I even wonder if "Water Margin" was produced by Zhang Jizhong, why didn't Wu Song fight the tiger in slow motion?

As for the exterior or something...

If the costumes, color grading, and actors' performances can't keep up, it's easy to steal the scene on location!

Including Qin Se and Ming in "Smiling Proud Jianghu", Liu Zhengfeng and Qu Yang each sit on the mountains and rivers, with a far-reaching artistic conception...

But this Nima is not a picture!

Television is dynamic, with characters and stories in mind...

It's good-looking, but the scenery is too big, the characters are too small, and the TV screen is only so big, it looks very empty...

You've got to be full!

This is also the reason why many people say, 'I'm here to see martial arts, not travel guides'...

The best thing to do is actually "Game of Thrones", "Game of Thrones" is not short of money, and it rarely uses real scenes, once the on-site location is used, the tone is depressed, so that you have a vague sense of grandeur, but there is no specific impression of the exterior scene, so as to avoid stealing the scene from the location...

Liao Gaoxiang waved his hand: "Anyway, we are only responsible for writing the script... Just do your job! ”

"I'm just complaining..."

……

After settling the bills, the students went back to their dormitories.

The foursome was also about to go back to the dormitory, and Liao Gaoxiang suddenly said, "I have something..."

"Looking for Tang Yan again?" Zhao Linhai persuaded him: "Be careful, I feel like you're a little trapped!" ”

Shen Xudong was unmoved...

Whatever he does, he wasn't going to talk to someone in college anyway - how could it be interesting to talk to someone to make money?

"Sink into the hair, I'm not bored..."

Liao Gaoxiang wants to explain...

Zhao Xin interrupted him: "Go, I wish you don't come back tonight!" ”

"Fourth, do you have any instructions?"

“… Second brother, promise me, don't be a licking dog! ”

"Licking dogs?"

"People who are desperate to please others, You Tanzhi in "Dragon Babu" is a typical licking dog!"

Liao Gaoxiang left with a black face...

For no reason, Zhao Linhai sighed with emotion: "College students really should still pursue love!" ”

Shen Xudong blessed his soul and said: "Love is love when it's right, and love is youth when it's wrong?" ”

“… Yo, you know a lot, don't you? What about Qiang Jian? ”

Zhao Xin answered: "If you go to the cell by mistake, if you are right, you can get married!" ”

“…”

Shen Xudong was a little speechless, is this thing the same thing?