Liao Gaoxiang's 'broken love' did not affect Shen Xudong's daily life...

Well, it didn't even affect his own routine!

The next day, Liao Gaoxiang had already changed his target - the sophomore sister Li Yanbing...

However, the sophomore of Chinese opera is already busy running the group and filming, so it is estimated that he has little time to deal with him...

It doesn't matter, man, who isn't licking...

As long as you don't delay work, you won't say anything.

The script creation of "Dragon Babu" took half a month, and the four of them still insisted on the way of solitaire writing...

After all, the outline is set!

In fact, Zhang Jizhong's version of Jin Yong's drama, the screenwriters all take turns to write, for example, "Shooting the Condor", Shi Hang and Lan Xiaolong are responsible for starting from Guo Jing and Huang Rong meeting Qigong until the Beggars Gang Junshan Conference...

Of course, before creating, Shen Xudong specially called Senior Brother Shi Hang to ask about the precautions, and Senior Brother Shi Hang said bluntly: "Don't write too much, be concise and to the point, an episode only needs about 15,000 words..."

"I've been a fan of Jin Yong since junior high school, so I attach great importance to this creation, but in the end I still left a lot of regrets, when we handed in 28,000 words in one episode, and in the end a lot of plots were cut! By the way, how many episodes did you get? ”

"Ten episodes..."

"Then count it as ten episodes, don't write more, and don't innovate..."

"Thank you, brother..."

"Also, you have to have a good attitude! Many times, you feel like you've done your best, but many gold fans don't buy it. This can be illustrated by the last sentence of "White Horse Howling West Wind": Those are all very good, but I don't like them... If people don't like it, they don't like it, don't think about forcibly changing their opinions! ”

Shen Xudong hurriedly nodded: "Thank you, senior brother..."

"Okay, I'll go back to Chinese opera when I'm free, let's get together together!"

"Hmm..."

Hanging up the phone, Shen Xudong dialed Senior Brother Dai Mingyu again...

Senior Brother Dai Mingyu's statement is similar to Shi Hang, he told Shen Xudong to control the number of words (plot) and not to write too much, and he also instructed: "You must write a screenwriter with the mentality of watching "Tianlong" for the first time, if you are too familiar with it, the biggest harm is that you often don't feel nervous..."

"Well, I remember!"

It's...

The most important thing in a TV series is the contradiction and climax of the drama, if you are too familiar with the original book, you will subconsciously not know where the tension and excitement are!

Because you understand all the plots, you take these for granted, and subconsciously ignore them...

I told the three brothers about these precautions, and then a few people wrote down the content between the tenth chapter and the twenty-first chapter, that is, Duan Yu was taken away from Dali by Gu Mozhi to Qiao Feng and A Zhu Yanmen...

The boss simply posted in Xici Hutong to ask everyone about the memory points...

Xici Hutong is a more commonly used forum for college students today...

It's a bit like the end of the world later, and it's sticking to it.

Zhao Linhai is very active in Xici Hutong, and he is also a moderator, and there are dozens of replies every time he posts!

This will ask about "Tianlong Babu", and most of them reply to "The Battle of Shaomuro Mountain", "Apricot Forest Beggars Gang Conference"...

"You tell me, it's the content of Chapter 10 and Chapter 20..."

"Okay!"

Zhao Hailin then re-posted...

"Apricot Forest Beggars Gang Conference", "Juxianzhuang Meat Grinder"...

Then I saw a more magical reply, 'Wherever Qiao Feng appears, it's a climactic scene!' ’

This...

If you say it, you don't say it!

Shen Xudong simply took the initiative to say: "Big brother, I don't like Wang Yuyan, I won't write any scenes involving Wang Yuyan, I'll write the last three episodes!" ”

"You don't like Wang Yuyan? Why? ”

“… This girl is indistinguishable, Duan Yu is ten times stronger than Murong Fu in terms of intelligence, appearance, family background, character, and martial arts, but she blindly kneels and licks Murong Fu... To be honest, Wang Yuyan has no use in "Tianlong", she has no functional tasks, and she can't use her character to please readers. ”

“… You hate her so much? ”

"yes..."

In fact, Wang Yuyan's own setting is to highlight Duan Yu's absurd actions after entering the demon...

Duan Yu has read Buddhist scriptures since he was a child, his mind is clear, outstanding, and incompatible with all living beings, but he has a warm temperament, never cold-eyed, always smiling, and never too sharp, but in the process of pursuing Wang Yuyan, he did show the kind of undignified feelings similar to You Tanzhi who don't ask right and wrong, and are deformed to be slaves and dogs...

The true treasure jade, which is affectionate, sexual, true and spiritual, has become a muddy nightmare; The noble-minded son of the turbid world has become a pitiful worm who discarded his dignity.

When you read martial arts, of course, you are the protagonist, and it's normal to hate her!

Zhao Linhai looked at Zhao Xin, the latter was not easy to say, and assigned the task very simply: "Then you write the last three episodes, I like Wang Yuyan, I write the first three episodes, the eldest writes the apricot forest, and the second brother writes the apricot forest before Juxianzhuang?" ”

"I'm okay with that!"

"Let's get to work!"

……

Normally, script creation should be the planning of the theme→ the script story outline→ the characters→ episode outline→ script lines...

This is the normal part of the original script.

But it doesn't conform to Shen Xudong's current situation, first of all, the theme, story outline, and characters of "Dragon Babu" have already been completed...

"Tianlong Babu" has a total of 50 times, and every 10 times the retrospectives are connected together, which is a song poem.

Using poetry as a retrospective of the novel can be said to be unprecedented and unprecedented.

The five word plates are "Youth Tour", "Su Mu Sha", "Breaking the Array", "Song of the Cave Immortals" and "Water Dragon Yin", and the name of each word plate corresponds to a different protagonist in the book.

The first stage of "Youth Tour":

The green shirt is down, the dangerous peak, the jade wall is bright and the moon is bright, the horse is fragrant, the cliff is high and the people are far away, and the micro steps are born;

Whose children, whose family's courtyard, have no regrets and affection, the tiger roars and the dragon sings, the nest is changed and the phoenix is changed, and the sword is full of smoke.

The second stage of "Su Curtain Cover":

has always been stupid, drunk from then on, listening to the incense in the water pavilion, pointing out the group of heroes, drinking thousands of cups of men's affairs, in the apricot forest, discussing the righteousness of life;

In the past, because of today's meaning, Hu Han's enmity, must pour heroic tears, although thousands of people have gone to the Yanmen, quietly standing in Yanmen, there is no word left on the cliff.

Shen Xudong: They are in charge of the second stage.

The protagonist of the first stage is Duan Yu, and the second stage is a double play between Duan Yu and Qiao Feng, in which Qiao Feng is the protagonist.

The four of them decided on the beginning and the end, and then started writing!

The more people wrote, the more they felt that Jin Yong was amazing...

For example, now, Zhao Linhai sighed: "I feel that Jin Yong is still awesome!" ”

"Nonsense, people are first-class martial arts writers!"

"The key is that in more than 17 years, Jin Yong's fifteen works have hardly been interrupted."

"I heard that he was serialized at the same time as "The Book of Swords" was written at the same time, and "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" was serialized immediately after the end of "The Sword of Blood".

"The Legend of the Condor Heroes" was not finished, and "Flying Fox in the Snow Mountain" began again..."

"Not only that, the day after "Shooting the Condor" was written, "Ming Pao" was founded, and "The Condor Heroes" was serialized immediately."

"The Condor" is not over yet, and at the same time serialized "Heaven and Dragon Slayer", and the day after the end of "Yitian", "Heavenly Dragon" started again. And during this period, Jin Yong also had to write "Flying Fox Biography", "Mandarin Duck Knife", "White Horse Howling West Wind", "Liancheng Jue"..."

"He not only had to write novels, but also had to write editorials, plan, review, run supplements, read books and newspapers, and before founding Ming Pao, he also had to write scripts and essay columns..."

"Compare Gu Long, Gu Long has also written for twenty-four years, and he has more works, but the dialogues are often repeated later, and the phenomenon of abandoning the pit and ghostwriting is also consistent and common..."

"Fourth, why don't you speak?"

Shen Xudong raised his head and thought for a while: "I'm thinking, Jin Yong often writes all night in the terrifying rhythm of the daily newspaper, but he still survived - and still lives so long... I really want to know his health secrets! ”

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