Chapter Twenty-Seven: Let's Take Stock...

Shen Xudong is telling the truth...

This can be regarded as the harvest of "Dragon Babu" - I'm not an artist, I'm just a worker!

The screenwriters on the RTHK side are more thorough: what the director and producer want, the screenwriter will write for him, without his own ideas, just reflecting your ideas.

Therefore, Hong Kong and Taiwan screenwriters have been very popular in recent years!

The little master of poetry is also more willing to cooperate with Zhang Tan...

Zhao Linhai couldn't stand it anymore: "Fourth, if you have any chance, remember to take care of your senior sister!" ”

"How can I..." Shen Xudong subconsciously wanted to refuse, noticed Zhao Linhai's eyes, and hurriedly changed his words: "Definitely!" ”

"Alright, let's go back..."

"Hmm..."Shen Xudong was about to get up when his phone rang... It's Mr. Huang.

Quickly connected, explained the general schedule, and the latter asked him to send "Notes with the Group" to his office the day after tomorrow...

"Why the day after tomorrow?"

"Because tomorrow is Sunday... Still have questions? ”

"It's gone..."

Shen Xudong hung up the phone, caught up with a few of them, and a group of five went back to school...

……

Liao Gaoxiang and Liu Yun went to the playground, and the three of them went back to the dormitory first.

After making the bed, Shen Xudong suddenly remembered something and asked Zhao Xin: "Third brother?" What about your girlfriend? ”

"Broken..."

"Huh?"

Zhao Linhai interjected: "... Uh-huh, wouldn't it be broken if it was broken..."

Shen Xudong instantly understood: There is an accident here!

gave Zhao Linhai a 'talk later' look, Zhao Linhai understood, and then Zhao Xin suddenly sighed: "Sometimes I envy your second brother, emotions come and go faster!" ”

Shen Xudong hurriedly said: "He's just boring..."

Zhao Linhai also said: "Do you see that his relationship is more than three months? ”

"But he's enjoying it..."

"It's time for you to change your goals, too... I think..."

"My mind is full of work now..."Zhao Xin refused this topic, and suddenly remembered something: "Fourth, do you have any new ideas for the manuscript of "BJ Youth"? ”

"Of course there is..."

In the column of "BJ Youth", Shen Xudong will definitely not give up - big money to earn, small money can't be missed, this is a matter of principle!

He looked confident: "I'm ready to criticize Qiong Yao!" ”

Zhao Linhai was puzzled: "What's wrong with Qiong Yao?" ”

“… It's not like me, it's just that she can take over Jin Yong! ”

"Qiong Yao has been criticized enough... Can you write something new? ”

Qiong Yao's novel is seen as poisonous...

Let's put it this way, those who engage in literature, especially in literary criticism, are embarrassed to mess up if they don't scold Qiong Yao twice...

Many people criticized, and even quoted the words in "Dream of Red Mansions": "If you read miscellaneous books and change your temperament, it will not be good." ’…

Taiwan's cultural and educational circles even regard Qiong Yao's novels as a "social nuisance", and there is a great tendency that they will never give up on completely eliminating the "Qiong Yao public nuisance".

Although the mainland critics are not as extreme as the Taiwanese critics are as extreme as the Taiwanese critics, most of the articles only talk about the "innocent romance", "ethereal and ethereal", "aesthetic mode", and "limitations of artistic grade" of Qiong Yao's novels.

Shen Xudong took out a stack of manuscript paper from his bag: "Here you are... This is my new writing! ”

Zhao Linhai took it, and the title was very long: "Luping, what you lost was just a leg, but what Ziling lost was her love!" 》

The title is long, but the content is all about the three views...

By the way, I criticized the female characters in Qiong Yao's novels as soon as they encounter love, they are all thrown into death and life, as if they have no personality of their own except love, only emotional plots remain! ’

……

Zhao Linhai quickly finished reading it and shook his head: "The three views are not correct? ”

“… Isn't that right? ”

"Literary works cannot be evaluated by three views!"

Junichi Watanabe's "Paradise Lost", Yasunari Kawabata's "A Thousand Cranes", Murasaki Shikibu's "The Tale of Genji", not to mention foreign writers such as Fukuro and Bainabokov...

Their works are not only three views are not correct, there are simply no three views...

Shen Xudong shook his head: "Where can Qiong Yao's novel be called a literary work... At most, it's a toilet read! ”

“… Toilet readings should not be evaluated by three views! ”

"But adapting it into film and television has this need, and it is so widely circulated, it can be criticized!"

At this time, Zhao Xin also finished reading it, and interjected: "Our column is called "Words of the Rivers and Lakes", and Qiong Yao's works have nothing to do with the rivers and lakes!" ”

Shen Xudong was stunned for a moment, and then realized that he was a little wrong...

After a while, he said, "That... What to write? ”

""Smiling Proud Jianghu" and "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" are almost written...Can "Tianlong" and "Condor" be written?"

Shen Xudong shook his head: "I want to cooperate with the broadcast..."

Zhao Linhai said: "It's really not good, let's pause for a while..."

"That's not good, we agreed to write a manuscript a week, and what we promised was how can we go back?"

"Then who do you say to write about?"

Zhao Xin interjected: "Jin Yong Gulong, Jin Yong won't talk about it first, let's talk about Gulong's works!" ”

"Gu Long's works... It's okay, just talk about "The Peerless Twins"... Big brother, take a look first! ”

Zhao Linhai took the novel "Peerless Double Pride" handed over by Shen Xudong, opened it casually, and then said in surprise: "So thick? ”

"Haven't you seen it?"

"I've seen the previous part... I don't want to see the back one! ”

“… Don't look at the rest of the story... The book is a bit of a mess! ”

"The Peerless Twins", the first thirty chapters can definitely be called the pinnacle of the ancient dragon, but the back is almost meaningful...

Su Ying appeared very late, much like a character who was forcibly put together for a perfect ending.

Tie Xinlan hesitated for most of the book, and the reason why she finally won attention at the ending was not very convincing;

Also, there are many unreasonable and too coincidental plots in the text, Yan Nantian's skills suddenly recovered and went to the next level, which makes people play every minute, compared with Jin Yong's works, the logic and completeness are a lot worse...

In addition, Gu Long's paddling description of the battle scene is really vividly expressed in this part!

It's okay in the early and middle stages, especially Xiao Yu'er has just learned the five unique magic skills, and he has come out to be hard and hard, and there is a bit of-for-tat, the tension of one move to determine the outcome of the game, especially the fight of the ancient dragon style, which is very exciting...

What the hell is in the late stage?

Xiao Yu'er beat Wei Wuyan only existed in Su Ying's memories in a few words, and in the end, he duel with Hua Wujian actually wrote half the time that Tie Xinlan and Su Ying had a heart-to-heart talk?

The other half is all the onlookers' evaluation of the decisive battle?

After the cycad finished talking, the duel was over directly?

I understand that the theme of this battle is not the victory or defeat of the two, but the final revelation of the truth and reversal by Invite Yue, but it is really disappointing to paddle the duel like this with a book!

Shen Xudong thought for a while and said, "Let's start with "Xiao Li Flying Knife"! ”

“… Okay, so who to write about? ”

"Let's write Ah Fei... The children of Shen Lang and Bai Feifei..."

"What?"

"Haven't you seen "Blue Blood and Silver Gun"?"

"Nope!" ×2…

"There's an explanation in there..."

Insert a sentence, "Blue Blood Washing Silver Gun" is the weirdest work I have ever seen, and the opening chapter is like this: "There are four sons in the martial arts, Silver Gun, White Horse, Red Leaves, Qinglian, this generation of young people in the rivers and lakes, no one can surpass them."

Introduced to Red Leaves, it is said that he is the descendant of the world's first hero in the past 'Shen Lang'. ’

'It is said that 'Xiao Li Tanhua''s best friend in his life, the world's fastest sword 'Ah Fei', is his ancestor..."

Grandpa is Shen Lang, father is Ah Fei, master is Ye Kai, and Hongye Gongzi is not awesome!

What is it called?

Protagonist template!

As a result, as soon as he appeared, he was poisoned to death, poisoned to death...

A mouthful of old blood spurted out...

"Speaking of Ah Fei, I have an idea," Zhao Xin suddenly said: "I remember watching "Amorous Swordsman Ruthless Sword", Lin Xian'er can sleep with anyone, but she doesn't want to sleep with Ah Fei..."

Zhao Linhai said casually: "High-rank bitch..."

Shen Xudong agreed: "Gu Long has been a dog and horse for decades, and no woman has ever seen it, and it is very clear about some tricks of women hooking up with men." So, when writing a novel, it's natural to include women's personality traits..."

Speaking of this, he suddenly thought of what to write: "In this way, let's make an inventory, the first article is to take stock of the women written by Gu Long..."