317, incredible, shocking,
The main purpose of this poem is to expose the arrogance of the main general and his contempt for the enemy, and his disregard for the soldiers, resulting in the defeat of the war.
The whole article can be roughly divided into four paragraphs: the first paragraph is written in eight sentences.
The first four sentences say that the dust of war began in the northwest, and the general was ordered to conquest, and the Son of Heaven gave him special brilliance. The last four sentences are followed by the lineup.
The flags are like clouds, the drums and horns are sounding in unison, and they are mighty and mighty along the way, and they go to the battlefield in a big way, contrasting the embarrassing scene when they lose.
The second paragraph contains eight sentences about the battle.
The first four sentences of the war say that the enemy was fierce at the beginning of the war, and our Han army suffered heavy casualties, and the last four sentences said that the army was exhausted by the end of the war, and the siege could not be lifted.
The third paragraph and eight sentences are written to recruit people, and the two places look at each other, and there is no time for the reunion.
In the last four sentences, two sentences write that the soldier has decided to die for his country in a situation where there is no hope of survival;
The two poets sighed with emotion and expressed deep sympathy for the tragic fate of the soldiers.
The whole poem is vigorous, the pen is vigorous, the atmosphere is tragic and vivid, and the theme is profound and subtle.
The first two sentences of the poem point out the direction and nature of the war, which can be seen to refer to current events, and it is inspired by feelings.
"Men are self-respecting, and the Son of Heaven is very colorful", which seems to praise the mighty glory of the Han Dynasty when he went to the country, but in fact, it has been implicitly ridiculed, and the following is expected.
Fan Xu said in front of Empress Lu: "The minister is willing to get 100,000 people and run rampant among the Huns", and Ji Bu reprimanded him for bullying the king in front of him and should be beheaded.
Therefore, the origin of this "rampant" means that the enemy is underestimated bravely.
Immediately afterwards, he described the march: "Beat the gold and drum down to Yuguan, and go between the rocks." ”
Through this scene of the golden drum shaking the sky and swaggering forward, we can guess the arrogance of the general before the battle, and it is also a counterpoint for the following.
As soon as the end of the war began, "Captain Yushu flew to Hanhai", and the word "fly" warned that the military situation was critical:
"Alone in the hunting fire shines on the wolf mountain", just like "seeing the king hunting at night, riding the fire and a river, the drum is screaming, and it is shocking!" ”
From leaving home to go to the country to Yuguan and Jieshi, and even to Hanhai and Wolf Mountain, the eight-line poem summarizes the course of the expedition, gradually advancing, and the atmosphere gradually becomes tense.
The second paragraph writes that the battle was in danger and lost.
The pen is "the mountains and rivers are depressed and the extreme border soil", showing the open and risk-free area, bringing out a solemn atmosphere.
"Hu Qi" was swift and fierce, like a violent storm, sweeping the ground.
The Han army fought hard to meet the enemy, killing in the dark, not distinguishing between life and death.
However, at this very moment, those generals were far away from the position to have fun: "The beauty is still singing and dancing under the tent!" ”
Such a harsh contrast of facts effectively exposes the contradiction between the generals and the soldiers in the army, and hints at the reasons for the inevitable defeat.
Therefore, immediately after that, he wrote about the sparse army, the siege is difficult to solve, the sunset in the lonely city, the decaying grass is in the sky, and the gloomy scenery with the distinctive characteristics of the border fortress sets off the desolation of the state of mind of the remnants of the defeated soldiers.
"When you meet the enemy, you will not be able to break the siege of Guanshan."
In response to the above, the arrogance of the Han general's "rampant" has been wiped out, and his culpability is undoubtedly confirmed.
The third paragraph writes about the suffering of the soldiers, which is actually a deeper condemnation of the Han generals.
It should be noted that this is not a general description of the course of the war, but a portrayal of the feelings of soldiers in the dangerous situation of being besieged.
The following triptych of "Iron Clothes Fighting Far Away for a Long Time", a sentence of husband recruitment, and a sentence of husband suspense, are intricately opposed, and the pain of parting is gradually deepened.
The young woman in the south of the city is sad day and night, but "the side court is fluttering? ”
Jibei recruited people, looking back in vain, after all, "the boundless realm is even more vast!" ”
Thousands of miles away, never see the period, "Life is here, heaven is peaceful!" ”
It is even more like what you can see during the day, but "the murderous spirit is a cloud at three o'clock";
What I heard at night was only "the cold sound spread all night", such a critical desperate situation, it was really imminent death.
One can't help but wonder who is pushing them into this desperate situation?
This is an indispensable passage for deepening the theme.
The last four sentences are full of tragedy, and there is endless emotion.
"Looking at each other's white blades and blood, the festival of death has never been Gu Xun",
In the end, the soldiers fought bloody battles with the enemy, and the spirit of seeing death as if they were at home was not for the sake of personal merit!
How simple, kind, brave, and yet pathetic!
Mr.'s feelings contain compassion and praise, and "How Gu Xun" is a powerful ridicule of the Han generals who are lightly provocative and brave for merit.
In the last two sentences, the poet said with deep emotion: "You don't see the hardships of the battlefield, and I still remember General Huo!" ”
A hundred years ago, Hou Huo, the champion in the north of Weizhen, fell ill, loved nurses everywhere, and made the soldiers "die for Xianle".
What a stark contrast to those arrogant generals.
The poet proposed General Huo, which is particularly profound.
Over the years, there have been countless border wars, countless generals who drove soldiers like chickens and dogs, and thousands of soldiers who have endured hardships and buried their bodies in foreign lands!
However, there has only been one champion for thousands of years, and it is impossible not to teach people to remember him bitterly.
The whole poem is imposing, the pen is vigorous, and it has been muddyed after a dismal operation.
The atmosphere is tragic and vivid, and the ideas are profound and subtle.
"The mountains and rivers are depressed and the extreme border soil, and Hu rides with the wind and rain",
"The desert is poor and the autumn is stuffed with grass, and the sunset in the lonely city is sparse",
The poet deliberately hints at and exaggerates the tragic scenes, and exposes the guilt of the generals who have made great achievements with a bleak and tragic state.
In particular, in the course of the fierce war, the poet describes the complex and changing inner activities of the soldiers, which is poignant and moving, and deepens the theme.
There are stark contrasts lurking throughout the poem.
Judging from the description throughout the whole article, the soldier's service to death and the Han general's pampering and greed.
The soldiers' hard work and long battle, the separation of the family and the Han general's dereliction of duty in the battle, and the indulgence of lust are all stark contrasts.
And at the end, Huo Qu's disease is proposed, which is a comparison between before and after.
In the whole article, "the warrior army is half dead and alive, and the beauty is still singing and dancing under the tent", this contrast is very obvious, so it greatly strengthens the power of satire.
Mr. "Yan Ge Xing" This poem rhymes with rhyme in order of the "job" part of the voice,
Pingsheng "deleted" part,
Upper sound "麌" part,
Pingsheng "micro" part,
The upper voice "has" part,
The "literary" department of Pingsheng happens to be flat and even, and there is a temperate tone.
In addition to the last two sentences, the sentences that rhyme flat, the dual sentences are self-explanatory, and the non-dual sentences are also in line with the level of the rhythmic sentences.
For example, "the golden drum is under the Yuguan, and the stone is obstructed";
The rhyming sentences, the upper and lower sentences of the dual are relatively strict.
For example, "the murderous spirit is a cloud at three o'clock, and the cold sound spreads all night." ”
The beauty of such a tone is exactly "the sound of the golden iron horse, and the festival of the jade rock and the ball."
It can be said that such a work can definitely be called a peerless masterpiece of my Han Dynasty.
Such a work, the entire Han Dynasty, may only be able to write by Mr., and only he can write so well.
Because, he is a saint!
Seriously, if I could, I'd be thrilled by this poem right now, and I would love to travel back in time and strangle that silverfish.
It's just that all of this is my fantasy. ”
Huang Lun took a breath, and after saying his understanding, he sat in his live broadcast room a little lost.
A Yan Gexing really writes the cruelty of the war and the disappointment of the imperial generals, as if these audiences of the Han Dynasty today have personally experienced those years.
So at this moment, the audience in the entire live broadcast room was angry, angry at the culprit, the proud and complacent general.
So at this moment, in the live broadcast room, all the people who are scolding this person.
Even, there is no room for other barrages.
Good guy, this is the horror of Liu Nan's works!
"Damn, if I could go back in time, I'd fucking kill this guy as soon as I could.
Such people are the most hateful. When I used to study history, I didn't have much thought about the Battle of Jiuquan at all, I just thought it was just a war.
After all, I have been a Han for thousands of years and have fought too many wars.
Although I lost this war, I didn't feel any more.
But today, when I finished reading this poem, I realized how profound this war is.
At this moment, I suddenly thought of the importance of national defense, which Mr. said earlier.
I don't want to hear it anymore, someone said that the young woman in the south of the city wants to break her intestines, and she will look back on the north of the thistle.
The side court fluttered that can be measured, and there is no such verse in the boundless expanse. ”
"This friend is right, this is really heart-wrenching, and people can't help but reflect.
Today's live broadcast, in fact, is just a few words, that is, national defense and reflection.
Side-plug poems, such poems are side-plug poems.
And I want to put forward an opinion, trouble our film and television producers in the future, when filming Biansai works again, don't fucking do something that is not there.
What kind of love, what kind of flirting with other people.
What the fuck, all sorts of exaggerated plots and stuff. I'm really enough, please don't insult our martyrs. ”
"Well said, I want to say that too. The one that makes me most angry is that there is a TV series that filmed our champion Hou.
Everyone should also know that these animals shoot his uncle, shoot what to let us win the championship Hou go to the army for training, and then fight with a Hu man for a woman to be jealous or something.
I'm really enough, are you doing this for film and television works?
? I, General Huo, when did I go to practice?
He is a natural star, a person who is born to hang.
The first time they went on an expedition, they fled in embarrassment with 800 Huns, and captured the existence of countless nobles, and won the title of Marquis in World War I.
Are you sick and let him go through it? I've trained your mother, this group of illiterate people. ”
"Damn, brother, I've also seen this work, and I'm almost angry when I'm not sure.
The most excessive thing is that I am a dignified Han totem, and I am jealous of a damn broken Huns?
Oh my eye, when I saw this paragraph, I almost didn't die of anger.
According to Emperor Wu's love for our General Huo, do you know that he needs a woman, what will the other party do?
The stars in the sky will be brought down for him, let alone a woman.
What the hell am I, I don't know if these directors are brain-dead or cerebral thrombosis?
Without thirty years of cerebral thrombosis, he would definitely not have been able to write such a plot.
And that actor, what the hell are you...... Forget it, I won't talk about it, it's all tears if I talk too much. ”
Well, the topic is hot all at once. There is indeed such a TV series about Huo Qu's disease, which is really too damn insulting to people's IQ.
Don't say too much, let's come back to the live broadcast room, return to Liu Nan's live broadcast, and watch Shisheng's live broadcast again.
At this time, Liu Nan also started a new work.
It's a new lesson, and it's a new poem to appear.
That's right, it's just that the new work came out, and it was so unexpected.
It seems that the inspiration of our poet saint has no end, as long as he wants to, he can write it immediately.
Such a situation made some literati and inkmen in the live broadcast room frightened and overwhelmed.
From ancient times to the present, there is only one Liu Nan. Therefore, in a new class, Liu Nan wrote this new poem as soon as possible.
And at this moment, this poem also appeared in front of everyone.
After Zhang Chitong took a sip of wine, he couldn't help but recite this poem.
"The bright moon rises out of the Tianshan Mountains, and the vast sea of clouds.
What a bright moon out of the Tianshan Mountains, among the vast sea of clouds.
Sure enough, he is worthy of being a poet, and only he can write such a shocking work casually.
This poem, and the previous one, the Qin period, the bright moon, the Han period, and the Long March people still have a very similar style.
It's all about writing about the side, and it's all about writing so shocking.
This kind of literary style, only the poet saint Liu Nan, can only be him. ”
Yes, the first sentence directly shocked people's hearts, and the bright moon rose from the Tianshan Mountains, among the vast sea of clouds, which immediately laid the greatness of this poem.
And there is no doubt that the next content will not disappoint.
Teng Huayang was also in King Teng's Pavilion tonight, watching Liu Nan's live broadcast.
So, he was also blown away by this poem.
"The long wind is tens of thousands of miles, blowing through the Yumen Pass. God, what kind of immortal work is this, this kind of romantic side poem, only he Liu Nan can write it.
This poem gives me the feeling that it is like the original Foggy Mountain Waterfall. The flying stream went straight down to 3,000 feet, and it was suspected that the Milky Way had fallen for nine days
Such an exaggerated adjective, only he Liu Nan can write is so shocking. ”
Teng Huayang was shocked, and he was speechless.
Li Fengnian is the same, he is in his Chunjiang Building, watching the live broadcast, and he is shocked by Liu Nan's great works one after another.
"Even if Mr. live's broadcast, I didn't miss a single one, even if every one of his works, I recorded it and recited it all the time.
However, every time he writes new poems, it is still so shocking.
The long wind is tens of thousands of miles, blowing through the Yumen Pass, how wonderful! ”
After speaking, Li Fengnian couldn't help but take a sip of the wine glass, such a poem, if there is no good wine, it is really a little worse than the taste.
"Hanxia Baideng Road, Hu peep into Qingwan.
came to the battlefield, but no one returned. ”
The grandeur and shock just now are gone.
Next, there is the description of the border war. Especially from the origin of the battlefield, no one has returned, and it is written with great sadness, which makes people can't help crying.
This is a work of poetry, this is a great art.
Art is not the so-called weirdness, nor is it the kind of incompatibility, art is the exploration and description of the world.
And there is no doubt that every piece of Liu Nan's work is art.
At this moment, Ye Weidao couldn't help but marvel, and couldn't help but start chanting the last content.
"The soldiers look at the border towns, and they think of how bitter they are.
High-rise buildings are at this night, sighing is not idle. ”
"It's a good origin to go to the battlefield, and I don't see anyone returning!
This sentence really writes through the essence of war. At this moment, let me translate and appreciate it for everyone, this is the old tradition of our live broadcast room. ”
When Huang Lun's voice fell, many viewers came over, mainly for Huang Lun's appreciation and translation.
This poet has a lot of fans and is also very famous.
Because the leader of the literary world, Ye Laodu, has said one thing, that is, in terms of reading poetry, he is not necessarily better than this Huang Lun.
Therefore, Huang Lun's fame came up all of a sudden.
Moreover, some of his interpretations and analyses can really be used as the optimal solution, and he is also the person who understands Liu Dong's poetry the most.
So, they want to hear this poem, Huang Lun's explanation.
"Mr. Huang started, hehe to be honest, every time I am in the live broadcast room of Mr. Huang.
After appreciating Mr. Huang's poems, I have to come over to listen to Mr. Huang's analysis and interpretation of Mr. Huang's works.
In the whole Han Dynasty, no one is more able to read the works of the poet than Mr. Huang. ”
"That's right, I'm like this too, to be honest, some of Sir's works really need someone to help us translate them."
Huang Lun saw the discussion in the live broadcast room, and a smile appeared on his face
can let the audience say that he Huang Lun has read the poems of the poet, which is the biggest praise for him.
He likes what people say, and he's not afraid that he's just a poet.
After all, in front of the poet, no one dares to say that he is a poet.
It was also a great honor for him to be a poet who read the works of the poets.
In the years to come, he Huang Lun will definitely leave his name in the history of the Han Dynasty.
"Okay, I won't say anything superfluous, let's first translate this poem, this Guan Shanyue.
A bright moon rises from Qilian Mountain, passing through the vast sea of clouds.
The mighty long wind swept over the Wanliguan Mountain and came to the border pass where the soldiers were stationed.
At that time, our Han soldiers pointed directly to the white mountain trail, and Tubo coveted a large area of rivers and mountains in Qinghai.
In these places of conquest through the ages, few soldiers survived.
The soldiers guarding looked at the border city, and their faces were so sad and sad that they were looking forward to returning home!
When the wife of the soldier on the high-rise building in this family sighed sadly, probably did not stop.
That's what this poem translates from, and then let's start appreciating the greatness of this poem.
How good it is, what is so good, and what were some of the thoughts that Mr. had when he wrote this poem.
This poem still inherits the ancient music house in terms of content, but the penmanship is unique, and the ancient meaning is innovative.
He wrote about the hardships and hardships of the ancient border guards and condemned the suffering caused by the unjust war.
By alluding to the recklessness of the ruling class, it expresses the theme of opposing wars of aggression.
"The bright moon rises out of the Tianshan Mountains, and the vast sea of clouds. The long wind is tens of thousands of miles, blowing the Yumen Pass. ”
The four sentences are like the montage technique of film and television literature, turning the "poem title" one by one.
The images of the three poems, "Guan", "Mountain" and "Moon", which are both independent and interrelated, have laid the desolate tone of the bitter cold in the whole poem.
"Moon", out of the clouds and mist of the Tianshan Mountains, a vast sea of clouds, majestic, majestic and magnificent scene.
"Wind", the desert wind that spreads all over the sky, like a tiger roaring and a wolf howling, blowing all over the inside and outside of Yumen Pass, how huge the momentum is, how rough the exotic land is.
Mr. skillfully used the "long wind" to organically link "guan" with "moon".
The bright moon is still the same, the pass is still the same, and the men of the Long March of the past generations are gone.
When will the endless war stop?
Therefore, Mr. vividly rendered the vast and boundless objects of "Changfeng, Bright Moon, Tianshan Mountain, and Yumen Pass", creating a majestic and magnificent artistic conception of desolation and tragedy.
Through the depiction of the huge picture scroll of Biansai, Mr. weaves a "homesick" complex for the following soldiers' hometown.
"Hanxia Baideng Road, Hu peep into Qingwan. came to the battlefield, but no one returned. ”
On the basis of writing the scene, the theme of "the origin of the battlefield, no one returned".
"Hanxia Baideng Road, Hu Peep Qinghai", Mr. quoted allusions, and superimposed the grand scene of the battlefield and the battle on the natural border scenery of "Guanshan".
According to historical data: Gaozu Liu Bang once led the army to fight against the Xiongnu, and launched a desperate struggle in the area of Baishan Mountain, and Gaozu's soldiers were besieged by the Xiongnu for seven days and seven nights.
And the area around Qingwan Bay is also the place where our Han and Tubo fought for many years
This endless war over the centuries made it almost impossible for the soldiers to survive their homeland.
That helpless heartfelt drink may become the final farewell to the future battlefield battle.
This kind of painful feeling can only be relieved by drunkenness.
"The soldiers look at the border towns, and they think of how bitter they are. High-rise buildings are at this night, sighing is not idle. ”
The soldiers looked at the scene on the borderland, homesick, and their faces showed a sad color, and they speculated that their wives on the high-rise buildings would not stop sighing on this vast moonlit night.
The three words "looking at the border" seem to be written casually by Mr. Zai, but the above picture of the border and the scene of the conquest.
It's closely connected with the "Warriors". The sight is like this, and the thoughts are vast and distant.
The feelings of the high-rise women in the imagination of the soldiers and their sighs are particularly deep against the backdrop of such a vast background.
He looked at the endless ethnic conflicts that had been fought over the ancient borders.
It reveals the enormous sacrifices caused by the war and the suffering caused to countless conscripts and their families.
But there is no mere condemnation or praise of war, as if contemplating the heavy price paid for it by generations.
In the face of such a contradiction, it is easy for the gentleman himself, the recruit, and even the reader to arouse a kind of longing.
This kind of longing is not directly stated in the poem, but the idea that "the one who knows the soldier is a murder weapon, and the saint has to use it as a last resort" is easy for readers to have when reading this work.
This poem describes the scenery of Biansai, the encounter of the soldiers, and the pain of lovesickness between the soldiers and the women.
The descriptions at the beginning are all for the rendering and foreshadowing of the follow-up, and focus on the feelings caused by Mochizuki.
In a group of poets, they often write about being delicate and too sad, and the realm is often narrow to adapt to it.
But Mr. used "the bright moon rises out of the Tianshan Mountains, and the vast sea of clouds."
The long wind is tens of thousands of miles, blowing the Yumen Pass", which triggered this feeling.
Only a person with a vast mind like Mr. would write like this.
Looking at the whole poem, the artistic conception of homesickness is expressed with a vast and deep and majestic picture, which is actually the natural expression of Mr. Wang's broad mind.
This poem is broad and far-reaching, and it reads sadly and desolately, but also majestic and tragic.
I can say this, my evaluation of this poem is that I have only one poem in the Han Dynasty.
Such a work really makes people can't help but be shocked and excited. ”