I have found that when a person really likes a person or something, or that the thing or this person is really related to him, no matter how tortuous the process is, it will always come back in the end. Even if you occasionally go astray, you will be pulled back by a hand in the dark.

That's what my poetry is!

After slowly realizing that I was not a "poet fairy", the last word in my poetry writing book stopped in April of the year before I graduated from high school, and after that it was a blank slate.

It's been 26 years.

The hand that was pulled back was gout.

In October 2015, I had another gout attack.

It seems that it doesn't have to be a wine fight to be able to write a hundred poems.

Pain is okay.

I wrote a dream-like order, which should have been remembered and jealous of Li Qingzhao's ability to sleep thickly. Hey, Li Qingzhao didn't offend me, jealous of what she did, it must be Scorpio's problem.

Gout, like a dream

Tian Yu

Last night the gout flare-up,

It's hard to endure the pain in your feet.

Try to look at the pillow man,

The slumber is still the same.

Do you know,

Do you know,

I'm fat and thin.

Once again, the poetry is out of control.

I didn't study poetry systematically when I was in high school, so I decided to study it seriously this time.

I still want to thank the almighty circle of friends.

At that time, the DQ Poetry Society had a WeChat group with a public account, in which there would be regular homework, each time a theme would be emphasized or a technique would be learned, and then members would practice as required and hand in their homework before the deadline. Then the Poetry Society will send the homework handed in by the students to the public account, and there will be many times to comment.

I can't remember when, at least it can be traced back to when I started painting with Zhao Yuhua, and I slowly discovered that no matter what hobby, at least two or more people must learn together to achieve good results.

Push each other and promote each other!

So after writing the article "Like a Dream of Gout", I decided to start writing poetry again, I found and joined the WeChat group as soon as possible, and then began to submit homework one after another since 2016.

Wrote a lot.

It was at that time that my poetry made some progress, which of course compared to myself.

There are sentimental people who look at the scenery after the Ferris wheel in the children's park was dismantled.

Appeal to the Ferris wheel

Tian Lianyu

Shocked to hear that you have been far away from the blue sky,

Melancholy dark heart.

The fat baby's smiling face is still the same,

Unaware of the loneliness.

How many things,

Between the Passing Winds,

No more.

Tonight reminiscence,

For the time being,

Entrust Chanjuan.

November 16, 2016

There is a review of the year-end and year-end feelings!

Another year (lyrics Lin Zhengyun)

Tian Lianyu

Snow shadow reflecting the flat river,

It's almost the New Year again.

The lotus leaf ink of the book house is beginning to dry.

Pedestrian window shadow outside the window,

Gray hair is new.

Reminiscing about the old days,

The sword points to the blue sky.

Look at the wind and rain a few times.

Change the cup and talk and laugh,

A drunk party.

December 30, 2016

Requirements: Embed "a few times to see the wind and rain", write a poem or word on your own, and require the embedded sentence to fit the content of the whole poem, and be integrated.

Tasha Travel, To the New Year

Tian Lianyu

Calendar flipped for the first time,

Age changed again,

Gu Yingpian in the mirror.

Frolic with the past of micro-petitions,

Shaohua has been difficult to return for 18 years.

Jingtori Flower Mountain,

The sea of pen and book,

Why should the fly's head compete for height.

Painting Yao Zheng at night by the window,

In front of the park, the morning fog and clouds are watching.

January 11, 2018

Seven Laws: Feelings at the end of the year

Tian Lianyu

At the end of the year, when you recall the past, you know the success or failure of your own heart.

The shutter is diligent in shooting the sea of flowers, and the feet are busy pedaling the pool.

The pen paints the street to describe the past, and the words float in the eyes to remember the parting.

The words of relatives and friends are the best words in the world.

January 22, 2022

Human growth begins with discovering one's own shortcomings!

I studied hard while writing my homework, and slowly began to improve. Of course, this early progress still can't get rid of the hollowness.

I have a characteristic that no matter what I study, I am most impressed by the first touch. It seems that I shouldn't be the only one, but because I haven't studied what other people are like, I won't increase the impact surface.

When I first wrote poetry, I saw a poem.

Because it suits my style perfectly, I immediately remembered that it has been used by me as the golden rule of writing for so many years.

It was a seven-character quatrain, and I can't remember who wrote it. I've always had this problem, whether it's reading articles or books, I don't go to the author for the first time. As a result, I have a lot of catchy poems, but I don't know who wrote them, and I don't really want to know them, so I don't want to go to Baidu to find out the truth this time.

Because the poem itself is classic enough.

After learning to seek poetry, don't seek curiosity,

The wind runs on the water cocoon.

Ordinary scenery verbal words,

It's a poet's wonderful word.

It's been more than 30 years, and it's still going on like this.

Yes, how well it is said, whether it is writing poetry or writing, I think it is the highest level to make it clear.

As for the plot, I quoted Guo Yao above: "A truly powerful novel does not rely on the plot to win. A thrilling plot doesn't necessarily make a thrilling novel. A writer's greatest talent should be to be able to interpret the huge content that makes people's hearts tremble in the daily fragments of life. And this intellect should be based not only on a profound knowledge of life, but also on a deep insight and thorough understanding of those lives......"

Sometimes, assignments don't specify a theme, but rather require a technique to be used, so that you can play it yourself.

So I wrote a lot about kites.

One of the poems was also used as the title of the official account by the DQ Poetry Society, which greatly satisfied my vanity.

Thanks to my good habit of always posting what I think is important to WeChat Moments, I finally found the official account that I forwarded with my poems as the title.

It can be seen from the title of this issue of the official account that this issue of homework required everyone to use the "Ruan Lang Gui" word card and then write the theme of spring.

Welcoming spring, thinking of spring, thinking of spring, looking forward to spring...... Either way.

My poems can be selected from the masterpieces of many teachers in the Poetry Society, and I have thought deeply after being happy, this sentence "I know that spring is close to home, and I don't feel that it is another year" does not use any gorgeous words and allusions, it is a little bit of my own perception at that time. When I got off work, I happened to hear two people meeting to fly a kite, only to find that I was a year older unconsciously, and when I got home, I found the song sheet "March Three" sung by Su Hong on the Internet, and I matched the chords and sang for a while.

It's just a small thing.

Ruan Yingchun

Tian Lianyu

There is no opinion on the late return,

Meet to put paper kites.

Knowing that spring is close to home,

It's been another year.

Looking for sheet music, with chords,

Hum lightly on March 3.

If you want to put your heart into poetry,

It's a pity that the swallow has not been returned.

March 2, 2017

Juvenile Tour, and the wind kite in March

Tian Lianyu

In March, the wind and kite are released,

Stop and look at the drift.

swallow eagle dance,

red and yellow,

Sometimes there are wires entangled.

Who said that half a hundred children are far away?

Jusheng juvenile joy.

Stepping on dead branches,

Hand brushing new leaves,

Looking back, I feel the sky blue.

March 23, 2022

Self-evaluation: Xu was a teenager with too few things to play, so he has always been obsessed with the kite that brings him endless fun. Every March, the song that Su Hong sang always came to mind was March 3 of the year, and kites flew all over the sky...... Another is that since I read Mr. Jin Yong's "Dragon Babu" in junior high school, I have a particularly fresh memory of the table of contents in the first volume of the juvenile tour, although I didn't have the same love for poetry as I do now......

At the end of the last poem, I wrote a self-evaluation, which is also a requirement of the Poetry Society, sometimes the homework will be commented by the teacher, and sometimes the students will be asked to comment on their own poems, don't underestimate this requirement, it will make people cheer up and carve their own things, or there will be nothing to say when they self-evaluate.

There is an indispensable and important technique in poetry writing, the battle, which is also an important form of expression of poetic art.

In many word boards, it is clearly stated which sentences need to be combated. As for the poetry, regardless of the five words or seven words, the jaw couplet and the neck couplet require that they must fight.

It is still thanks to the "Rhyme of the Rhyme" that I memorized before I went to elementary school, although the intelligence at that time could probably only understand "heaven to earth, rain to wind", and did not understand what "mountain flowers to sea trees, red sun to the sky", "smoke building to snow caves, moon hall to heavenly palace" and so on. A cloud of smoke and rain, the man who fishes at night by the stream" is even more confused. But this does not prevent the seeds of the battle from taking root.

Once again, I feel that reading must be done as soon as possible.

Every time I write a sentence that requires a battle, I am careful and strive for perfection.

I remember once asked to write an assignment to recall the Long March, I repeatedly refined the battle, trekking in the jaw couplet is the foot word edge, foot rubbing print, the torch is the fire word edge, corresponding to the fire of the plain, is a rare poem that I have written more satisfactorily in these years.

Seven Laws: Remembering the Long March

Tian Lianyu

The thick velvet still feels that the north wind is cold, and suddenly remembers the long march over the snow-capped mountains.

Trekking thousands of peaks and foot rubbing, torching thousands of miles of fire and burning the plain.

The blood-stained flag of the heroic spirit is brightened, and the poem of the ambition is sequelized.

A long song of lion wakes up from a dream, and the Shenzhou holds the moon and the sky.

November 22, 2016

Among the poems I have written, I have carefully written a set of five poems in the style of reels, selected from my favorite piano, chess, calligraphy, paintings, and poems.

Seven Laws. Five songs in the wheel

Tian Lianyu

Roller style, a kind of poetic style, miscellaneous poetry name. This style requires the writing of five rhythmic poems, and the five capitals have the same sentence, and this common sentence is used as the first, second, fourth, sixth, and eighth lines of the five poems. or make four quatrains, the common sentence is used as the first, second, third and fourth sentences of each head, and if the public sentence is placed in the third sentence, the rhyme needs to be changed; If three quatrains are made, the public sentences should be one, two, and four sentences of each one, and there is no need to change the rhyme. Because the rhythm of the poem rotates down like the reel frame of the well, it is called the reel body. The HLJ Provincial Poetry Association Group of this study was asked to be completed with the title of "The East Wind Cuts a Stick of Incense".

Kotoichi

The east wind cut a stick of incense again, and the sleeves danced red candles reflected in the window.

The plain hand flicked the shallow dream, and the heavy string snapped the new clothes.

Chirp the young birds to return to the swallow, and the lingering sound surrounds the beam.

And let the original heart go with the dream, and the plains will be reined.

Chess two

The spring day of the small garden is warm, and the east wind pears a branch of incense.

The fame of China is scrambling to be the first, and the asterisk is busy three times in a row.

The sword points to the secret cloth of the Tianyuan Bureau, and robbing officials is impermanent.

After the black and white numbers were completed, Fang Jue's teacup water was already cold.

Book III

Slow paving rice paper light ink, book spectrum to find chapter drunk Xiaotang.

At the beginning of the sunny day, the single-leaved willow is blown, and the east wind pears a branch of incense.

The grass is really attached to the bottom of my heart, and the light and heavy focus is next to the pen.

After the payment is finely crafted, it seems to be back to being young and righteous.

Draw four

The curtain is sparse and the moonlight is cool, and the brush is lightly painted on the lotus pond.

The color is nine dyed and the flowers are delicate, and the feather is full of makeup.

The morning dew increases the green of a thousand leaves, and the east wind pears a branch of incense.

For the time being, the thoughts will be left to the lonely shadow, and the morning sun will pass over the low wall.

Psalm 5

Gently sit in the study with a rocking chair, and read the old chapter with the new tea in hand.

The words are cautious and sloppy, and the words are carefully considered.

People seek good poetry, and literature is to be refined and wine to be hidden.

And look forward to the warm day of spring, and the east wind will cut a branch of incense

January 7, 2017

I can't remember when, I looked at a ridiculous word card, and there happened to be an assignment with the theme of Hong Yan, thinking of this, handwritten, and very interesting.

I still remember the wild goose dance that my daughter danced when she was a child.

"Laughing Order. The Wild Goose Messenger

Tian Lianyu

Hong Yan, Hong Yan,

A song reappears.

Dancing with sleeves for a long time,

Walk through the clouds.

Messenger, messenger,

Bring both sides for questioning.

December 15, 2016

After the Chinese New Year in 2017, the association asked to listen to music and write poems, which was the first time in my life.

The association gave the guzheng song "Spring River Flower Moonlight Night", which the teacher once let us appreciate in the second year of high school, and remembered that it was played with a tape recorder at that time, but unfortunately the content of the interpretation is not remembered now. This guzheng solo song "Spring River Flower Moon Night" is transplanted from the pipa song "Sunset Xiao Drum", the background is derived from the poem of the same name by Zhang Ruoxu, who is known as "the lonely piece of the Tang Dynasty" (some say that the lonely piece suppresses the whole Tang Dynasty), and expresses the wonderful artistic conception of the theme of the spring river, flower moon and night scene in the poem in the form of music, and has become a classic in traditional Chinese music. For more than 1,000 years, there have been countless cultural and artistic works created around the poem, and it is difficult to write new ideas. After thinking about it, I decided to write it in the form of a Tibetan poem.

Seven Laws. The spring of Tibetan poems, the flowers and moons of the river, and the night is pleasant

Tian Lianyu

Spring moves with the strings to send a clean sound,

The riverside anvil is still drunk.

Flower shadow lonely courtyard interior scene,

The moon soul shines on the body in the dream.

Easy to hold the pen in the middle of the night,

The light color is difficult to cover the marks on the letter.

It is advisable to entrust the sound of the piano to the hometown,

The world is full of returns.

March 31, 2017

Note: "Spring River Flower Moonlight Night" is a beautiful long poem I memorized 30 years ago, and it is still unforgettable. The Poetry Association requires listening to music to write poems, and integrating feelings into the pen with the theme of appreciating the beautiful classical song "Spring River Flower Moonlight Night", and writing poems with this title is also a test for themselves.

It can be seen that compared with "Tian Yubao Fan" written in the second year of high school, today's Tibetan poems are obviously not at the same level.

Since there are such obvious benefits, then continue to follow the poetry group to write homework!

After writing this Tibetan poem, I also received a notice of selection from the editorial board of the book "Appreciation of Contemporary Chinese Literature and Art", unlike other notices that require money to publish works, this book states that there is no remuneration and no free books, and now I don't know if my works have been published.

It stands to reason that the grand prize can't be deleted for me because I didn't reply to the letter and subscribe!!

I've always wanted to see if this book was printed or not, and how many grand prizes it could have. It's a pity that I didn't write a book when I thought about it, and then I forgot about it. I didn't think about it until I wrote this section today, and one day I went to Confucius's old books online to see if there was any book.

In addition, Tian Lianyu was also awarded the honorary title of "Praise for Outstanding Literary Artists in the New Era", the word outstanding came from nowhere, I am really ashamed!