The rage of public opinion, with the "war" between Lin Yu and Chu Renmania, although the fans of Infernal Affairs don't know much about Chu Renmad, as a more familiar "writer", they still understand the basic information.

Seeing this artist Lin Yu, he began to overestimate himself again, and crossed the line to fight the Chu people, and he really dared to make an appointment and a dare to take it.

The ridicule of the forest fish inevitably became more immediately.

It's nothing more than anything, "beyond your strength"

"Clown Behavior"

"Capital is starting to speculate again"

"Gunners write less", balabala and the like.

Lin Yu didn't look at it, and Song Xi, the initiator, had a simpler attitude, waiting for the results to come out and slap his face.

What's the point of all of this now.

The next day, I went to the crew, and with the official start of filming in Infernal Affairs 2, the voices of resistance gradually faded, and the crew was able to start work smoothly.

Under a black robe, Lin Yu opened the door, wrapped a pistol in newspaper, and shot Ni Kun, who was singing, like a Peking Opera master, three times in a row!

With the old actor who played Ni Kun, his body stiffened, with a hint of disbelief in his eyes, his body popped, and he fell to the ground solidly.

Lin Yu put away his gun, and before he turned around and ran away, he was vague and could see Lin Yu's handsome face.

The first part, young Liu Jianming!

This handsome feeling naturally attracted Liu Weiqiang very satisfied, Lin Yu in the second part, not only is there still few scenes, but also lacks the complexity of dual personality.

But Lin Yu keeps one thing in mind, Yin is ruthless!

In this part, the ruthlessness of the villain male protagonist must be made up for Andy Lau in the first part!

Kill Huang sir, kill sister-in-law, kill eldest brother, kill Ni Kun.

The first murder is like hemp!

After going back, Lin Yu spent seven days tinkering, and finally gave the beginning of the mountain village of mortal cultivation of immortals out, it is really a huge book with a long memory, and the length is huge, Lin Yu really can't remember it clearly!

It's true that while thinking.,Write at the same time.,And the outline also needs to be re-filled.,That's all the effort.,In the end,Lin Yu went to the fifth chapter in one breath.,I saw the enemy of life at the beginning.,Almost in the future, I will contribute my daughter-in-law and daughters to the opening boss of the male master.,Mo Dafu.。

The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals is a real black-bellied, in which the IQ of the characters, calculations, often make people shudder, many people's understanding of the word "mortal", stay in the vulgar mediocrity, the beginning of the mountain village, slowly develop this feeling.

In fact, it is a fallacy that the truth that really created this masterpiece, and even the dead language itself cannot be copied, is that he wrote a real chapter of the world, and it is also the ...... itself that is closest to fantasy and the unique charm of the Internet.

To put it simply, the characters in it are from Doctor Mo, the pawns of the peddlers, the family members of Doctor Mo, the dart master of the dart game, the brothers who practice martial arts in the sect, the woodcutter and so on.

Each character, written with a soul, and a sense of realism, makes you have to believe that this is so real, a world that unfolds step by step.

Here, living like ants is not a condescending contempt, but a profound thing, and you and I are just one of the ants.

In this context, the Seven Xuanmen in the eyes of ordinary people such as the nearby Qingniu Town just said that there was no and there was no.

Zhenzhen looks at it in the context of the time span, all the busy ordinary people are just a speck of dust, and at this time, seeking immortality is the only tireless appeal.

This kind of construction has constructed a magnificent chapter of the legend of mortal cultivation of immortals.

The later immortals are mostly similar to the otherworldly continent, focusing on a higher layer, the layer of immortal cultivators' struggle, so they can't write a mortal flavor horizontally and vertically.

But you can't say that mortals are invincible in the world because of this, you can only say that when you go to a certain road, you are at the top everywhere, and the background of Chendong is the peak of the magnificent imagination.

It's just one route.

It's far away, Lin Yu is really afraid that Huangquan Biluo won't understand, so he went to Doctor Mo in one breath, otherwise, just by writing the first chapter at the beginning, the second stunned person will be elected to the town, and Huangquan Biluo can spray himself to death.

Compared to how the villains are trained and compared to the Faqiu people, what is this?

But Rao is like this, after writing so much, Lin Yu sighed after reading it.

This is still a cloud, I have to be approximate, or just about the taste of mortal immortal cultivation, Lin Yu estimated that he had to write the entire Qixuanmen chapter alive, go to the Mo family to fight wits and courage with the Mo family, and go to the market where the immortal cultivators are really involved in the transaction, in order to taste, what is the unique taste of "Xiuzhen".

But ......, that's too long-term.

In that time and space, it is not unreasonable for mortals to do hundreds of thousands of words before signing a contract, it is really not that the beginning is not badly written, but the beginning is more similar to the length of a bad book, only after expanding it and looking back, can you understand that it is not the same thing.

said that it was far away, after the liver was finished, Lin Yu directly knocked on Huangquan Biluo and passed it to the other party.

"Dididi"

Huang Quan Biluo, who was at work, received Lin Yu's new draft as soon as possible, and he only had four words for Lin Yu's new draft, "Long wait!" ”

"It's coming!"

Seeing Lin Yu's manuscript coming, Huangquan Biluo was gearing up, and a touch of anticipation appeared on his face, what kind of bullshit other authors' contributions, does that matter!

How can the contribution of my baby forest fish be valuable??

"Legend of Mortal Immortal Cultivators??"

On Huangquan Biluo's small head, a big question mark couldn't help but appear, it is true that the concept of cultivating immortals has not been at all at present, and I don't know what it is at all.

"Metaphysical books?"

"Still cultivating immortals?"

Huangquan Biluo was a little unacceptable for a while.

It's really too different in attributes, and the manuscripts written by Lin Yu before are very down-to-earth, real soil hi text, either a tomb robber or a campus gangster.

This cultivator??

Huang Quanbi can only barely pop out of the Taoist in his head, the art of Qi Huang, chattering in the Taoist hall all day long and things like that, forget it, endure it.

In line with his trust in Lin Yu, he clicked on the document and read it.

According to Lin Yu's current coffee position, what to submit 30,000 words, it's all rules.

I'll tell you the number of the forest fish, a chapter!

Look at him, Huangquan Biluo dares to let out a fart? Don't you have to watch it obediently?

The big guy is like this.

Seeing that the forest fish was so diligent, Huangquan Biluo couldn't help but continue to look at it, but after two glances, he couldn't help but look black again.

Two stunned, thatched houses, black mud walls, broken quilts?

There is a second brother sleeping next to the bed, and he is going up the mountain to chop wood tomorrow?

This, the ancient text?

Also、Okay.。。 Anyway, the tomb robbery text written by Lin Yu is mysterious, and it doesn't match the realistic tomb robbery at all, right?

Huangquan Biluo continued to look down, this story is very short, that is, a baby in a mountain village, life can't go on, and he took the ...... of the big man in the town, that is, the way of the second uncle who showed the restaurant to the restaurant, and was sent to a place called Qixuanmen.

In the Seven Xuanmen, because he couldn't pass the assessment of the Bone Cliff, he was sent to Doctor Mo, who was a strange old man.

After reading these 10,000 words, Huang Quanbi fell in a daze and was stunned for a long time.

One last slap on the table, signed!

,!

Lin Yu is still worried that Huangquan Biluo can't understand it, it's really underestimating others, although Huangquan Biluo is a little unable to touch the veins of Lin Yu, but he clearly sees the two elements clearly.

One, otherworldly, two, a sense of substitution.

The invincible sense of substitution can be called a masterpiece of the taste of a world!

I don't care what it's written for now, but he can't help but want to read it down.

That's enough, isn't it??

Moreover, Huangquan Biluo vaguely felt that the forest fish, although the entry point of the expansion was small, but the ambition was very large, and the previous small length, the taste of the small family, was completely different!

Although I still inherit the delicate and realistic brushstrokes, I really touch the unique soul of the Internet...... and I pull you into a magnificent world that you can't imagine in your life.

This is the feeling he wants to pursue in his life as an editor!

He doesn't care about this draft, in a word, he wants to sign it!

chose to send the manuscript to the boss, and then he hurried to Hou Liang's office.

Lin Yu waited for a long time, but he couldn't see Huangquan Biluo's reply, and he was ready to sleep, and on the other side, Huangquan Biluo was arguing fiercely with Hou Liang.

After reading this, Hou Liang objected.

He is not sharp enough, not bad, but not high enough, or, as a boss, he has lost his sensitivity from the perspective of the reader.

His angle is ...... at all, I don't know what to say, the height of the subject matter is too low!

"Isn't this martial arts?"

In the office, Hou Liang frowned, and his tone was very dissatisfied, "A young ......, I can't see the background of the times, and I was selected to a sect to practice martial arts. And the talent was not good at the beginning, and this routine was too old! ”

"I'm not saying that this is bad, Huang Quan, but what kind of person is he Lin Yu, the number one coffee at our starting point, and no one will laugh to death when he writes this kind of thing?"

"What he wrote here is 'Xiuxian Wen', what does the title of the book say?" Without waiting for Hou Liang to finish speaking, Huangquan Biluo couldn't bear to argue.

"Isn't that even weirder?" Hou Liang spread his hands, "What kind of immortal, what kind of immortal, it's nondescript to mix in, you said that he started the chapter, so ...... parents were killed, it's not right, the parents were killed now, it's too old-fashioned." ”

"Anyway, it's nothing."

"Now martial arts are a bit downhill, look at the four martial arts masters, what realm are they currently writing, Lin Yu's martial arts, written like a child learning to walk."

Hou Liang shook his head for a while, highlighting ten thousand.

"Tell him to change the track and rewrite it, he's going to pounce, we can't afford to lose this person from the beginning, the 'Fantasy Alliance' engaged in by the Sky Eagle websites hasn't collapsed yet."

"His previous themes were all great, and I don't ask him to continue to innovate, he can't write anymore, write Xie Wendong 2, or Faqiu Ren 2, I can understand it."

Hou Liang said earnestly, "But this is ......" He was really confused.

"I have one thing to say, I really don't know what he's doing, a low-profile version of a second-rate martial arts author, I don't want it." Hou Liang frowned.

"How can you see it like that!" Huangquan Biluo was in a hurry, and he didn't know how to explain to Hou Liang, so he could only point, "Take a closer look, you also look too careless, look at this writing, this sense of substitution ......"

"Okay, Lao Huang." Hou Liang said solemnly, "Don't treat me as a fool, you say that I don't read carefully and are impatient, let me ask you, do you want to press the head of every reader, saying that you are impatient and not detailed?" ”

"It's normal for readers to look at the flowers, what you have to do is for him to look at the flowers, but also to catch his eyeballs, this is the author's job!"

"No, the reader has to look at it carefully to have a feeling."

"I read it quickly in order to extract the core content of this article as soon as possible, but when I distilled it, it was such an ordinary and worthless thing."

"Then I don't understand, let's tell a bad analogy...... a running account, an old woman's footcloth, is this something that can be solved by the reader's patience?"

"I'm holding a magnifying glass to look at it, and his content is still this content, and I won't make flowers because I look at it carefully."

"In fact, this content is too low-profile, too vulgar, and too common, am I wrong?"

Hou Liang spread his hands, Huang Quanbi was dumbfounded, he found that he really couldn't argue with Hou Liang's crooked reasoning, but his intuition as an editor told him that what Hou Liang said was quite inaccurate!

If, as a reader, you can be caught by the world at once, that in itself is a highlight.

But now he himself is confused by Hou Liang, yes, if he grasps the key point, his own story is still very mediocre, how can he say this?

Relying on his deep foundation, he can do whatever he wants?

Could it be that the old and spicy skills of the forest fish have deceived his eyes, and after a long time, he will show his feet and look foreign?

No, there must be something wrong!

Huang Quanbi was dizzy.

Back in his seat, Huang Quan Biluo went back and forth, and carefully read the draft of Lin Yu more than a dozen times, but he was still silent, and he couldn't see any problems.

But thinking about it in combination with Hou Liang's words, I couldn't figure out what was wrong.

Huang Quan Biluo groaned again and again, and did two things, first, he asked Lin Yu for the first time to ask for an outline to read, and second, he sent this draft to all his colleagues in the office, saying that this was a newcomer's draft he received, and asked them what they thought.

Lin Yu didn't reply, but soon, Huangquan Biluo received a reply, twelve colleagues, four of whom had the same opinion as Hou Liang, all said that the subject matter was too old-fashioned, the start was too slow, and they didn't know what to do, but if they were newcomers, the writing was okay, and they signed it.

Eight people said that the sense of substitution is very strong, and there is an inexplicable attraction that wants to continue to look back.

The forest fish came out after taking a bath to see it, and when he saw Huangquan Biluo's message, Lin Yu probably felt Huangquan Biluo's hesitation, but this is normal.

So, Lin Yu sent the outline he had prepared a long time ago, and noted a new set of things about the cultivation system of cultivating immortals.

(End of chapter)