Liang Jiangtao took out the draft of the speech that was carefully drafted yesterday and read it from beginning to end.

To be honest, the careful writing is still very good.

It is magnificent, the logical thinking is clear, the argument is sufficient, the content is detailed, and there is a certain literary style.

No matter from which point of view, it can be used as a model material.

But that doesn't mean it's perfect.

There is never a perfect material.

Since ancient times, there is no first, and there is no second.

Of course, the person who writes the material pursues the most beautiful structure, the best angle of entry, the most accurate wording, the most abundant and detailed information, and the most profound thoughts, but there is always a more symmetrical structure, a more ingenious angle, a more vivid wording, more specific data support, and a more profound thought.

It's like splitting a piece of rope in two, and it will never be separated.

Again, this is just a first draft, and there is room for revision later.

The material is like this, from the first draft to the final draft, it has to go through a long polishing process.

In this process, Liang Jiangtao can give opinions, and he must give opinions, and he wants to show himself.

If last night's typing gave Zhou Mi a surprise, giving comments on the materials today is even more crucial, so that Zhou Mi can more clearly recognize his value!

After all, the lab relies on the materials to speak.

Liang Jiangtao is a writer, not a typist, and he knows that very well.

He wanted to prove to Zhou Mi that he could write material and that he could write it well!

Liang Jiangtao read the material carefully from beginning to end, his brain spinning rapidly, and from time to time he stroked and wrote with a pencil, carefully considering it.

Treat every possible mistake like an enemy.

The more Liang Jiangtao looked at it, the more he felt that the level of careful materials was very high, and he could not put forward big opinions such as views, structure, and data arrangement in a short period of time, and it was not convenient for him to put forward them, but he could put forward at least ten opinions on small details.

Except for two of these details, the rest can be changed or not, and if they are changed, they will be more perfect, and one or two places are better changed from Liang Jiangtao's point of view, whether they need to be changed or not There is still room for discussion, and there is a personal habit in it.

If you follow Liang Jiangtao's previous temperament, he would have to put forward these ten points no matter what, but after being reborn, he changed.

He thought of what an old leader had told him in his previous life: "The materials are written by everyone with painstaking efforts, just like their own children, opinions can be raised, but we must pay attention to ways and means, and no one wants their materials to be said by others to be useless." ”

"Of course, the hard injury must be mentioned, otherwise it will be found by the leader or the writer will be criticized, this is a real help, and no one will refuse. As for what can be changed or not, we must be cautious. For a material, there are at most three questions that can be changed or not, and only the three that you are most accurate can be mentioned, and don't mention it if there are more. ”

At that time, Liang Jiangtao heard this and disagreed, feeling that the old leader was pedantic, he had to say something and put forward his opinions.

Now that I think about it, I feel that it makes perfect sense.

Pick up the eraser and erase a few comments that can or may not be changed, so that you can also give a little space to other people who have made comments.

"Okay, Xiaoliang, it's early."

At around 9:00, Zhou Mi came in, saw Liang Jiangtao working at the desk, nodded and smiled.

"It's early in the week, anyway, I live close, and if I get up in the morning, I'll come to the unit." Liang Jiangtao said with a smile.

"Print four copies of yesterday's materials, give me one copy, and then give them to Hanyang, and we'll touch them later."

"Okay." Liang Jiangtao moved when he heard the order and finished it quickly.

After a while, Zhou Mi called them over.

"Everyone has read yesterday's material, do you have any opinions? Let's talk about it. Zhou Mi said.

The original draft of this material was drafted separately by Zhou Hanyang, Ning Bin, and Huang Min, but now it is unrecognizable, and Zhou Mi basically has no use for a word.

Several people read the current draft, but they were all convinced.

Compared to elaborate materials, theirs is garbage.

Their level is too low, they can't say anything with their heads down, that is, Zhou Hanyang tried to mention a point, which is one of Liang Jiangtao's points that can be changed or not, but he is not prepared to say it.

After listening to it, he muttered for a while and said, "That's it here, don't change it." ”

A few of them didn't speak even more.

Zhou Mi said: "Jiang Tao, do you have any opinions?" If you have something, say it boldly. ”

Liang Jiangtao paused when he heard this, and said, "Zhou, I have carefully studied this material, and I have a few doubts I want to ask." ”

"Oh? You said. Zhou Mi encouraged, he hoped that Liang Jiangtao would speak, it doesn't matter if he is wrong, anyone will make mistakes as soon as they come up, and making mistakes is to accumulate experience for success, which is a good thing.

On the contrary, if you are afraid of making mistakes and do not dare to speak or communicate, you will be afraid to move forward, and you will be complacent, and you will not make any progress at all, which will be a bad thing.

"There is a sentence on page 1, paragraph 2, 'In addition to the new organization ministers of various counties and municipalities, the trainees of this training course will also participate in the study.'"

"The new organization minister of the county and city is not only the object of the whole sentence, but also the subject of the study, and there is a suspicion of mixed sentences, so it is recommended that the 'students' after the 'training course' be removed."

"The revised sentence reads: 'In this training course, in addition to the new organization ministers of various counties and municipalities, six newly recruited cadres from the Organization Department of the Provincial Party Committee will also participate in the study.'" Liang Jiangtao said.

Zhou Mi's eyes lit up, this is an obvious sick sentence, he has found it, but he didn't expect Liang Jiangtao to see it, and he analyzed it very thoroughly from the grammar, explained it very clearly, and changed it beautifully.

From this point, it can be seen that Liang Jiangtao's writing skills are very good!

The ability to write is the most impossible to fake.

Basically, you can tell if you can write it in three sentences, and how well it is written.

"Excellent! Anything else? Zhou Mi encouraged.

"There is also paragraph 2 on page 3, this white spoon 'of' should be changed to double 'de'." Liang Jiangtao pointed out again.

It is still easy to make the mistake of misusing and mixing "of", "de" and "land", which is also a hard injury, Zhou Mi immediately found that Liang Jiangtao was right, and said: "Very good, it has to be changed here, is there anything else?" ”

"In paragraph 3 of page 5, 'a total of 25 mobile party branches have been established', and it is suggested that it be changed to 'a total of 25 mobile party branches have been established', and the quantifier should be placed at the end. Of course, this place can be changed or not. ”

Zhou Mi was silent, and then looked at Liang Jiangtao's eyes differently, although this place can be changed or not, but Liang Jiangtao's suggestion is obviously better.

The measure words are placed at the back, which is more concise and more imposing to read.

I know this carefully, but I often don't pay attention to it when I write the first draft, and I change it with my sense of language when I polish the manuscript.

He did not summarize and refine the understanding that "measure words are all put behind".

It's so practical!

With this understanding, I am afraid that there will be no problems in this area in the future!