Chapter 103 Just add one stroke and put the finishing touch
"Anything else?" Zhou Mi began to look forward to it.
"One more point, page 7, part 3 of the work opinions, point 2 subheading, 'promote XX learning and education to further deepen', can it be changed to 'promote XX learning and education to go deeper and more practical'?"
"Why did you change that?" Zhou Mi asked.
"I watched the mobilization speech of the leader in the last training course for the new organization ministers of counties and districts in the province, and also mentioned this, when it was used, it was 'solid development of XX learning and education', although 'promoting XX learning and education to further deepen' has a progressive meaning, but it seems that adding a 'real' word can better reflect the deepening of learning and education, and can also reflect the higher requirements of the next step, which seems to be better. Of course, these are all immature ideas for your reference. Liang Jiangtao said.
Silence, more complete silence.
Zhou Hanyang and the others opened their mouths wide, and Liang Jiangtao spoke amazingly, and he was able to find so many faults in the careful draft.
In the past, they gave comments to the manuscript, basically picking typos, of course, the words were not carefully written wrong, but typed by the typist, in addition, who has the ability to give comments to the pen of the Research Office of the Organization Department of the Provincial Party Committee? They ask themselves if they don't have this level.
Liang Jiangtao put forward three opinions in succession, all of which were carefully adopted.
In their eyes, it's already quite remarkable.
And the fourth opinion seems to be changeable or not, but after listening to Liang Jiangtao's reasoning, it seems to be quite reasonable.
They try to use their brains and try to keep up with the train of thought.
Zhou Mi nodded, but his heart was like turbulent waves.
First of all, Liang Jiangtao also carefully studied the leader's speech at the previous relevant meeting before reading this material, which shows that he is a person with a heart.
On the first day he came to the laboratory, he didn't teach him anything, so he knew to look for the previous materials for reference.
You must know that "a big copy of articles in the world", whether you can "copy" or not is an important ability to write articles.
Of course, the "plagiarism" here is not plagiarism, but reference, standing on the shoulders of giants.
After reading the previous materials, you can know what the previous focus was and how to start now, so that the central idea can be consistent and inherited, so as to achieve the realm of mixed elements.
Isn't this what a person with a heart is?
"The inferior people are taught with sticks, the middle people are taught with words, and the superior people are not taught", this is what it means.
Clever! Heart! Understanding!
Second, Liang Jiangtao's opinion was put forward very well, and seeking truth from facts is the three magic weapons of communists.
Theoretical study comes from practice and must go to practice, and the ultimate purpose of understanding is to better guide practice.
One goes deep and solid.
Don't look at the addition of only one word, but it has an extra layer of meaning, and the realm is obviously sublimated.
It's the finishing touch!
He remembered that the highest level of writing articles in ancient times was "without a word, as much as possible", and Liang Jiangtao was "only adding one stroke and putting the finishing touch"!
Liang Jiangtao's performance reminded him of a person, not someone else, it was his leader and his good friend, Qi Yunfei.
In the past, only Qi Yunfei had this impulse to make him shoot the case, which also made him really admire.
But today, the same feeling appeared on Liang Jiangtao.
Liang Jiangtao has just graduated from university, and yesterday was the first day to enter the institution, so it is amazing that he can have such an opinion.
You must know that since ancient times, literati have been light.
It is a rare thing for a literati to sincerely appreciate and admire another literati.
But Liang Jiangtao, like Qi Yunfei, gave him appreciation, and even some admiration.
If someone had told him before today that he would have such feelings about a newly recruited cadre, he would have thought that person was crazy.
Zhou Mi tilted his head and looked at Liang Jiangtao carefully, this look looked a little strange to others.
Liang Jiangtao was furious by Zhou Mi, and said, "Zhou, is it wrong for me to say it?" ”
Zhou Mi shook his head and said solemnly: "No, what you said is very right, very good!" That's it! Liang Jiangtao, you are very good! ”
"Thank you for the compliment."
Zhou Hanyang and they were shocked, Zhou is famous for its high standards and strict requirements, and they have been seconded here for several months, and they try their best every day, but they are just a little less scolded.
When did you see Zhou everywhere complimenting someone like this?
"By the way, Zhou, corresponding to the subheading, I suggest that some practical aspects be added to the text as well."
"Good!" Zhou Mi nodded, and then said to Zhou Hanyang and the others: "Although Jiang Tao has just joined the company, he is very perceptive and attentive, you all have to learn from him, do you know?" ”
"Okay!"
"Got it!"
"Definitely, around!"
The eyes of several people looking at Liang Jiangtao were obviously different.
In the past, although they all respected Liang Jiangtao on the surface, it was because Liang Jiangtao had the aura of a formal cadre of the Organization Department of the Provincial Party Committee, and deep down they still felt that he was just a child who had just entered the workplace, and he would definitely not know anything.
From yesterday to today, the level of ability shown by Liang Jiangtao is too high, even higher than their comprehension.
It seems that he and Zhou Mi are a level of existence and can talk to each other on an equal footing, but they can't even listen.
It's just so hard to understand, are they that bad?
"Any other comments?" Zhou Mi asked.
"No, around." Liang Jiangtao shook his head.
Although there are a few places that can be changed, in line with the principle of "only mentioning hard injuries, but not changing as little as possible", he chose to keep his mouth shut.
Zhou Mi nodded, and said a few more changes he made, and the two of them added some practical content together.
Liang Jiangtao finished clearing the manuscript, carefully checked a few revisions, and found that there was no problem, so he typed it out and gave it to Zhou Mi.
Zhou Mi read it carefully again, and then took the manuscript and gave it to Jiang Wanjun.
Jiang Wanjun is directly in charge of the research room, and any problems are reported to him directly.
He first went to the room of Jiang Wanjun's secretary Huang Yihang.
This room is connected to Jiang Wanjun's room, and you have to go through the secretary first to go to Jiang Wanjun.
"Hey, the pen is coming? What is the speech at the opening meeting? "Huang Yihang is very familiar with Zhou Mi.
Huang Yihang is 62 years old, one year older than Zhou Mi, and has also spent time in the research laboratory before, and his current position is the deputy director of the office.
As mentioned before, only leaders above the deputy ministerial level have real secretaries, and although Huang Yihang is essentially doing secretarial work, he is nominally in other positions.
"It's done, Liang Jiangtao, the new kid in our department, is very capable, and he typed out the manuscript in a few clicks, is there anyone in the minister's room? Then I won't go in, you can show it to the minister later. ”
Zhou Mi saw that the door of Jiang Wanjun's office was closed, and there was still a sound of talking coming from inside.
"You can wait a while, maybe I'll look for you in a while, and the things inside have something to do with you." Huang Yihang said with a smile.