After a few days of unremitting efforts, all the revisions have finally been completed, and the chapter names have not changed, so you can re-appreciate them.

The total number of words in this revision has increased by about 10,000 words, and there is no change to the entire storyline, the biggest change is in the first ten chapters of the first volume.

The paragraphs have been revised so that everyone can read the work better.

The BUG has been modified, and all the original mistakes have been corrected.

Corrected typos, not too many typos, mainly punctuation changed more.

The tone and actions of the dialogue have been revised to be more realistic.

There are still a lot of small changes, so you can look at them again when you have time.

I am re-reading word by word and slowly revising this revision, I am very attentive, I hope you can pay more attention to it.

There are certainly some imperfections in the one-time revision, but I hope you will give us more comments.

If I can, I will revise it again around 60-800,000 yuan, this is just a preliminary idea, maybe the next revision will not be as big as it is now.

This is the end of the first revision, and I hope you will give more valuable comments.

Old rules:

Ask for collections, for rewards, for long reviews, for recommendations, for impressions, for book reviews, for reviews, for everything you can ask for, as long as it's good, smash it all.

Author: Bubei

2013-08-18