First of all, I would like to apologize to all of you who have paid attention to my work!

Originally, I said that I would not revise the previous chapters of this work, but now I am going to break my promise for the following reasons:

First: The first two applications for signing were unsuccessful, and I want to hit the third time.

Second: I recently re-read the previous chapter I wrote, and I can only use two words to describe "really bad".

Third: I think that my writing level has improved a little now, and I can change the previous chapters better.

Fourth: I was stimulated, a few days ago someone said that I haven't signed a contract for almost 300,000 words, so hurry up and get the eunuch.

Fifth: I look at my own work from the perspective of a reader, and I find that I can't stand it.

Sixth: There are many reasons, and there are all excuses, so I won't say it anymore, I hope I can understand.

This revision of the work is an overall revision, starting from the first chapter of the first volume to the twenty-ninth chapter of the second volume, with a total of 79 chapters and more than 300,000 words.

There will be no interruption during the revision period, but all newly uploaded chapters will be uploaded according to the latest version.

I have uploaded the latest version of the third chapter of the second volume 30, you can see what is the difference from the first seventy-nine chapters.

The time of this revision has not yet been determined, and it is expected to take about ten days.

I'm thinking about whether it's a revision of a chapter, or a re-upload after the first seventy-nine chapters are all modified, these two options haven't been thought of before this notice is published, and if you see that there has been no change in the last few days, then it may be changed all at once.

The revisions to the chapter are tentatively as follows:

First, the storyline will not change, it is still the original idea.

2. During the modification period, there will be no interruptions, and the newly uploaded chapters will be uploaded directly according to the latest version.

3. The revised word count may increase somewhat, but not too much.

4. Correct typos and sentences in the early stage.

5. Revise paragraphs to make them more coherent.

6. Modify the tone and facial expressions of the dialogue.

7. Add some scene descriptions and character inner descriptions.

8. Improve the storyline.

9. Modify some bugs generated in the early stage of creation.

10. Do a good job in the preliminary work and pave the way for the second and third parts of the "Ultimate Guardian" series.

11. Modify the name of the uploaded chapter, but the original name remains the same, which is an irregular operation in the background.

In fact, there are a lot of revisions.,But I can't remember it for a while.,When I published this notice.,I've already revised a few chapters.,I'm so tired.,I've calculated.,A day from morning to night.,If it's all used to revise.,Up to ten chapters a day.。

After the revision, I will impact the third signing, and whether it can be successful depends on this time.

Regardless of whether I can sign a contract or not, I will finish this book, and no matter how much I am stimulated, I will not be a eunuch.

It's still the same sentence, whether you look at it or not, whether you write it or not, whether you write it or not. Even if I don't have an audience, I will finish it, it's not a commitment, it's my own idea, this book is a beginning for me, and the end is the end of the book.

It's not easy for novices to write a book in itself, forget about the three-minute heat, I'm not hot-headed for writing this book, this book is my debut novel, and it is also a reference for accumulation and slow growth.

I've written more than 300,000 words since I published the first chapter, and I've been reading other people's works when I'm working on them. It turns out that before I wrote novels, I read novels at a glance and ten lines, but now I don't dare to do that, no matter who I read, I will pick out the words, and there is something worth learning from any work.

There are many more about how to write about women, how to describe emotions, how to portray landscapes, how fierce battles are, and how to express dialogues.

Whether I read other people's novels or write my own novels, I always have an attitude of learning and taking other people's good things

If I can learn from it, I can better improve my work, and if I write it myself, the readership will increase.

It's off topic again, I'm sorry, let's get down to business!

This is the first large-scale revision, and I don't know if there is a second or third revision. I want to wait for 600,000 words before I talk about it, and if I revise it after 600,000 words, it means that my writing skills have improved again.

When I stopped revising this book, there were only two possibilities, one was that I thought that the writing was okay, and there was no need to revise it. The other is the complete completion of the book.

Well, I won't nag anymore, I have limited time, and I still need to revise a lot of chapters, if you are interested, you can wait a few days, and you are welcome to come and taste it after I have revised it all.

Opinions, ideas, comments, criticism, these I accept, a good work is to meet the requirements of readers, as long as you can read my work completely, I thank you!

The most old rule is the last!

Ask for collections, ask for comments, ask for evaluations, ask for rewards, ask for impressions, ask for fans, ask for everything, you can do it yourself!!

Author: Bubei

In the early morning of August 16, 2013

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