I got up early in the morning, read the previous public chapters twice, and summarized some things, and my comments are generally to find loopholes and logical errors, hehe, forgive me for the inappropriateness.

The beginning with a slight martial arts background is full of anticipation.

Xie Hongyu's face turned too suddenly, normal people shouldn't have this kind of reaction, either happy or embarrassed, not a face-turn, after all, this is a friend in reality.

Penalty kicks can not be seen level, you can also explain more about the decision between penalty kicks and penalty kicks to show that penalties also have technical content, such as: the direction of the first ball will often appear again in the third or fourth ball, hitting two lower corners is the reaction of ordinary people, etc.

The psychology and expressions of the characters and the audience's reactions during each duel are very detailed, and the background is a good technique, and the God of War is more flexible in its use, but the disadvantage is that the background characters are generally more single and programmed.

I still feel that the delay setting of blood red is a bit inappropriate, and the delay of the handle will not lead to the delay of the actions of the characters on the field, so there is no point in making this controller.

Emotional drama, Xie Hongyu's love is too rough, this may be the first temptation of young people to see beautiful women. I still think that if there is even a good emotional line in a book, it can attract a lot of female readers, of course, the sea soul in the sea for Helian is attracted to a group of men, although it is a branch line, but it is a main line of feelings, let us chase the main line to read.

The setting of the Ten Star Computer is a bit interesting, and it makes sense logically, that is basically invincible.

Breaking through a certain star computer should play at least a number of games to be sure.

Pro evolution soccer is about awareness, and novices think it's more reasonable to set a background for him to play soccer so that he can get started quickly.

What exactly is the difference between an ordinary handle and an authoritarian handle?

Chapter 25 Bystanders shouldn't shout despicable, there are many deciding factors in live games, and using fouls to the extreme is also a kind of ability and a strategy, why call people despicable and shameless?

Ori's appearance is a bit abrupt, the background is too little explained, and there is no football background, why does he stand out? There is no very reasonable explanation.

Live is a niche game, while football is a mass game, and what can be expressed in words between the two is the consciousness of football. It is best to write the taste of the niche to the public, and it is best to add football consciousness to it.

This book was first published from 17K, the first time to see the genuine content!