And the middle-aged man and woman are husband and wife, the man's name is Lu Daniu, and the woman's name is Liu Wenying, known as Gu Zhongshuangsha.

These three people have extreme personalities and act ruthlessly, and they are the masters who do not want to die, and they signal the others to walk around when they see it.

Lu Daniu turned his head first, carefully looked at the three half-immortal brothers and sisters, and then turned his head to Liu Wenying and said, "It turned out to be a member of the half-immortal family." ”

With such old fritters, it is not surprising that they can see at a glance that they are from a small half-immortal.

Before Liu Wenying could speak, Liu Zhongzhou giggled twice: "No wonder....... No wonder. ”

Liu Wenying turned her head and threw a wink at the little half-fairy, who immediately had goosebumps, and Liu Wenying smiled coquettishly: "No wonder........ No wonder no one wants you when you're so old? Such a handsome little brother, the slave family is distressed when he looks at it, so quickly put his hand in the slave's arms to warm up. ”

Lu Daniu's face changed when he heard this, but he dared to be angry and didn't dare to speak, and glared at Xiao Banxian with jealousy.

The little half-fairy couldn't cry or laugh, don't say that Liu Wenying is a dominatrix, even if the little half-fairy is alive, he doesn't dare to touch the corner of her clothes.

It's just that although the Gu Poison Sect is a sect of Gu Poison, they rarely act together, but these three people have always acted together, Gu plus poison, the power is doubled, and they appear here at the same time, there must be something very important.

These three people just happened to appear here at this moment, as if they were waiting for them, Xiao Banxian suddenly thought of the original guess, there may be people from the same sect behind this matter, could it be that the three of them are?

Xiao Banxian said to the three of them: "The juniors will not disturb the seniors' meals, and they will retire first." ”

"What, aren't your younger siblings coming to see you?" Liu Zhongzhou said coldly.

Nowadays, many people write for the purpose of supporting their families and making a fortune, which is called business, commonly known as "fast food literature", and the number of words is directly linked to the economy (personal income). It's normal for more than 2 million online articles to be available now, and everything is looking at "money"!

Many online writers adopt the popular mode of "changing maps" and "next copies": "cause, development, and end" in a copy (map). The "ending" becomes the cause of the next dungeon or map.

Therefore, if you write a short story or a medium story of 350,000 words or 120,000 words, you may not need to design the main plot, but if you write a super long web article, it is necessary to design the main plot and outline.

So how to design the main plot of the super long story?

Write around your selling point, design it – what kind of story do you tell that will appeal to people? To say here, you have to write with passion. You have to be interested, you don't have passion, you don't have interest, why do readers like you?

At this point, I don't think I'll be sprayed with chestnuts - what the hell? It's all empty preaching!

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Here comes the chestnuts!

"Zhu Xian", I can read it, but it is regarded as a divine book, let's take the main plot of Zhu Xian to analyze it.

There are no gods in this world, but since ancient times, human beings have seen the world around them, all kinds of strange things, lightning and thunder, violent storms, natural and man-made disasters, countless casualties, and grief all over the wilderness, which is by no means human power can do or resist.

Then I thought that above the nine heavens, there were all kinds of gods, and under the nine shadows, it was also the place where the ghosts returned, the hall of Yama. So the saying of the gods has been passed down to the world. Countless human beings sincerely bowed to the various gods they imagined and created, prayed for blessings and grievances, and the incense was prosperous...... In the present world, the righteous path is prosperous, and the evil demons retreat. The Central Plains is beautiful, popular, rich in products, and firmly occupied by decent families. Among them, the three pillars of "Qingyunmen", "Tianyin Temple", and "Incense Valley" are the leaders. This story started from "Qingyunmen". - Introduction to "Zhu Xian".

The introduction of "Zhu Xian" looks more like a wedge, and the gods, demons, and ghosts were very attractive at the time.

The main line of "Zhu Xian" is the personal emotional growth of pig's foot Zhang Xiaofan.

The main plot is the hardships and stumbles that Zhang Xiaofan experienced on the road to "becoming a god", a typical orient where characters drive the plot.

The "must" event in the book: Caomiao Village was massacred, and no one in the village was spared except for two children, Zhang Xiaofan and Lin Jingyu, and a woodcutter named Second Uncle Wang. There's a contrast, a foreshadowing.

A comparison - Zhang Xiaofan's ordinariness (the name is so casual) and Lin Jingyu's talent (the name sounds like Gao Fu Shuai);

There is also a foreshadowing: before the tragedy, Zhang and Lin found the injured monk Puzhi, who was dying and taught Zhang Xiaofan the magic power of Buddhism - Dafa Prajna, and asked Zhang Xiaofan to promise not to tell outsiders. (Why don't you pass on Lin Jingyu?) Because Puzhi spreads Zhang Xiaofan's Dharma and magical powers, it is because of Zhang Xiaofan's resolute character.) This is another foreshadowing, Zhang Xiaofan finally has the three magical powers of Buddha, Taoism, and Demons).

Because the tragedy occurred in Caomiao Village, at the foot of Qingyun Mountain, where the three major sects in the world were located, the Son of Heaven broke the law at the foot of the Son of Heaven.

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From here, it can be seen that this "necessary" thing led to the cultivation of Qingyun Mountain in the future. In addition, by the way, I will talk about one of the writing techniques of character portrayal, using others to set off the pig's feet - the author constantly portrays Zhang Xiaofan's ordinariness and the reality of being ignored by Qingyunmen by portraying Lin Jingyu's talent and being valued by Qingyunmen, constantly paving the way, and finally giving the pig's feet a plot of pretending to be slapped in the face - "Seven Veins Huiwu" (this thing must also happen), Zhang Xiaofan, who is not taken seriously, actually entered the top two and Lu Xueqi was both defeated.

Why did they lose both? Because they got the "burning stick" -- this golden finger.

There is a large map (copy) here called Qingyun Mountain. There is a small map "Big Bamboo Peak" in the big map, and the first volume of the entire Zhuxian is developed around these two maps.

Zhang Xiaofan won the ranking, got the reward, and there was an ordinary person in Pig's Foot who became the focus of Qingyun Mountain (although many people were not convinced), and this map was about to end. So how did the next map come about? Pig's feet have grown, they are awesome, the world is not peaceful, in order to hone the new generation of disciples of Qingyunmen, pig's feet were sent to explore the "Ten Thousand Bat Ancient Caves", and the new map is here. It needs to be noted here: If Zhang Xiaofan didn't pretend to be forced to slap his face and win the ranking, he would not have the opportunity to go down the mountain to experience training at all - he is too ordinary.

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The Ten Thousand Bat Caves is a development dungeon.

In the "Ten Thousand Bat Ancient Caves", Zhang Xiaofan met a woman who influenced his life - Baguio.

In the Ten Thousand Bat Ancient Caves, Zhang Xiaofan and Lu Xueqi depend on each other for life and death, never give up, and gradually develop feelings for each other.

This is also for the battle of "Liubo Mountain", when everyone wanted to punish Zhang Xiaofan who was holding evil things, Lu Xueqi, who was usually silent, stood up at the risk of death and laid the groundwork for Zhang Xiaofan's intercession.

Important event, the conflict focused on the outbreak of the "must" incident - the Demon Sect attacked Qingyun Mountain, Dao Xuan was worried that the true law of the two schools of Buddhism and Taoism would flow into the Demon Sect (the foreshadowing of Puzhi Chuangong at the beginning), Zhang Xiaofan was used by the Demon Sect and left a disaster, so he slashed the Zhuxian Sword to Zhang Xiaofan, and Baguio used the infatuation spell to turn his blood into a powerful spell to block the Zhuxian Sword Array, but his soul was scattered. The magic weapon Hehuan Bell forcibly took a soul of the three souls and seven spirits that flew away, so that the body could not be destroyed.

As a result, Zhang Xiaofan betrayed Qingyunmen and entered the Demon Sect, and the next copy began.

So when writing the outline and sorting out the plot, Baguio must die, and if he doesn't die, he has to change the outline.

Therefore, we should design the main plot: we must put the events that meet the requirements of "accumulation of conflicts" and "important events foreshadowing" in the position of "development", and the events of "concentrated outbreak of conflicts" and "foreshadowing concentrated catharsis" should be placed in this position.

The process of writing an outline is the process of designing the main plot, laying an ambush, and collecting the burden.

You can try to analyze the rest according to this pattern.

This article is actually about the importance of the outline for a book, and there are many, many friends who have been asking us how to write the outline.

The outline is simple and simple, just a general form of the book.

But in the depths, it is the lifeblood of a book, and in this regard, the editor-in-chief of the Xuan faction, Pajama Bear, has been racking his brains for the past few days to do this.

But after all, everyone's style and type are different, and it's troublesome to do, so if you need to send friends, please pay more attention to our Xuanpai official account, it will definitely come out in the near future.

The outline is the soul. Some people are born not to write and write souls, and their souls are confident to come at hand, such as Mr. Zhang Hatshui of the Republic of China. The turn, the twist, the introduction, is as smooth as flowing water. It's really not easy to tell a good story, to abuse the protagonist and let him (her) grow it, the more twists and turns the more moving. The more hardships and twists and turns Dafan has experienced, when the turning point comes, people can't help but read it several times, as if the reader is the protagonist's life. Only such a story can be seen in the hall and lit up and boiled oil.

I have hardly ever written an outline, but I have in my head the connection between the main line of story development and the small story, when to unravel the foreshadowing and so on, and it turns out that I wrote nearly two million words without an outline...

The outline is to string the main plot into a line with nodes, and grasp the overall logic of the article through this line. With progressive logic in mind, you can construct a clear causal relationship in the framework of logic, and you will know which step is just right when you control the side plot.

The outline is actually not very complicated, the main line and branch lines (the various things mentioned), while the outline is the specific occurrence and plot. In fact, newcomers can use the outline, and the small outline is purely to grasp stability and save trouble. If you think the outline is too much, you can use a mind map.

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It's a little squeezed in the bowl

The outline is the same as the foundation, if you want to write a good work, the outline is the bone, and all kinds of details and creativity are full of plots. Without an outline, it is easy to have ups and downs, and when you have ideas, you can be whimsical and scratch your ears and cheeks when you encounter bottlenecks. So don't be too troublesome to get tired of this, for your own good and for the comfort of the reader.

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Realm Slayer Demon Emperor

I'm looking forward to the outline template more and more, and I hope I can learn to use it, so that it will be convenient and I don't have to worry about writing an outline...... Cover your face

Widowed

After the outline is written, there is a plot, but sometimes Kavin has nothing to do with the outline, but is stuck on some words, and I don't know what words to use there

Saul

The main line is in the brain, and then when the main line is promoted, the branch lines and baggage are expanded, and then the documents are listed separately to fill in the characters and plots into the time node, is this reliable?

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The outline is a thing that I mainly use to memorize the parts I wrote before.

Dolemi

How do you write an outline?

abc123

Just wait for the Great Outline of Worship.

duplicity

Pajamas bear big, I want to ask, is there a limit to the number of words in the outline?

The wind passed over the hills

If you don't write an outline, you actually already have a score in your heart, and this score is the outline. But most of the authors are veterans, and most of the things they write are familiar with the road and have a good memory. In addition, this kind of work is generally not innovative, and it is written in a routine, so there is no need to list the outline.

Lele

Templates with an outline?

You don't see it

Looking forward to dry goods

Planner of pigeon release activities

I'm ready to list without an outline....

Tiance forgets the immortals

Uh, what should I do if I write a plot outline every time I want to write a plot outline?

Jojo

I wrote a seven-thousand-word outline, but the setting was only about 300,000 words, which was almost not cardinal

Reliable

Take a look at it every day

Riley

The web version doesn't seem to be updated

author

No, I'm currently planning to do on-page optimization

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Occupy the building, come on

Receiving feedback from Paiyou, the post-apocalyptic mecha theme accounts for about 80% of the starting point sci-fi, and other types of sci-fi are relatively unpopular. It's not easy to mix. Send it out for your reference.

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true

Miao Miao spent a lot of effort, let's finish it in two minutes, Xiong Da add chicken legs to her

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author

move

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Hander

Who will give us a science popularization, what are the core values of socialism?

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author

Prosperity, civilization, harmony, freedom, equality, justice, rule of law, patriotism, dedication, integrity, and friendliness.

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Lu Xiaofeng

The starting point exploded, and it feels like the whole market will be reshuffled.

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Salted Fish Girl

Looking forward to Jinjiang data analysis

Wang Wenwei 18735824888

What is the conclusion?

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author

The conclusion is marked in blue

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Cherry blossoms flutter TOMOYO

Now the starting point is crazy, and I have sealed a lot of books, I searched for what I had read before, and now ninety percent of them are gone. And I feel like it's a completely chaotic book.,There's a book I've read before.,The female owner can be searched for the whole soy sauce and can't be opened (404),There are a few books without CP that also click.,Where did the no CP come from.,These books I remember are unlikely to be involved in politics.。

But fortunately, there is a full text of the seal during the starting period, and there is also free software, but I feel that this is a big blow to the author. After all, the original version is gone, and the author is going to eat soil

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Consciousness endures

I'm afraid it's not nonsense, doomsday mecha...... It's all time and space travel, and the fantasy fairy is a pot in the same city

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Long Yan, royal Xiao Zhao

The wall crack asks for Xuan Xiaomei, add chicken legs, add hamburger and coke, and increase her salary!

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Smoke lock pond willow ????

Now the starting point is making big moves,

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