Of the six people present, except for Mo Liunian and Wuji, the other four recognized these three, after all, such a peculiar combination is indeed rare.

The woman was always thirty years old, with a jujube face, delicate little eyes, red rouge painted straight into the sideburns, and a pair of large bead earrings exposed on both sides of her hair.

On the plump face, with fat powder, the body is a silk robe with big red flowers on a white background, but on the feet is a pair of narrow black embroidered shoes, white satin rolling, and a big white flower embroidered on the toe.

And the middle-aged scholar with a blue face has a clear appearance, bright eyes, and an elegant bearing.

A pair of grass shoes under his waist, a yellow silk double tassel silk at the waist, a feather fan in his hand, and a green robe, just standing there looks extraordinary.

One was dressed in a green robe, described as thin, still a middle-aged scholar, and holding a folding fan in his hand, dressed as a son, about thirty years old, with an arrogant look on his face.

What is especially impressive is his eyes - at first glance, he only feels handsome and not surprising, but a person like Xiao Banxian can see that the light of those pupils is flowing, and it is clear that Taoist cultivation has reached a very deep state.

The little half-immortal winked at Mo Yan, it would be too eye-catching if he turned around and left now, thinking that he must be careful tonight.

Unexpectedly, Ban Xianyi suddenly said, "Big brother, let's go." ”

The voice was not loud or small, and the shopkeeper happened to hear it, and the shopkeeper saw that such a big business was about to be empty in a blink of an eye, so he immediately stopped in front of Xiao Banxian: "Guest officer, are you dissatisfied with the shop?"

Ban Xianyi hurriedly said: "Of course not, it's just that there is a sudden emergency, so you have to hurry up." ”

The shopkeeper was unwilling to lose business like this: "Even if you are in a hurry, you can't stop without resting, do you want to go to the guest room and make a decision?"

Out of the corner of Xiao Banxian's eyes, he caught a glimpse of the fat woman looking this way, he didn't want to be noticed, but now this is eye-catching, so he said to the shopkeeper: "Take us to the guest room." ”

The guest room was on the second floor, and everyone walked all the way to the stairs, but they heard the old man's voice: "When did even the juniors dare to ignore us." ”

Xiao Banxian knew that he couldn't escape, so he lowered his voice and said to Mo Yan: "You guys are standing here." ”

Mo Yan nodded and said, "Be careful." ”

Xiao Banxian glanced at Banxian Yao and Banxian Yi, then took the lead and walked over, and said to the three of them: "The junior Xiao Banxian has seen three seniors. ”

These three people are the three people who are very famous in today's Gu Poison Gate, the dwarf old man is named Liu Zhongzhou, and his nickname does not leave a living mouth, Liu Zhongzhou is actually not old, he is only in his early forties, but he has been studying in poison, and he has been testing poison by himself for a long time, which makes his appearance age rapidly.

Do you have a GIF in your head when writing a fight plot?|Attached to the fight description instructions||Author's database

Author: May 6

Hello everyone.

The last fight animation science popularization got a lot of attention from everyone.

I also got some very constructive comments.

will give you unified feedback today.

First of all, it's the fight gifs collected in the past few days

Toad Gong

Squatting on the ground during the exercise, his hands bent at the shoulders, and his mouth gurgling, like a big frog in sumo wrestling.

It is the martial arts move of the Condor Heroes in the Legend of the Condor Heroes, the "Western Poison" Ouyang Feng.

I didn't find a GIF, but I guess it's like a toad.,Attacking posture.。

Single whip

It is one of the moves of Tai Chi.

Broken joints with backhand

Lateral suppression of the back knee strike

Skim and thrash

Skimming is one of the basic techniques of Chen's Taijiquan.

The handle is uplifted

One of the Tai Chi methods

Diagonal flying

One of the Tai Chi methods

After reading several text introductions of Tai Chi methods, it was cumbersome and difficult to understand, and my head hurt.

If you want to write Tai Chi, simply go to the video to explain, it will be much easier to understand, and Station B has it.

Miao searched for it, and directly searched Taijiquan is a single teaching, and there will be a two-person battle in the search Taijiquan fight.

Finger resistance to the stick

It's a type of nunchuck, a bit like when we were in middle school

Spiral flowers

One of the same nunchucks.

Iron plate bridge

The last time I didn't find the Iron Plate Bridge, a passionate faction with a super complicated name told me about the famous scene of the Iron Plate Bridge: dodging bullets in the Matrix.

Put it out for everyone to see.

Bridge

That's right, don't doubt that this action is called crossing the bridge.

But Miaomiao searched across the bridge, but could not find an explanation......

You just know that there is this action......

Eighteen palms of the dragon

The Eighteen Palms of the Dragon Descending is a martial art created by Jin Yong, and the name of the move is taken from "Zhou Yi".

That's right, it's the famous Eighteen Palms of the Dragon. No one should know this move.

This shows that if you write martial arts, fantasy or something, the name is awesome enough, and the source is mysterious, it can also be done.

How exactly are fight scenes written?

First of all, purely from the perspective of action description:

In the comment area of the last picture and text, the big guy "Foshan Liangxing" said:

Do you know what those fighting moves are like? Author's database

The movements of many factions are actually the same, such as judo, taekwondo, etc.

And the same move, different people use it, the opponent is different, and the moves will have different changes. Therefore, when we describe, we only need to explain the form and posture.

In addition: Station B searches for human weapons, there are martial arts techniques from all over the world, and you can also search for GNT somersault stunt collection and GNT leg method collection, both of which are about taekwondo Some moves, you can refer to it

(PS: The above is from the "light point dark line" enthusiastic friend proposal, thanks!)

In addition to having a moving picture in my heart (of course, if it's a fairyman, the kind of one-move confrontation depends on imagination)

It's also important to understand what you're trying to make in this fight scene.

Xiong Da answered such a question in a Q&A before: How to write a fight scene?

What do you need to conceive from inspiration to writing? A selection of weekly Q&A from the Author's Literature Club

(The first question is)

The plot of the fight is also the plot, and if it is the plot, there is the focus of the plot.

What do you want to convey in this episode?

According to the focus of the plot, it is also important to describe the emotions and psychology of the fighters and the audience.

We're not writing action scripts, and we don't need to write every action in detail.

In this regard, the enthusiastic "Friend" made a suggestion:

You can look at the corresponding movie clips for more reference.

Then, friends can watch the movies of martial arts stars such as Jackie Chan, Bruce Lee, and Donnie Yen to find inspiration.

Finally, once again, I would like to thank the friends who proposed to the author!

We've all seen your messages, and they're in a small notebook!

It's just that the energy is limited, and there is no way to complete it all for the time being, and your needs will be written later, so stay tuned!

Today's message interactive theme:

What are some of the more valuable fighting movies & fighting clips you've watched?

Come and leave a message~

We, looking forward to your answer~

The article was revised on 2019-05-06

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Ace Imperial History

I followed up with a few styles, and I was able to beat my sister. She was shocked and asked me how you know martial arts, and then I recommended the author to her. I'm practicing secretly in my room right now.

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author

If the grandmother doesn't help, she will help you

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White candlesticks

I don't think fights have to be bells and whistles, first of all, according to the style, and then according to the opposing characters.

If it's a small shrimp, there's no need for bells and whistles to be written, just one size fits all, simple and direct, but there is another kind of violent beauty.

If it's Xianxia, fantasy or the like, the characters are all responsive, you make a flying sword, I can perceive the trajectory, and immediately respond quickly, back and forth, because it comes with special effects, just describe it slightly, it may be a few hundred words.

Speaking of which, I suddenly remembered a clip I had seen earlier......

The protagonist punches out directly, and then from the trajectory of the exercises, the flow of aura, gathered on the fist, and then what effect does it bring after the strike, the audience saw the amazement inexplicably, the other party responded after seeing it, sank down and dismounted, and ran a set of bells and whistles defense means, but the final result was killed by a punch, which fully illustrates the author's skill in the number of words

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author

Hahahaha is very powerful, everyone can learn it

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Motu

I think if you really can't write the details of the fight, you can blur the action of the fight, such as a big wave of the hand, the other can't catch it for some reason, and is beaten, or blocked with a move, or dodged, or also a wave of the fighter or a punch over and collided together, and. Or simplification, such as a knife split, the tip of the knife with (Shenxing, aura, etc.), the people around feel that the person who was beaten reacts, the surrounding environment, the person who waved the knife thinks in his heart, and the final result. It's just as wonderful if it's handled well, and there won't be those details to describe the problem.

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author

Hahaha God-man

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Foshan Liangxing

I am very close to traditional martial arts, so I have a little insight. When I was reading martial arts, I saw that those moves were very handsome, and I felt that they were beautiful. When I was in high school, I was popular in writing, and in the early days, I tried to write martial arts, but I found it difficult for readers to understand when writing about fights. If you really add what you come and go, it's actually very tasteless, unless you have a very high talent for writing, ordinary people often can't see the difference between characters with martial arts and people who don't know martial arts.

Personally, I think Master Jin's way of writing is like a reference to a dance competition, the more peculiar and difficult it is, the more profound the skill, and in the end, the reader will only not understand it. I like the writing of Gu Long, the decisive thing in the competition between masters is often a flash of inspiration or surprise, in the face of mediocre hands, the master is directly seconds, and the pen and ink consumed in a fight are not in the "fight" but in the "fight". This is not only in line with reality, but also higher than reality, so many practitioners say that they prefer this way of writing.

A few more words of gossip, how to write about fighting? It is suggested that friends who have the conditions can chat with elderly traditional martial artists and young people who have practiced martial arts, and let them talk about the most proud "talker" experience in their lives. Then you try to relay it to a friend, find a way to tell it that makes it sound good, and then transcribe it into words.

I mingled with a lot of martial artists for work reasons, and I collected a lot of kung fu stories, but I rarely wrote about martial arts competitions. Because it is very wonderful to talk about things in a few sentences, it becomes boring after writing down 1,800 words. That's why I wrote that when I fight, except for important episodes, they are solved in three or two rounds. Personally, I think that today's readers will like to fight cool when they look at the picture, but when reading the text fight, they often just glance at it, and the description of martial arts that is too long and cumbersome can't bring a sense of refreshment to the reader, unless you want to set up a sense of contrast, so that the character of the martial arts is caught in seconds by the anti-heaven character like One-Punch Man.

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author

Thanks for the suggestion!

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Wait for the wind to rise

I didn't expect that in the author, I can still learn martial arts!

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author

I didn't expect that

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Dark lines of light spots

See me on the list haha, it's good, some of the human weapons have Chinese subtitles (English skills are good and you can directly watch raw meat), and a few recommended video makers who do European martial arts commentary and traditional martial arts can be found at station B, thief gunman (rope dart), dacikepucike (European sword art Southeast Asian martial arts double training and some martial arts footwork are available) , Black Creek Shrike (most of the European swordsmanship, contributed a lot of articles about European swordsmanship commentary and the Middle Ages, he himself also wrote short realistic sword fights can be flipped), Bai Yaojun (videos are mostly popular science weapon knowledge, swordsmanship move interpretation), Huan Lie Yin (move interpretation is the majority) Yanwusi Sword Club (a swordsmanship hall, there is a big guy who practices Japanese kendo, and from time to time he will send some swordsmanship move explanations)

These people all practice swordsmanship, and many videos have dry goods, if you want to write a realistic weapon fighting plot, you can take a look at these videos.

The one that crosses the bridge is called a German-style arch bridge

author

Professionals!

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Wind and snow do not stain dust

If you read the name of the move, it will look very middle-second?

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author

emmm has a little bit, but it seems that TV dramas are like this

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Water Meow (a certain Hong)

。。。 You can't be a book shortage, are you?!。。。

Look at the message you selected... Well, entrainment of bootleggies?

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author

No, it's all for everyone's good!

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Water Meow (a certain Hong)

Are you sure it's not a back fall?

Ask which martial arts enthusiast book friend can come to popularize science.

As for the question of the title ... All I can say is that I'll make up the picture in my head.,Um.。。 Dynamic. Well.. I will also add some special effects of DUANG DUANG by myself.

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author

Hahaha is wonderful

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Evening City

Jingwumen, Chen Zhen (Jet Li) vs Fumio Funakoshi (Kurata Yasuaki). Impressed.

author

get！

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duplicity

The author has everything.,But I found that there are no strategies like science fiction war.,I hope the author will come out with an issue for us to learn.

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author

How do you write this kind of emmm war sci-fi?

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Flooded

MMA out of a joint technique 1 1, strangulation 1 1, grappling 1 1, throwing 1 ... The national military is divided into categories and can produce many issues

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Schnee

It's best to be simple and easy to understand, so that readers can know that the protagonist is awesome at a glance, and too many technical terms are not easy to understand.

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Schnee

I, a female frequency writer who is good at playing, gave a thumbs up.

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Public transport pipes

If you want to talk about the material, the Japanese game "Like a Dragon" series must be on the list, very down-to-earth fights (originally a gangster brawl)

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bookworm

I just thought that I could also borrow the moves of the modified version of The King of Fighters, and what kind of fights of Street Fighter characters, or the Musou game series

author

Club!

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Tired of wandering

I'm lazy, and I usually only look at the table of contents for fights

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