Xiao Banxian watched with relish, he wanted to see how she fetched water.

Mo Liunian thought about it, squatted down, put his palms on the ice and released a true flame, almost instantly, the ice on the entire lake melted.

Mo Liunian was obviously also surprised, so frightened that she stood up and took two steps back, she looked towards the room in a panic, and was a little relieved to see that there was no one.

Xiao Banxian's eyes also changed, Mo Liunian's strength became stronger and stronger, did he do something wrong?

Mo Liunian clearly knew that there were still countless turbulent waves in front of the little half-immortal waiting for the little half-immortal to resist.

As Mo Liunian's savior, Mo Liunian knew him, understood him, and helped him.

The little half-fairy has its own established direction, Mo Liunian is either a gorgeous cloud next to the little half-fairy, or a long projection behind the little half-fairy, and the years are like water, when the floating life is getting old, is the little half-fairy still willing to take Mo Liunian with him?

In fact, time has not really healed the pain in Mo Liunian's heart, Mo Liunian just made those who thought he couldn't let go of it at the beginning become unimportant.

It's just that Mu Ruofeng is really not important to Mo Liunian?

Time and space have the power to destroy the withering and decaying, red cherries, green plantains, and how can it not be scattered and ruined by the past.

The years have passed in a hurry, and the years have become sand, and I can hold my dreams, but I can't freeze the years.

The memory is too warm, stinging tears, the time is like a river, the passing water is difficult to collect, and the place where you look back cools the old face.

It is easy to meet each other and stay together, how many people know each other all the way?

Stay in a glass of wine, red tears burn candles.

In the end, the only thing is that the flowers are flying all over the sky.

If you want a silent time, Mo Liunian kneaded his thoughts into the wind, lingering in your dreams, I am waiting for you, you will come, you don't come, I am not old.

In the flowing year like water, Mo Liunian waited for a lotus, and when the person who cherished the lotus returned from the horse, Mo Liunian had poured a whole city, just for you to come with a distress.

Say goodbye to a dream, the wind comes and a scatter, the flowers fall and people are hurt, the cold heart is difficult to warm, a farewell for decades, a dream is scattered, an autumn and a year, a goodbye.

There are too many things that can't be seen, and then some goodbyes have become the accumulation of scars, whether it is yours or not, whether it is mine or not, yes and no, and whether or not to read.

I can't see him in my heart, Mo Liunian's smile can't be next to the waiting heart, three lives are not made, and I won't see him in one life.

Why talk about your laughter, why wait for him to come, the laughter that comes can't be heard, the dream sound you see is difficult to read, the crossing is lovesickness, and the bitter thing is goodbye.

Year after year, there is no difference to Mo Liunian, it is all rushed and meaningless.

At this moment, Mo Liunian suddenly felt the ruthlessness of time, he was just a mistake, and the period of time he missed would never be made up for in the future.

If life is only as first seen, what is the autumn wind and sad fan, but the Yiren have already drifted away.

Even if you can go back to the past, you can never go back to the poetry and painting of that time, and you can never go back to the heart-to-heart sympathy of that time.

Even if Mo Liunian is reluctant and nostalgic, what can he do, but it is only to increase his sorrow, why bother, force himself like this?

Mo Liunian gave himself and gave him a happy tomorrow, isn't it?

The years turn, the mountains and rivers are far away.

This rolling red dust is too difficult to walk, and from the beginning, it is destined to be a road of no return that is difficult to turn back.

On this road, there are many invisible dark aura that will continue to devour Mo Liunian, making Mo Liunian tense all his nerves to guard against it all the time.

It seems to be real, but where you reach out, it has become empty.

It was supposed to be a dream, but when it came to the closer, it was real and tangible for people to reach.

But even if you recognize the truth and falsehood, it is also difficult to escape the changes, today's spring is like this, but in the blink of an eye, it is the autumn rain and sorrow, and the past is like smoke.

Later, winter will pass through spring, another scene, and people's hearts will look forward to it.

The little half-fairy felt as if he had opened a door that shouldn't have been opened.

At the beginning, the little half-fairy was collecting medicine in the mountains, and suddenly the stones were like rain, and the lightning and flint fell down in an instant, and the little half-fairy grabbed her waist.

Such a chaotic situation, such a critical moment, Xiao Banxian didn't remember anything at the time, but at this moment, he seemed to see it clearly, at that time, he had lowered his head and glanced at Mo Liunian.

So deep, as deep as the abyss of falling snow, the face of the little half-immortal leaning down to Mo Liunian is like jade and snow, and it is still like a smile on the lips of a flower, all kinds of hatred and resentment in the past have solidified into three inches of light, an inch of heaven, an inch of hell, she is in the middle.

Drink your favorite tea, do what you want to do, love the people you love, don't ask whether it's right or wrong, fate or disaster.

Until that day, each other is also aging in a hurry, even if they can't be together, they can keep their memories and savor them alone.

Or, forgetting each other, scattered in the dust.

The sorrow of the past, the farewell of yesterday, who understands?

Today's suffering, tomorrow's regret, who knows?

The prosperity is exhausted, the insistence is roundabout, the dream of the jade edge, when will the love be poured?

In the clear sky, the fragrant silver dew wafts, and the legends of the past circulate in the memory.

Xiao Banxian and Mo Liunian are drifting apart, and they are getting closer, on the road of love, will we be interpreting the story of Allure.

There are also entanglements on the side of the road on the other side, and there are occasional lonely drifts in the snowflakes of the years.

The years passed without a trace, and no matter how many stories the little half-immortal and Mo Liunian experienced, they all dissipated in the wind.

Ink on paper, on the other hand, accompanies the life of the little half-immortal and the endless years after Mo Liunian left the world.

Perhaps this is the so-called eternity, no matter how old the time is, as long as someone treasures, the words that have been written, and the paintings that have been depicted, will only be covered with a little dust, but will not be hidden because of the streamer.

The years are long, the dreams are also long, a lot of melancholy is speechless, and how many past events can only become eternal memories.

Time seems to have gone for a long time, stepping on the fine sand of the years to pursue those past, helplessly, the fragments of memory fell into the corridor of time, stung the fragrance of flowers in the dream, and hid the end of the story.

The obsession was born from this, and it has not been let go so far, which is fate and calamity.

Hit the dust and come, looking for mountains and waters, waiting for the flowers and branches to be full of spring, and people to go to tea and cool.

The next ten years are enough to change everything, these ten years of small and medium-sized immortals and Mo Liunian seem to have experienced a thousand disasters, and it seems that they just had a shallow dream, the sea is still the sea of the year, and it is no longer yesterday's mulberry field.

When Mo Liunian boiled the hot water and made breakfast, everyone got up one by one, and Ban Xian Yi was the first to notice the abnormality of the lake water, and he said to Ban Xian Yao: "Sister, the lake water is not frozen on such a cold day." ”

The little half-immortal glanced at Mo Liunian, Mo Liunian lowered his head to eat, and the little half-immortal said: "Maybe there is heat underground." ”

Ban Xianyi was interested when he heard it: "I don't know if there will be a hot spring." ”

Xiao Banxian smiled: "If you are interested, you can look for it." ”

After breakfast, Ban Xianyi took Ban Xian Yao and Wu Jian to build a snowman, although they are siblings, but Ban Xianyi is more like a teenager.

Half Immortal Yao only stood aside at first, but later Mo Liunian was also pulled into the team by Wuji, and Half Immortal Yao finally joined in, and in less than half an hour, four people piled up two snowmen more than one person tall.

Xiao Banxian and Mo Yan stood under the corridor and looked at the four of them, Mo Yan said: "If there were no demon clans chasing and killing, this would really be a good place to live in seclusion." ”

Xiao Banxian said: "It's not okay to live here for a long time, the small is hidden in the wilderness, and the middle is hidden in the city." ”

Mo Yan said: "Fortunately, the pure monk confiscated you as a disciple, a person like you can't break the red dust." ”

I don't know how many beginnings I read in the literary club, but the problem is really similar.

As for the friends outside the literary club, they don't know where their initial problems are, so today they will summarize a wave of common mistakes at the beginning for everyone to check.

Miao Miao flipped through all the articles related to the beginning, and found that the matter of self-examination at the beginning had already been mentioned, so today there will be a 2.0 comprehensive index version of the beginning of dry goods.

(ps: There are so many titles (fingering))

Well, the chatter is over, and the opening self-examination has officially begun!

1. Who is the main character?

1. Did the protagonist appear?

2. Can you recognize the protagonist at a glance?

3, are there many other supporting roles, do you grab the protagonist's play?

4. Will the protagonist's performance be unlikable?

5. Does the protagonist image have a sense of substitution?

Essence of the past: the image of the protagonist

Pajama Bear Talks Web Article 8: Successful characters come with their own labels

How to design the plot of the characters so that the reader will not feel fake?

Online Writing Tutorial 11: What kind of character setting can be more attractive to readers?

2. Where is the protagonist?

1. Can readers understand what kind of world this is at a glance and understand this world view simply and clearly?

2. Is there too much background setting, and there is no plot to unfold?

3. Is there no foreshadowing, and the reader has not yet understood anything, and a fierce conflict has begun?

4. How many brand-new nouns have appeared that do not exist in daily life?

Highlights of previous issues: The question of the amount of information at the beginning

Let's talk about the precautions at the beginning of the online article||Pajama Bear column

The author should be restrained in his creation, how to make the characters stand up quickly||A selection of weekly Q&A of the Xuanpai Literature Club

The disadvantages of a fight at the beginning of the new book - the review and analysis at the beginning of the new book ||Xuanpai Literary Society welfare

The speed of getting the golden finger is too slow and the plot is too long, which is not a good thing - the Xuanpai Literary Society sent friends to appreciate it at the beginning

The reason for the failure of "X-Men: Dark Phoenix" is the same as the mistake made by many newcomers to online literature at the beginning - pajamas bear rubbing hot series

3. What is the protagonist doing?

1. Is the story clearly explained, is the beginning and center clear, and does the reader understand it?

2. Can you let the reader know what type of story you are talking about, and is the theme prominent enough?

3. Is it possible to read it smoothly, is there a place where the reader stumbles and makes the reader jump the play?

4. Readers have no sense of expectation for this story, do they have the desire to read it?

5. There are no highlights in the beginning, are there any highlights in the gold finger?

6. Is the story novel?

7. Is the entry angle complicated?

4. Miscellaneous

1. Is the layout good-looking, and are there any typos or punctuation marks that are incorrect?

2. Choose a simple and straightforward title that fits the selling point.

3. Introduction is equally important!

4. Don't make common-sense mistakes.

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