"Old thief, I won't call you old thief in the future, okay? Please continue to go out of the battleship!"

"I've never found myself so interested in this way of warfare, am I destined to become the god of war in the world?"

"Ahhh

......

"Hehe, naïve. Du Ziyuan looked at these comments and smiled slightly. I know that these dead otaku change wives faster than changing clothes, and they were still asking him to return his wife's head one second ago, and this second they begged him to draw a new ship girl. I really want to draw a "I always like XXX" meme to taunt it.

But he doesn't plan to continue painting, at least in the short term. After all, there are actually only 5 more advanced warships in the organ city, and the others are all mass-produced or not so high in combat effectiveness, that is, they can't become SSRs. According to Du Ziyuan's plan, only SSR-level ship mothers will do it himself, and as for the rest, leave it to the students.

"Xiao Cui, go and help me call those students over. Du Ziyuan said to Wen Cuilong, who was practicing.

"Yes. ”

After a while, Wen Cuilong brought all 30 students to his door. In addition to the 5 family legends, the other 25 people are full of curiosity about Du Ziyuan's home. After all, this is a "holy place" that countless people want to approach but can't reach, and usually only the most favored 5 people can come over to eat with the teacher, and they are all excited to enter here today.

Du Ziyuan said to them: "A month is about the same, so that all the things you painted are finished?"

"Report to the teacher, it's all done. The five disciples replied neatly.

"Okay, let me review it, Jiang Yi, you come first. ”

"Yes, teacher. Jiang Yi took the lead in handing over his comics.

The theme he drew was "food and beverage", and the restriction was that "you can't focus on food".

This is relatively harsh, Du Ziyuan took a look at it and found that what they painted was actually a story of a little chef's struggle, which was a bit of a workplace style. Food is only secondary, and the focus is on how the protagonist adapts and survives in the "battlefield" of the kitchen.

The creativity is not bad, but the story is a little badly written, with a lot of logic bugs and forcibly creating conflicts.

This is also something that can't be helped, after all, Du Ziyuan picked some people who are good at painting, and he didn't consider writing stories at all. In this world, it's not easy to find someone who writes well?

However, the scoring still has to be scored, only listen to Du Ziyuan: "Painting: 7 points, 6 points for painting style, 5 points for storyboarding, 8 points for creativity, 1 point for plot, 50 points out of 50, and the score of your group is 27 points." ”

"27 points!" Jiang Yi's face was a little stiff, it was only just over halfway, was the teacher's grading standard too strict, or was their level too poor?

"Thank you, teacher. He took the sketch and retreated, and the students who were in his group were also a little frustrated. Especially the few people who are responsible for writing the story, this 1-point plot is too eye-catching, and it is clear that the stories they write are rubbish.

There is a saying that a person who writes a story seriously will never find out how bad his story is, and in their opinion, the story is already very good, and even if they don't get a perfect score, they should always have a score of 6. But in fact, Du Ziyuan's evaluation shattered their illusions.

"Don't worry too much about it," Du Ziyuan said, "Drawing and writing stories are two different things, some people can indeed grasp both, but it doesn't mean that you can't become a cartoonist, in fact, as long as you can do a good job in any of these two aspects, then you are a qualified cartoonist." ”

"Thank you, teacher. Being encouraged by Du Ziyuan, the tension of the students was relieved a lot.

Just like their senior sister Ning Hanlu, didn't she cooperate with Drunken Yu Gongzi (Nie Xue) to become a super-best-selling cartoonist? Now she went to Penglai Sword Sect to discuss the opening of an exclusive magazine, which is simply a winner in life.

"Xiao Ting'er, it's up to you next. Du Ziyuan said to Yun Ting.

"Okay, teacher. Yun Ting didn't call him Uncle Huang in this kind of scene, and obediently handed in his manuscript.

The subject she drew was "Detective", and there were no restrictions. It's a new genre, and it's a bit too difficult to put restrictions on.

Du Ziyuan looked at the works of this group, and the painting work is on par with Jiang Yi's group, but the storyboard is much better, it seems that their group has a talent with a good sense of picture. Looking at the story again, sure enough, it still can't escape the framework of "The Great Detective", it's nothing more than that several suspects have motives, and then gradually find evidence to find the real murderer by elimination.

Du Ziyuan hopes that the students can work the technique, but obviously they have not done this: "Painting: 7 points, 6 points for painting style, 7 points for storyboarding, 5 points for creativity, 3 points for plot, and the score of your group is 28 points." ”

"Thank you, teacher. Although I feel that the score is a bit low, with Jiang Yi's group of 27 points in front, Yun Ting is not much disappointed.

When the second group is finished, everyone can basically see that Du Ziyuan's scoring criteria are probably in this range. Gu Xiaowei, the third person to step forward, was not so nervous.

Her theme is "music", and the restriction is that "you can't focus on singing, writing songs, and playing". It's a bit embarrassing, after all, what can you do without drawing these?

However, Gu Xiaowei's group is more spiritual, they actually drew a conservatory, and then directly began to tell the story of the students in the academy. Because these students all have musical dreams and are talented in certain fields, the theme of music is satisfying, but the focus is on the friendship and love between the students.

"Good. Finally saw a group that satisfied him, Du Ziyuan was not stingy, and directly praised it. This made the 6 people in Gu Xiaowei's group very happy.

"Artistry: 6 points, 5 points for painting style, 5 points for storyboarding, 8 points for creativity, 7 points for plot, your group's score is 31 points. ”

However, the actual score was not as high as expected. Although they got a good score on the plot, there was something wrong with the art style and storyboard. There are a few areas where there is a noticeable incoherence that makes it seem fascinating.

"Thank you, teacher. Although the score is not high, after all, it is the tentative first, and Gu Xiaowei is not much disappointed.

Next it was her brother's turn to see Komisha.

His theme is "killers", and the restriction is "no one can die".

The themes given by Du Ziyuan are all strange, and there is a feeling of deliberately making things difficult. But in fact, it is not blind, because each theme actually corresponds to a work that he has prepared.