Komisa's group draws a hilarious manga in which the protagonist is a killer who never kills anyone. Each of his missions would fail for one reason or another, making a lot of jokes.

As far as the story is concerned, this is the best Du Ziyuan has seen in the four groups. After all, it is a funny comic, and it doesn't need to be polished logically, and sometimes it doesn't seem to be common sense but adds a funny factor.

However, like his sister, Furumi Sa is still lacking in painting and storyboarding. Is it because they separated their brother and sister? Du Ziyuan always felt that they shouldn't have only this bit of strength.

"Artistry: 6 points, 4 points for painting style, 6 points for storyboarding, 7 points for creativity, 8 points for plot, and the score of your group is 31 points. ”

The brother and sister had the same score, which also made Furumi Sha breathe a sigh of relief.

It was Cheyenne's turn to be the last. She's a "virtual game" with the restriction that "you can't use Glory".

Truth be told, this group is the hardest. After all, virtual games have only appeared in the fairy world, and Du Ziyuan is not allowed to draw "Glory", so they can only create a new game by themselves, which is not easy. And you have to think about the plot, which is even more difficult.

Xia An trotted and handed over the sketch to Du Ziyuan, and Du Ziyuan's face changed after reading the first page.

The game designed by Cheyenne's group is a military war theme, that is, the two sides act as soldiers and generals in the virtual game, and then conquer, annex, and conquer cities. Overall, the creativity is a bit lacking, because it is equivalent to directly adding a game background to the real-life war story.

The difference between game warfare and real warfare is not well expressed. For example, in war games, there may be resource points that produce minerals at regular intervals, but their comics do not have this setting.

However, what surprised Du Ziyuan was not the story of their group, but the painting. To be honest, Du Ziyuan really didn't expect that Xia An was actually the strongest among the five family legends, and it was a little too strong.

"Artistry: 8 points, 7 points for painting style, 9 points for storyboarding, 4 points for creativity, 5 points for plot, your group's score is 33 points, congratulations, you won the first place. ”

When Du Ziyuan announced the final results, the six members of the Cheyenne group couldn't help but cheer.

"Oh!

"Did I hear me right?

"Haha! It's worth the month!"

......

In contrast, the other groups were a bit lost. Especially Jiang Yi, they actually came to the bottom this time, which made Jiang Yi, who has always regarded himself as a senior brother and is absolutely confident in his own strength, a little unacceptable.

He walked over to Du Ziyuan and said, "Teacher, can you show me their paintings?"

"Take it. Du Ziyuan handed him the sketch of the Xia An group.

Yun Ting and the others also came up, wanting to see what the painting of the first place was.

A stack of drawings was divided into pages, and almost every 24 people could get one or two. Du Ziyuan's score is very clear, the story of the Xia An group is actually relatively poor, and the really powerful thing is the storyboard with a score of 9 and the painting with a score of 8. These are the places where talent is tested the most.

When they saw Xia An's works, the disbelief on Jiang Yi's face gradually subsided, and the Gu family brothers and sisters also showed a dignified look. The gap is so obvious that you can feel it clearly even by looking at just one page. The most optimistic is probably Yun Ting, she is really simply appreciating the comics, when she sees the work of the Cheyenne group, she does not hesitate to praise: "Wow! The painting looks so good! It's much better than mine." ”

Cheyenne said modestly: "This is the result of everyone's joint efforts." ”

Du Ziyuan just smiled at this and was noncommittal. Although this time it's a group of 6 people, the 5 biographies are obviously the core of each group, and the style of the work is basically determined by them, and the other 5 people are more in the position of assistants.

Du Ziyuan knocked on the table and motioned for everyone to pay attention: "Okay, the evaluation is over, I don't say I'm very satisfied with your performance this time, but at least I'm not too disappointed, I believe you have also seen it, among the 30 of you, there are only a few who can really write stories, and they are not particularly good, although this problem can be solved by finding a partner in the future, but at least you must have a certain ability to distinguish between the good and bad of the story, otherwise it will not be fun to be pitted by a bad writer." ”

"Painting skills, what you need to hone now is still painting skills, it's best to be able to form your own unique style of painting, don't blindly imitate me, my painting style is also changing, you can't finish learning, it won't be easy to use, it's best to find that style in painting again and again, as for storyboards, I suggest you go and see more excellent spiritual shadows, spiritual TV dramas, pay attention to avoid bad movies, look at people's use of lenses, when and from what angle is the best, there is quite a lot of knowledge in this. ”

"Okay, I won't talk nonsense, now let's announce the reward for the first place. ”

The members of Cheyenne's group immediately became excited, and the others also looked at Du Ziyuan curiously. Isn't it true that the reward for first place is a serialization opportunity on "Shingetsu Comics"?

I only heard Du Ziyuan say: "Your ability to tell stories is really poor, so I decided to provide you with a copy of the original story, the comics will be launched in the name of our cooperation, I am the original, you are the painting." ”

"What!" everyone thought they had misheard. Teacher Shanfeng is willing to co-sign with them!? This reward is too big!

You know, even if Du Ziyuan doesn't do anything, just hanging his pen name on a comic, he can bring unimaginable attention, and these attention is converted into sales, and its data is quite terrifying.

What's more, Du Ziyuan also has to provide them with the original story to make up for their biggest weakness. Even if they will be divided into merit because of the joint signature, they can still distinguish between 100% of merit and 50% of 100 merit.

The remaining 24 students, including Jiang Yi, all cast envious glances at the Xia An group.

Seeing this, Du Ziyuan smiled and said: "Don't be envious, now I give you a task, and if you complete it well, I will also give you the same reward, but it is better to say that I have already prepared these 5 rewards for you, it depends on when you have the ability to take it." ”

"Really!?" The students immediately became commotioned, the benefits of being a disciple of the mountain wind were really too great!

Du Ziyuan then looked at the Xia An group: "So, since the theme you drew is 'game', then the original case I want to give you next is ......"

"Sword Art Online. ”