¤ Song Bixue's Book Review:

It's time to post a book review, Rayara, and I'll post a book review suggestion and add a little foreshadowing. The current foreshadowing can be seen: 1. The truth of the adventure of the awakening;2. Ju Ying's identity (which should be equivalent to being revealed); 3. The truth of the Poyang Lake incident, 4. The master who helped them in the night. A little less. And we take Zhu Xian as an example, the secrets of having a relationship with Xiao Fan are: 1. Buddha and Tao Shuangxiu, 2. Bloodthirsty Beads, 3. xx stick (what is it called?), 4. Water Qilin, 5. Zhu Xian Ancient Sword.

It can't be regarded as all foreshadowing, but something that leaves room for the reader's imagination, such as the water unicorn, the Zhuxian Ancient Sword is to make the reader think about it, (in fact, Buddhism and Taoism are also double xiu and burning sticks) This thing should probably be called a "hook". Zhu Xian hooked a lot of hooks to the protagonist at the beginning, which is a very mature approach, and you here, only the adventure is a hook, and the Poyang Lake incident is just a suspense, but there is no room for imagination There should be more hooks This thing may be a bit yy, but the story of Heaven and Dragon Slayer is also written like this Song Ruxue

Positive Pingchao's reply:

To like snow mm: That's very good, in my future ideas, I will pay more attention to adding some in-depth hooks;Please believe me, YY, is gradually unfolding;Although the pursuit of peace and humor, it does not mean that the protagonist's tossing movement is not big enough - Ju Ying's identity is an example;I believe that the protagonist's good luck will not end here, or just a small fight :)

¤ Life is a wriggling book review

In fact, I personally believe that it is best not to be disturbed by too many external factors when it comes to writing ideas. What is your initial plan, as long as you don't deviate too much in the writing process, it's best not to change it, otherwise, it is easy to cause a style inconsistency.

Positive Pingchao's reply:

The next few events will remain in the style of the two events in the second half of the first volume. Of course, maybe it's inevitable that the protagonist is a little better than before, after all, he needs to grow. I will try to interpret it with a civilian point of view and style. After all, the protagonist I don't agree with in Jin Yong's novel is Zhang Wuji, and later completely relied on personal force and the popularity of his subordinates to fight the world, although Mr. Jin Yong's skills are profound, so I still like this book very much......

¤ A book review of Cold Moon Incense

Anyway, I don't want the hero to have a lot of mm:(But the current articles seem to be like this......

Positive Pingchao's reply:

to.. Cold moon incense.. MM: :) from a girl's point of view, I can understand your thoughts, but for the work, if monogamy is strictly adhered to, many readers may get tired of it, and it doesn't seem to be conducive to the variability of the text. However, I will try to describe it as naturally as possible, and there will never be the self-deception of 1 man and n woman in the relationship between men and women. The color of the soul is better than the upside-down clothes. Scold~~~

¤ Kicking Bird Book Review :

Shangqing Palace was built in the Eastern Han Dynasty, which was originally the place where Zhang Daoling cultivated, and was called "Heavenly Master Thatched Cottage". At the end of the Han Dynasty, Zhang Sheng, the fourth-generation celestial master, moved back to Longhu Mountain from Hanzhong, and changed the "Heavenly Master Thatched Cottage" to the "Legend Altar"; During the auspicious period of the Northern Song Dynasty, Zhenzong changed the Qing Dynasty. In the third year of Zhenghe (1118 AD), the name of Shangqing Zhengyi Palace, referred to as Shangqing Palace, Da Shangqing Palace. "There are often thousands of people who learn the Tao in the palace", and it has become "a country of people who are always bright and feather day and night". It is regarded as a "holy place" by Taoists.

The Taoist Sanqing patriarchs Taiqing, Shangqing and Yuqing, namely Yuan Shi Tianzun, Lingbao Tianzun and Daode Tianzun. Generally, Taoist temples with the names of Sanqing, Taiqing, etc., are all from the Sanqing patriarch. Because I think Guan Dawen's explanation of the origin of the name of the Shangqing Palace is a bit inappropriate, and the Shangqing Palace is from the Heavenly Master School of Longhu Mountain, not in Luofu Mountain.

Positive Pingchao's reply:

Hehe, thank you for the information provided by the Kick Bird Book Friends, it is very helpful to me, and I will adjust the previous rhetoric when I am free, and strive to justify myself.

Note: This is now self-justifying. It should also be noted that this book is not a historical novel, but a legend of Xianxia, so it will not be too entangled in historical details. Of course, if there are too many discrepancies and affect the plot, I hope book friends will not hesitate to point it out - because Pingchao's book is not a historical fiction that reverses time and space.

¤ maxhc

It's still funny at the beginning, but the next few chapters are all poems and the like, please update it early to help the festival?

Positive Pingchao's reply:

to Maxhc: Hehe, I was startled when I saw it, but after a while, I realized that you were referring to "sprinkling gold notes"; The outer volume includes: sprinkled gold paper, Zhenlong Pavilion, and flower basket. Well, even though it is serialized on the Internet, even if the outer volume is not brilliant, as a supplement, Pingchao still wants to build this structure. :)btw, at the beginning of the next chapter, there will be a fairly interesting thing, waiting for the awakening.

¤ Life is in peristalsis

I remember my brother said that the motive for writing the book was to entertain himself, not to seek the sake of rice. If piracy can discourage your writing, then maybe it's a departure from the original idea, isn't it?

Positive Pingchao's reply:

Well, that's a good point, after I learned about piracy the day before yesterday, I quickly deleted this sentence. If you don't seek for Daoliang, you don't seek Daoliang for these pirates. Although it is my hobby, it is very hard to save words and rack my brains to think about ideas, and it doesn't matter if I entertain myself or entertain my book friends, but it really feels bad for someone to use their hard work to seek commercial benefits, and I really don't know who I am working for and who I am busy for. Writing is actually very moody, and it is a very beautiful thing, but it ...... It's like a bone in my throat - it seems that my cultivation is not enough. ^_^ I hope all these bad things will pass soon.

¤ Young children and old people

Welcome the second heroine to play.,But don't let it go like some novels are female male protagonists.。

Positive Pingchao's reply:

Hehe, it won't. The heroine who writes with emotion will never be a cat or a dog casually. I think in my book, there will be not very pretty, or beautiful supporting actresses - the supporting characters don't have to be male, and women don't have to be beautiful as long as they are young, as long as they are beautiful...... Target. : )

¤ Life is in peristalsis

My wife watched "African Fairy Tales" two days ago and was still talking about it, people's fairy tales, water can speak, dust has thoughts, cheetahs and tigers can be wives if they rob beautiful women, and they don't need to transform, what a simple concept of equality of all things. Hehe, the stool can be used as a monster, which reminds me of many treasure mimics in the game. Don't discriminate against youkai, please, please!

Positive Pingchao's reply:

Hehe, there is no intention of discriminating against the stool demon, on the contrary, he is still a little cute at the beginning - maybe this is why everyone sympathizes with him a little; I have made some thoughts based on some Taoist classics, and try to make the skill of Xingyan secretly in line with the way of heaven - about this, I will explain it slowly in the future, don't worry. :) on the contrary, please rest assured that this book will not simply treat monsters as the object of leveling - that is indeed mentally retarded, however, the so-called equality of all things, people, some can love, some can be cut, monsters, there are also some can love, some can be cut. Simply treating monsters as objects of hatred and PK is relatively low-level and mentally retarded; all things are spiritual, better, which is also advocated in many books; but as far as I'm concerned, just like ladies first, although monsters need to be in love, but some of them are evil, you might as well chop them down - otherwise, what chance do you have to be happy with revenge - just cutting people? It may be a bit monotonous. Everything is still the fault of my delicate plot (= slow progress).,Maybe it's easy for book friends to see some of my settings at once.。。。 :)

¤ Life is in peristalsis

Looks like I'm going to have to change my name to something a little bit more stinky, and now it's always reminiscent of gut, caterpillar, or anything like that. Or the name of Brother Guan has a new meaning. Ask a question: In each chapter, does Brother Guan conceive it in one go, or do I think of the general plot as I do, and then play it as I like? I feel that I am writing it slowly, and I am really squirming......

Positive Pingchao's reply:

Usually I conceive the following plots and then realize them. In fact, when I started writing with an automatic pen, I conceived the basic plot of about two volumes or more, and then it was up to me to see how good my pen was. However, occasionally I will suddenly think of some episodes, and I will add them to make the plot fuller;And the idea is only approximate,When the specific realization is realized,A lot of details will be added,Make the plot more three-dimensional;Some unplanned characters will also be added,Make the plot more vibrant;If the original idea is incompatible with the development of the plot,I will also reluctantly cut love~ It can be said that the advancement of the story grows with the writing process,I don't know much about what happens in the next moment,Just let it be.。 It's my writing process, I just don't know how effective it is.

¤ Cold moon incense

This chapter is few and mediocre, don't hit me, I'll run around myself.

Positive Pingchao's reply:

Hehe, that's true, but as far as the story is concerned, the so-called ups and downs, ups and downs, and ups and downs, are unlikely to be tense all the time, which is a big test for both the author and the reader. Of course, for online serialization, it may be normal for you to have this kind of thought, because you don't read the whole story in one go, you will always hope that the chapters of the day in the serial will look good~ I used to think that there were too many H plots in "*", and from time to time there was a monotonous and repetitive boudoir flirtation, and it was a little annoying to watch too much - now from the author's point of view, I understand... btw, one possible reason why these sections don't look very cool - lack of women~ By the way, thank you Brother SPangPang, your support is so strong and powerful.

¤ Cold moon incense

I know, in fact, I just gave advice to another book two days ago, and his book is so fast that people who read it can't hold their breath. But your chapter is too flat and too few :) It would be nice if it could be a little longer to set the stage for the rest of the story.

Positive Pingchao's reply:

In fact, there is a little foreshadowing... See below. :) btw, in order to give the big guys a general idea of the future plot development, maybe the relevant content of some of the later scenes will be released in advance. Pipe flat tide

¤ sdfsdfsdfsdf

Ribs can be broken, but money bags cannot be lost; it is well said, such a thing as not dying for money! There are really people who can do it; in fact, why bother to put on such an uncomfortable posture, can't you strangle the neck of the awakening, and hold the money bag with both hands?

Positive Pingchao's reply:

Hehe, the latter sentence is also quite reasonable, but after thinking about it, strangled Xingyan's neck, he may have to lie on his back completely, the posture is more ugly, and he has a wound in the chest, so he may have to let go a little. :)

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