Xiao Xu read Qingyue's masterpiece for the second time, the first time at the starting point, this time at the beginning, I felt that I had to say something, the place where I read the book changed, the way changed, and the mood changed.

The first time I saw Qingyue's work, I looked at the flowers and flowers, ten lines at a glance, and I was embarrassed to say three words: I didn't understand

Why? Probably except for the prologue in which the wind and snow, the swordsman, and the ronin left a deep impression on Xiao Xu, and after reading more than a dozen chapters, I didn't even see who the protagonist was?

This time, Xiao Xu read it carefully from the beginning, Qingyue's writing is beautiful, the pen is good, and the scenery and things are described in detail to make people feel immersive, this kind of real prose style makes Xiao Xu feel excited, and even feels that the plot and characters are slightly blurred.

Xiao Xu and Qingyue are old friends, and if you say a little pertinent evaluation, Qingyue won't mind, haha!

From the reader's point of view, the frequent switching of character scenes, and the foreshadowing at the beginning are too unclear about the main line, which is Xiao Xu's true feeling after reading through the first volume, Qingyue might as well think carefully from the reader's point of view.

Xiao Xu wrote a book at the starting point, but he had no choice but to write a subject that he had never read, and he had no choice but to write about it.

Think about the martial arts world that once wrote about my heart, but now I have lost this enthusiasm, not because I don't love martial arts, but because it is difficult to find a soulmate.

Hey!! I finally landed for a while, and I was speechless after leaving a word, shame on me!

Turn off the computer, go to sleep, Xiao Xu said in class tomorrow, woo~~

(The level is not enough, not enough apprentices, and not allowed to express love, what is the situation, discrimination ~~~ embarrassment)

- by Jedi Chen619

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Trees move the dead and people move alive - the book of Qingqing moved here from the starting point, it seems to be a different scene, aside from the so-called various magic horse data, just the readers of all kinds of books are already very gratifying, the book does not need to be too popular to meet a few real readers is a great luck!

Qingqing and I are old acquaintances, and I have always wanted to put a few words in her book area, but I can't put down the pen for a long time, and I pick it up and put it down several times, not lazy, but more afraid to get an axe! The polishing of Qingqing's words, the shaping of characters, and the design of the plot are beyond my reach, especially the rendering of artistic conception, which has reached the extreme, and few people can come out of the right on this alone!

The rendering of artistic conception is not only the description of the scenery, but also the emotions expressed through the scenery, including the color of the article and the preferences of the characters, as well as the author's heart.

In fact, I think the first few chapters are the most brilliant!

The talent of the little woman to write the theme of martial arts is really a waste!

In the words of a family, don't add to the top.

- by Guoxing

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Okay, Qingyue, I have to say, first of all, I have collected the book, and I like your masterpiece. Aha, I have to sigh first, I can't catch up with you in terms of text, I also thought about some martial arts plots and ideas some time ago, and I always felt that something was missing, and I tried to write a little, but I was very dissatisfied, so I decided not to write martial arts. But after reading your article, I found the missing taste, although I always feel that I can't write it, but yours I have to praise it, it's beautiful!!It's really beautiful, from the character expressions, the description of the environment, it's all beautiful, the beauty of the rivers and lakes and the beauty of all beings in the world! I like the description of the expression of the blacksmith shop in the wedge the most, let me see the loneliness and drifting behind the heart of a strong man, the environment is written very elegantly, faintly, is like a paintbrush outlining the grievances and hatreds in the world, delicate but elegant, elegant and heroic, heroic and heroic. I'm going to keep reading it, and I'm going to write it well! By the way, you can also review my book when you have time, and I hope to see it...... I'm really looking forward to it......

- By dreams, there is no loneliness

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I'm a little pocket.,Read 8 chapters in one breath.,To be honest, I don't like martial arts novels.,But when I read the first chapter.,It's really brought into the picture by a lot of pen power.,I have to say,I've read so many novels at present.,The big writing makes me admire.。 Maybe it's the details of the picture and the author's own literary background, but it's much slower to read this book than anything else. In terms of the processing of details, I really think it's super bullish, super detailed, just at the beginning, that kind of picture sense appeared in front of my eyes, the man in black, the blacksmith, I can almost think of their appearance and posture, and then the volume gives me a real feeling of rivers and lakes, the surface is plain, but the inside is turbulent. Whenever the white dove appears, I seem to be able to hear the voice, and I feel the feeling, as if this is called writing a novel, giving people a different feeling, which may be the ability to control. I really didn't expect a female author to write such a magnificent scene. The sword light and sword shadow, the time is like an arrow, and the arrogance is soaring, it is really a martial arts river. The text is received, come on, I will continue to read it.

- by Little Pocket

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Everyone loves the remnant sword of the ronin, and I love the ups and downs.

At the beginning, the remnant sword of the ronin attracted several people's amazement, and I finished reading it calmly, but I loved the ups and downs of the first chapter even more.

Leaving aside the connection issue between the two chapters.

I like the white pigeon in the first chapter so much, and I can't hide it from myself, when I was reading it, I thought of pigeon poop very vulgarly, and I really sweated for myself at that time.

Okay, then I'm going to talk about the Iron Bucket Formation, this Formation is good, although I have some doubts that it is not to cater to the line of the Rice Bucket Formation...

I thought that the martial arts without fight scenes were very dry. However, it seems that this is not the case, and it is acceptable, so I can still watch it.

I left a lot of chapters unread, and I read the first five chapters and the West Wind Jue.

There are a few suggestions that Mao Mao said, and there is one that I deeply believe is the character portrayal.

Sister Qingyue, when I read the text, I felt that the difference between the first few characters was only the name difference, and nothing else.

In the case of martial arts, it may be distinguished by special behaviors and personalities.

For example, in "Kunlun", there is a Jiuru monk, who eats wine and meat, also known as the wine and meat monk, and everyone remembers it as soon as he remembers it.

For example, Zhou Botong, also known as the old naughty boy, is also very easy to remember and easy to recall.

In martial arts, the portrayal of the characters is very particular, unlike ordinary novels, vulgar urban literature only needs to be handsome and well-dressed, and everyone knows that it is a handsome guy with a beautiful woman. But martial arts is the opposite, and chivalry is distinguished by character, manners, martial arts, and even specific personal belongings.

Therefore, Sister Qingyue wants to find a book, like JJ, to determine the characteristics of the character, he has done it too perfectly, and even what constellation the character is.... We don't have to.

In this article, I don't have any objection to the connection problem, the only shortcoming is the character portrayal.

Seventy-seven

2012/11/12